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Unit3TraveljournalSectionⅤWriting——电子邮件写作技法指导[文体指导]电子邮件(electronicmail,常缩写为Email,email或email)指通过互联网传递的邮件,即用户之间通过互联网发出或收到的信息,是目前互联网上应用最广泛的一种服务。1.“邮件头”信息栏的填写一般情况下,表头需要填写的地方有两个:“收件人”(如:Tom198201@163.com)和“主题”(如:QuestionsontheEnglisheveningclass)。2.正文电子邮件的正文部分通常由称呼、正文、结束语及署名四部分构成。(1)称呼:一般在收件人姓氏前加上Dear。(2)正文:正文是邮件的主体部分,是写信人要谈论或陈述的内容。正文内容要求简洁达意,层次分明。(3)结束语:常见的结束语有:Iamlookingforwardtoyourreply/answer.Withbestregards.Iwishyougoodluck/everysuccessin...等。有时这部分也可省略。(4)署名:写在正文右下角的位置。[亮点句式]1.常用的开头语①表示高兴:Iwassoglad/pleased/happytoreceiveyouremail.②表示感谢:Thankyouforyourwonderfulgift/interestingemail.③表示关心与询问:Howareyoudoingthesedays?Howareyougettingonthesedays?Howareyougettingonwithyourwork/studies?④表示抱歉:IamsorrythatIdidnotwritetoyousoonbutIhavebeenverybusythesedays.⑤表示遗憾:Iamsorrytolearnthatyoudidnotpasstheexamination.Iamsoupsettohearthatyouareillthesedays.Idohopeyouarefeelingbetter.2.常用的结束语①Iamlookingforwardtohearingfromyousoon.②Pleasegiveyourfamilymyregards.③Takegoodcareofyourselfandkeepintouch.满分佳作构建[写作任务]假如你是李华,你的朋友Tom5月22日来信询问你毕业前的一次旅游经历。请你根据下面提示给他回一封100个词左右的电子邮件。1.由学生会组织,日期定在上个周末。2.一部分人愿意乘公交车;另一部分人喜欢步行;最后大家被说服骑自行车。3.美丽的风景让人难以忘怀:山谷中蝴蝶飞舞,鲜花遍地盛开,空气呼吸起来让人感到舒服,同学们迫不及待地融入大自然中。4.感受:尽管爬山很累,但是正是这次旅游增进了同学们的友谊,提高了我们关心自然环境的意识。5.打算:毕业后去看望Tom。[审题谋篇]体裁电子邮件话题旅游时态一般过去时人称第一人称结构首段:介绍本次旅游的组织及交通方式中段:大自然的魅力给我们的感受尾段:本次旅游使我们受益匪浅[遣词造句]Ⅰ.对接单元词汇1.安排在……2.喜欢做……3.喜欢……4.被说服做……5.迫不及待做……6.关心careaboutbescheduledforprefertodo...befondofbepersuadedtodo...can't/couldn'twaittodo...Ⅱ.巧用单元句式、语法(一)完成句子1.这次旅游组织的如此好以至于我们每个人都玩得非常高兴。Thetripwasorganizedwellallofusenjoyedourselves.2.那儿的空气呼吸起来让人感到舒服。Theairthere.3.我们迫不及待地融入大自然中。Wewalkintonature.couldn'twaittosothatwaspleasanttobreathe4.旅游增进了我们的友谊,提高了我们关心自然环境的意识。(用强调句式强调thetrip)_________________________________________________________________________________________.5.我毕业后将会去看你。IyouafterIgraduate.Itwasthetripthatimprovedourfriendshipandraisedourawarenesstocareabouttheenvironment.amgoingtovisit(二)句式升级1.ThetripwasorganizedbyourStudents'Unionandthetripwasscheduledforlastweekend.(使用非谓语)→ourStudents'Union,thetripwasscheduledforlastweekend.2.Someofuspreferredtotakeabus.Otherswerefondofwalking.Finally,wewerepersuadedtocycle.(使用并列句)→Someofuspreferredtotakeabusotherswerefondofwalking,finallywewerepersuadedtocycle.andOrganizedbywhile[妙笔成篇]【参考范文】DearTom,HowhappyIamtoreceiveyourletterofMay22.NowIwilltellyousomethingaboutthetrip.OrganizedbyourStudents'Union,thetripwasscheduledforlastweekend.Someofuspreferredtotakeabuswhileotherswerefondofwalking,andfinallywewerepersuadedtocycle.Thetripwasorganizedsowellthatweallenjoyedourselves.Whenwegotthere,weweregreatlyimpressedbyitsbeautifulview.Allkindsofbutterflieswereflyingfreelyinthevalley,theentiremountainwascoveredwithbeautifulflowers,andtheairtherewaspleasanttobreathe;asaresult,wecouldn'twaittowalkintonature.Thoughweweretired,itwasthetripthatimprovedourfriendshipandraisedourawarenesstocareabouttheenvironment.Bytheway,IamgoingtovisityouafterIgraduate.Bestwishes.LiHua
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