2019-2020学年高中英语 Unit 15 Learning Section Ⅶ Writing

SectionⅦWriting—事物描写[写作技法指导]事物描写文属于说明文范畴。要求写作目的明确，实事求是，把介绍的对象说明白。写作时，层次要分明，安排要合理，过渡要自然，语言要简练，用词要准确，使人们对被说明的人或事物有一个清楚、完整的认识和了解。事物描写类文章属于描写文的范畴，描写事物通常采用一般现在时态。介绍事物时要注意以下几点：1．要考虑好描写的视角和次序。视角，就是我们通常所讲的人称，用第一和第三人称都可以。描写次序是指先写什么后写什么的问题。一般来讲，英语描写文是按空间顺序来写的。2．要选择重点部位或内容来写。无论描写什么景物都不可能面面俱到，故要选择最能体现事物特征的几个方面作详细描述。3．要选好主题，突出主题，用细节来烘托主题。发挥想象力，从不同的方面描写景物的特征，把它活灵活现地呈现在读者的面前，唤起读者的想象和情感共鸣。4．具体写作时要注意的细节：(1)文章的组织要有层次顺序，避免忽东忽西，杂乱无章。(2)充分利用、正确选用形容词和副词，以达到引人入胜、生动直观的效果。(3)尽量使用简单常用的词语和单句，少用或不用复杂冗长的复合句，以避免出错。(4)描写一般使用动词的现在时态。积“黄金”词句，写高分文章1．(Itis)Located/Situatedatthebackof/intheeastof...2．Itcoversanareaof...3．Theoldbuildingis20yearsold/datesbackto/datesfrom...4．Intheeastof/Eastoftheoldbuildingis/lies...5．Itplaysanimportantrole/partinourlife...6．Itreallymakesourschoolbeautiful...[三步写作规范][题目要求]你所在的学校为了进一步提高办学质量，在全校开展了题为《我理想中的学校》的征文活动，请结合你校的现状和你理想中的学校写一篇个人随笔。词数100左右。第一步：搜索词汇1．高度评价2．在某种程度上3．除了……(还有)4．对……有影响5．有可能/机会……6．另一方面speakhighlyof;thinkhighlyoftoacertainextent;tosomedegree;insomewayasidefrom;apartfrom;besideshaveaneffectonhaveaccessto;belikelytodoontheotherhand7．专心于；致力于8．缺乏9．课外知识10．适应11．就个人而言12．不但……而且……beburiedin;bedevotedto；beoccupiedinlack;beshortof;belackinginextra­curricularknowledgeadaptto;fitintopersonallyspeaking;inone'sopinionnotonly...butalso...第二步：由词造句1．我们学校在某种程度上受到学生、家长的高度评价，但我感觉还有需要改进的地方。①Ourschoolbystudentsandparents,butIthink.②ourschoolbystudentsandparents,Istillthink.isthoughthighlyoftoacertainextentthereshouldbesomethingtobeimprovedWhileisspokenhighlyoftosomedegreeitshouldbebetterinmanyways2．如果我们能多种些树，多呼吸新鲜空气，这样会更好。①weplantmoretrees,and,itwillbebetter.②willbenefitusalot.3．我们就像是处理作业的机器，每天沉浸于无尽的作业中。①Weendlesshomework,andweweremachinesforit.②Wetheendlesshomeworkweweremachinesforit.IfhaveaccesstomorefreshairPlantingmoretreesandhavingaccesstomorefreshairareburiedinitseemsasifareoccupiedinasif4．我们缺乏社会经验，所以我希望学校开放阅览室，从而我们可以获取更多课外知识，以更好地适应发展的社会。①Wesocialexperience,soIhopethatthereadingroomwillandwecanlearnmoretothedevelopingsocietybetter.②weexperience,Ihopethereadingroomwillwecanlearnmorethedevelopingsocietybetter.lackbeopentousextra­curriculaextra­curricularadaptAsarelackinginsocialbeopensothatextra­curricularknowledgesoastoadaptto第三步：连句成篇MyidealschoolWhileourschoolisthoughthighlyofbystudentsandparentstosomedegree,Istillthinkitshouldbebetterinmanyways.Theschoolliesinthecitycentre.Thoughitisconvenientforustogotoschool,theairispollutedapartfromtoomuchnoise,whichhasabadeffectonourhealthandstudies.Ifweplantmoretrees,andhaveaccesstomorefreshair,itwillbebetter.Allourteachersarestrictwithusinourstudies,sotheyoftenleaveustoomuchhomework.Butweareoccupiedintheendlesshomeworkasifweweremachinesforit.SoIwishIcouldhavefreetimeandtakepartinsomeafter­classactivitiessothatwecanrelaxourselves.Aswearelackinginsocialexperience,Ihopethereadingroomwillbeopensothatwecanlearnmoreextra­curricularknowledgesoastoadapttothedevelopingsocietybetter.Personallyspeaking,attentionshouldbepaidtonotonlyincreasingourknowledgebutalsodevelopingourability.Ifwestudiedinsuchanidealschool,wewouldhaveabrighterfuture.