2019-2020学年高中英语 Unit 7 The Sea 7-6 Writing课件 北师大版必

Unit7TheSeaWriting如何写景点观光(报告)[感悟范文]假定你是李华，你的美国朋友Sarah打算暑期来北京旅游，来信询问改建后前门大街的情况。请你写封回信，简单介绍以下内容：(1)简况：长800余米、600多年历史、300余家商铺；(2)位置：天安门广场南面；(3)交通：公共汽车17、69、59等路，地铁2号线；(4)特色：步行街、当当车、茶馆、剧院等。参考词汇：步行街pedestrianstreet当当车trolleycar地铁subway注意：(1)词数100左右，开头语已为你写好；(2)可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。DearSarah，ThankyouforyourletteraskingabouttherebuiltQianmenStreet.Hereissomethingaboutit.____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours，LiHua[范文]Dear_Sarah，Thank_you_for_your_letter_asking_about_the_rebuilt_Qianmen_Street._Here_is_something_about_it.QianmenStreetisafamousstreetofover600years.①Alongthis800meterstreet,therearemorethan300shops.②AsthestreetisinthecenterofBeijing,justtothesouthofTian'anmenSquare,it'sveryconvenienttogettherebybus.YoumaytakeBusesNo.17，69or59.SubwayLine2hasastoptheretoo.③QianmenStreetisapedestrianstreet,buttherearetrolleycarstotakeyounotonlytotheshops,butalsototheatresandteahouseswhereyoucanexperienceatrulyChinesewayoflife.I'msureyou'lllikeit.Yours，Li_Hua[技法讨论]景点观光报告的写作可按以下步骤进行：1．依照报告的题头格式，写出报告的收件人和发件人，报告日期和写作主题。2．正文一般由以下四部分组成：①总体介绍该景点的基本情况，如：所处位置以及面积大小等；②介绍该景点好的方面；③指出该景点所存在的问题；④最后得出结论，总结说明该景点哪些地方值得游览，哪些地方不值得游览，并提出注意事项。[黄金表达]1．总体方面①...issituated/locatedin/on/at...②...belongstothefirstclasspreservedarea.2．优点方面①Ithasconvenienttransportationandbeautifulviews.②...awonderfulandsplendidlandscapewithaculturalheritage.③...afeastforyoureyesandtakesyourbreathaway.3．存在问题方面①...heavytrafficandcrowdedpeopleinpeakseasonwithlongqueuesandlittleparkinglot...②...restaurantorcaféoffersexpensiveandterriblefood.4．总结概括①Itisagreatplacetogoandyouaresuretoendupenjoyingyourself.②Pleasegoto...,especiallytosee...;howeverdon'tgoto...[亮点分析]亮点一：本文作者行文流畅，表达地道，词汇丰富，句式多变，衔接自然，语气亲切可信，语言准确而有依据。亮点二：本文使用了①therebe句型；③定语从句，简单句与复合句交替使用，使文章显得错落有致，这点不仅使文章在形式上增加了美感，而且使文章读起来朗朗上口。亮点三：本文恰当使用了②inthecenterof，tothesouthof，beconvenient，③notonly...butalso，atrulyChinesewayoflife等短语，提升了文章档次。[类文演练]假设你是一名导游，陪同某外国旅游团参观八达岭长城。车到达长城脚下，下车前你对大家作必要的介绍和交代。主要包括：1.简单介绍八达岭长城(长城已被评选为世界新七大奇迹之一，八达岭长城是万里长城最著名的一段，已接待中外游人逾千万)；2．在长城逗留两个半小时，17∶50离开；3．车在长城脚下等候，记住车号，准时返回；4．贵重物品随身携带，下车前关上车窗；5．祝大家玩得愉快。注意：1.必须包括以上所有的内容要点，但不要逐句翻译；2．词数：100个左右。HereistheGreatWall.__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________[联想词汇]1．众所周知______________________________2．世界新七大奇迹之一______________________________3．到目前为止______________________________________4．数以百万的______________________________________5．两个半小时______________________________________6．也就是说________________________________________7．下车____________________________________________8．玩得愉快________________________________________答案1.itisknowntousthat/asisknowntousall2.oneoftheNewSevenWondersoftheWorld3.sofar/uptonow4.millionsof5.twohoursandahalf/twoandahalfhours6.thatistosay/inotherwords7.getoff8.haveagoodtime[连词成句]1.众所周知，八达岭是长城最著名的一段，长城已成为世界新七大奇迹之一。________，BadalingisthemostfamouspartoftheGreatWall，whichhasbecomeoneoftheNewSevenWondersoftheWorld.________BadalingisthemostfamouspartoftheGreatWall,whichhasbecomeoneoftheNewSevenWondersoftheWorld.________BadalingisthemostfamouspartoftheGreatWall,whichhasbecomeoneoftheNewSevenWondersoftheWorld.2．到目前为止，已经有数百万的游客游览了长城。________，millionsofvisitorshavevisitedtheGreatWall.________，tensofthousandsofvisitorshavevisitedtheGreatWall.3．也就是说，我们要在17∶50离开。________，we'llleaveat17∶50.________，we'llleaveat17∶50.4．请随身携带贵重物品，在下车前关闭所有的窗户。Pleasetakeyourvaluableswithyouand________．Pleasetakeyourvaluableswithyouand________．答案1.Asisknowntousall;Itisknowntousallthat;Whatisknowntousallisthat2.Sofar;Uptonow3.Thatistosay;Inotherwords4.closeallthewindowsbeforegettingoff;makesureallthewindowsareclosedbeforeyougetoff[连句成章]________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________答案Here_is_the_Great_Wall.Asisknowntousall,Badalingisthemostfamouspartofit,whichhasbecomeoneoftheNewSevenWondersoftheWorld.Sofar,millionsofvisitorshavevisitedit.We'llstayherefortwohoursandahalf.Thatistosay,we'llleaveat17∶50.ThebuswillbewaitingforusatthefootoftheGreatWall.Pleaserememberourbusnumberandbebackontime.Pleasetakeyourvaluableswithyouandcloseallthewindowsbeforegettingoff.Haveagoodtime!