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SectionⅤWriting—建议信[写作技法指导]一般而言,建议信属于半开放性作文,大多要求我们根据所给的材料给出有针对性的解决办法或者提出合理建议。写作时要注意:1.建议信的语言(1)建议信就是在你所写的信中发表你的建议与看法。建议信除要遵循书信的格式之外,还要求在信中针对别人的问题,给出你的观点及解决办法。因此,陈述建议的语言必须中肯,在劝说对方接受自己的建议时,应该特别注意措辞。(2)陈述建议必须具有说服性:在向对方表明你的建议时,如果对方觉得你的建议是违背常理的,那么你的建议也就失去了意义。所以,要想提出好建议,必须具有充分的理由,展示出自己独特的见解。(3)此外,要“设身处地”,可适当运用虚拟句“ifIwereyou...”表述自己的建议。2.建议信的结构建议信一般采取“三段式结构”,通常以firstly,secondly,thirdly或tobeginwith,then,later等依次陈述建议。(1)首段:表明写作意图,陈述事由,简单介绍自己的观点,注意语气。(2)主体段落:应该首先肯定对方的优点,然后再写需要改进的地方或针对具体情况提出具体建议或忠告。(3)结尾段:对提出的建议进行总结,要注意表达方式,使对方容易接受。积“黄金”词句,写高分文章1.建议信的开头常用句式①Iamwritingtoexpressmyviewsconcerning...②Youhaveaskedmeformyadviceon...andIwilltrytomakesomesuggestions.③Thanksfortrustingme.Regarding...,I'dliketomakesomesuggestions.2.表达建议的常用句式①Ifeelthatitwouldbebeneficialif...②Iwouldliketosuggestthat...③Iwouldrecommendthat...④IfIwereyou,Iwould...⑤Youmayconsiderdoing...⑥Itwouldseemtomethatyoucould...⑦Asyoumayagreethat...⑧AsfarasIamconcerned.../Inmyopinion.../Asforme...3.建议信的结尾常用句式①Ihopeyouwillfindtheseproposals/suggestions/recommendationspractical/useful/helpful.②Iwouldbereadytodiscussthismatterinfurtherdetails.③Iwillbemorethanhappytoseeimprovementsinthismatter.④Shouldyouhaveanymoreproblems,pleasefeelfreetocontactmeatanytime.⑤I'mwillingtodiscussthismatterwithyouwheneveryouneed.[三步写作规范][题目要求]假如你是某中学的学生李华,请你给校委员会写一封信,就开办艺术画廊给出自己的建议及理由,内容包括:1.建议开办一个校园艺术画廊,展示在校学生自己的作品;2.画廊可以给学生提供一个展示自我的平台,开阔学生的视野,传播校园文化。注意:1.词数80左右;2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;3.尽可能运用本单元所学的词汇、句型和语法。第一步对接单元词汇1.委员会2.画廊3.(对某人)有吸引力4.特别喜欢5.展览__________6.采纳;采用committeeappealtohaveapreferenceforgalleryexhibitionadopt第二步巧用单元语法和句型1.如果你们向喜欢艺术的学生提供这样一个机会,我相信这个艺术展览一定会很成功。①Ifyou_____,Ibelievetheartexhibitionwillworkoutwell.②用虚拟语气改写Ifyousuchanopportunitytothestudentswhoarefondofart,Ibelievetheartexhibition.2.如果我的建议能被采纳我将非常高兴。Iifmysuggestioncouldbeadopted.offersuchanopportunitytothestudentswhoarefondofartweretoofferwouldbemorethanhappywouldworkoutwellDearCommitteemembers,Iwishtomakeasuggestionaboutstartingaschoolartgallery,whichIthinkwillappealtoanumberofstudentsinourschool.Therearemanystudentswhohaveapreferenceforpaintinginourschool.Theschoolartgallerycanprovidethesestudentswithaverygoodplatformtodisplaytheirownpaintings,andthroughtheartgallery,otherstudentsmaynotonlygetachancetoadmiretheartisticachievementsandthedevelopmentofschoolculturebutalsocanwidentheirknowledge.Ifyouweretooffersuchanopportunitytothestudentswhoarefondofart,Ibelievetheartexhibitionwouldworkoutwell.Iwouldbemorethanhappyifmysuggestioncouldbeadopted.Yoursfaithfully,LiHua第三步尝试用单元所学知识联句成篇
本文标题:2019-2020学年高中英语 Unit 1 Art Section Ⅴ Writing — 建议信
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