2019-2020学年高中英语 Unit 3 Tomorrow’s world Section Ⅶ

Unit3Tomorrow’sworldSectionⅦWriting——建议信写作技法指导[文体指导]本单元的写作任务是建议信。建议信是英语中常见的一种应用文体，就是在你所写的信中发表你的建议与看法。建议信除了遵循书信的格式之外，还要求在信中针对对方的问题，给出你的观点及解决办法。一、基本结构建议信一般采取“三段式结构”。首段：表明意图，陈述事由。主体段：应该首先肯定对方的优点，然后再写需要改进的地方或针对具体情况提出具体建议或忠告。通常以firstly，secondly，thirdly或tobegin/startwith，then，later，lastbutnotleast等依次陈述建议。结尾段：礼貌地总结或表示期盼回复。二、注意事项1．注意结构。通常以“三段式”结构行文。2．客观地提出建议，针对对方的问题，给出你的观点。3．语言要委婉、精炼，同时要简洁，表达清楚。[亮点句式]1．首段(表明写作意图，陈述事由)常用句型Itismypleasuretoofferyousomeadviceon...Iamwritingtoexpressmyviewsconcerning...Youhaveaskedformyadviceon...andIwilltrytomakesomesuggestions.2．主体(提出建议并阐述理由)常用句型Iwouldliketosuggest/recommendthat...IfIwereyou，Iwould...Itseemstomethatyoucould...Inmyopinion，itwouldbewisetotakethefollowingaction.Ithinkitwouldbemorebeneficialifyoucould...Whenitcomestosuchasituation，Iwouldliketosuggestthatyoucan...Iwonderifyouhaveconsideredthefollowing.Asto...Isuggestthatyoushould...3．结尾(鼓励收信人接受建议)常用句型Intheend，Iwillbeverygladifyoufindmysuggestionsuseful.Thanksforreadingmyletter.Ihopeyouwillconsidermysuggestions.Ibelieveyouwilltakemyadviceintoaccount/consideration.Ihopeyouwillfindtheseproposals/suggestionspractical/useful/helpful.Pleaseletmeknowwithouthesitationifyouneedanyhelp.满分佳作构建[写作任务]假定你是李华，你的朋友张柯发e­mail给你，就买什么样的英语词典想听听你的建议。请根据下列提示，用英语给他回一封100词左右的e­mail，建议他买电子词典。1．方便、快捷；2．内置多部词典、能发音；3．能储存资料。参考词汇：电子词典electronicdictionary；内存RAM[审题谋篇]体裁建议信时态一般将来时；一般现在时主题建议买电子词典人称第二人称结构首段：提出建议——买电子词典；中间段：给出建议的理由：方便、快捷、能发音、能存储资料；末段：希望采纳该建议。[遣词造句]Ⅰ.对接单元词汇1．提出2．电子的3．导致，促成4．方便的5．偶遇，发现6．优点，长处putforwardelectronicleadtoconvenientcomeacrossadvantageⅡ.巧用单元句式、语法(一)完成句子1．对你来说，买一本电子词典是一个明智的选择。(Itis＋n．＋forsb.todosth.)2．有几个因素促成了我的建议。(therebe；which引导的定语从句)Itisawisechoiceforyoutobuyanelectronicdictionary.Thereareseveralfactorswhichleadtomysuggestion.3．在电子词典中，你会非常快地得到你所想要的。(what引导的宾语从句)4．查阅这种词典很容易。(动名词短语作主语；习语apieceofcake)Youcangetwhatyouwantintheelectronicdictionaryassoonaspossible.Consultingthiskindofdictionaryisreallyapieceofcake.5．当遇到有用的材料时，你可以尽可能多地储存下来。(when引导的时间状语从句)6．它能够给你生动、清晰和正确的发音，就像一位老师站在你的旁边。(主语＋谓语＋宾语；like)Whenyonmeetwiththeusefulmaterial，youcanstoreitasmuchaspossible.Itcangiveyouavivid，clearandcorrectpronunciationjustlikeateacherstandingbyyou.7．这让它从众多的其他词典中脱颖而出。(makeitoutstanding)Thatmakesitoutstandingfromavarietyofothers.(二)句式升级8．用现在分词短语作定语改写句29．用for合并句3、410．用状语从句的省略形式改写句5Thereareseveralfactorsleadingtomysuggestion.Youcangetwhatyouwantintheelectronicdictionaryassoonaspossible，forconsultingthiskindofdictionaryisreallyapieceofcake.Whenmeetingwiththeusefulmaterial，youcanstoreitasmuchaspossible.[妙笔成篇]【参考范文】DearZhangKe，Asfortheproblemyouputforwardinyourlastletter，Ithinkitisawisechoiceforyoutobuyanelectronicdictionary.Thereareseveralfactorsleadingtomysuggestion.Tobeginwith，withtheelectronicdictionarybeingmuchsmallerthanthecommonone，itisconvenientforyoutocarryitwherevergoing.Additionally，youcangetwhatyouwantintheelectronicdictionaryassoonaspossible，forconsultingthiskindofdictionaryisreallyapieceofcake.Whencomingacrosstheusefulmaterial，youcanstoreitasmuchaspossiblebecausethereismuchRAMinit.Whatmakesitoutstandingfromavarietyofothers，Ithink，isthatitcangiveyouavivid，clearandcorrectpronunciationjustlikeateacherstandingbyyou.Sincetherearesomanyadvantages，whynotbuyone?Idohopemysuggestionswillbeusefultoyou.Yours，LiHua