2019-2020学年高中英语 Unit 5 First aid Section Ⅴ Writing

SectionⅤWriting—急救[写作技法指导]本单元的写作任务为介绍急救措施，为指导性说明文，该类说明文旨在为读者提供解决问题的方法及具体步骤。其基本结构：第一部分：对要说明的现象或事物作简单介绍，引出主题。第二部分：按照一定的顺序对要说明的现象或事物进行客观描述。第三部分：简要总结全文。积“黄金”词句，写高分文章一、常用的开头语1．Weshouldcheckwhethershe/heisconsciousornot.我们应当检查他/她是否清醒。2．Ifapersonstopsbreathing,youmuststarthisbreathingatonce,如果某人停止呼吸，你必须立即进行人工呼吸使他恢复呼吸。3．Ifapersonispoisonedbythegas,openthedoorsandwindowstoletthefreshairin.若某人煤气中毒，开门窗，通风换气。4．Ifsomeonehaseatenordrunkpoisonbymistake,takehimandthepoisontohospitalatonce.若有人误吃或误喝有毒食品，带着病人和毒品立即去医院。(if引导的条件状语从句；祈使句)5．Ifapersonisbleedingbadly,pressacleanhandkerchieforapieceofclothonthebleedingpointandholditthere.若某人大出血，用块干净手帕或布压在出血点，按住不放。二、主体部分常用表达1．Closehisnosewithyourfingersandbreatheintohismouthuntilhebeginstobreatheagain.用手指捏住他的鼻子，口对口吹气，直到他恢复呼吸。2．Usethemouth­to­mouthmethodwithinfiveminutes.在五分钟内进行人工呼吸。3．Don'tmovehimorher—leavehim/herwherehe/sheis.不要搬动他(她)，让他(她)待在原地。4．Coverthewoundwithabandageorapieceofdrycleancloth.用绷带或一块干净的干布把伤口包扎起来。5．Washthewoundwithcoldrunningwater.用凉自来水冲洗伤口。6．Pleasecall120forambulanceatonce.请立即拨打120叫救护车。三、常用的结束语Thereisnodoubtthatweshouldknowsomeknowledgeoffirstaid.毫无疑问我们应知道一些急救方面的知识。[三步写作规范][题目要求]请根据以下提示写一篇80词左右的短文，简要介绍一下对遇到心脏病等疾病突发(seizure)病人应该采取什么样的措施。题目：FirstAidforSeizures急救过程中的注意事项：1．把附近的危险物体移开以免病人受到伤害；不要移动病人，除非他们处于危险中。2．把病人的头部用垫子垫起来。等病发结束后帮助病人呼吸。3．在病人没有完全恢复之前不要给他任何吃的或喝的东西，等病人完全恢复以后再离开。4．如果病情发作持续5分钟以上，打电话叫救护车。第一步：对接单元词汇1．许多2．生病3．紧急的4．有所影响；起作用5．急救anumberoffallillurgentmakeadifferencefirstaid第二步：巧用单元语法和句型1．日常生活中，我们有时遇到几种这样的情况：人们患有心脏病或者突然生病。①Wesometimescomeacrossanumberofcasesinourdailylife.peoplesufferfromheartattacksortheyfallillsuddenly.②Inourdailylife,wesometimescomeacrosspeoplesufferfromheartattacksortheyfallillsuddenly.Inthesecasesanumberofcaseswhere2．毫无疑问我们应知道一些急救方面的知识。①Weshouldknowsomeknowledgeoffirstaid.it.②weshouldknowsomeknowledgeoffirstaid.3．不要移动病人，除非他们处于危险中。①Don'ttrytomovethepersonheisn'tindanger.②Don'ttrytomovethepersonheisindanger.ThereisnodoubtaboutThereisnodoubtthatifunless4．在病人没有完全恢复之前不要给他任何吃的或喝的东西。①,youshouldn'tgivethepersonanythingtoeatordrink.②Don'tgivethepersonanythingtoeatordrink.Beforeheisfullyrecovereduntilheisfullyrecovered第三步：连接过渡成篇FirstAidforSeizuresInourdailylife,wesometimescomeacrossanumberofcaseswherepeoplesufferfromheartattacksortheyfallillsuddenly.Sothereisnodoubtthatweshouldknowsomeknowledgeoffirstaid.Thefollowingaresometipswecanfollowtohelpthesepeopleonurgentoccasions.Firstly,removeobjectsfromnearbytoprotecttheperson'sinjury.Don'ttrytomovethepersonunlessheisindanger.Secondly,cushionhisheadandaidbreathingbygentlyplacinghimintherecoverypositiononcetheseizurehasfinished.Thirdly,don'tgivethepersonanythingtoeatordrinkuntilheisfullyrecoveredandstaywiththepersonuntilrecoveryiscomplete.Iftheseizurecontinuesformorethanfiveminutes,callanambulanceimmediately.Ireallyhopethetipsabovewillmakeadifferencetoyou.谢谢观看