2019-2020学年高中英语 Module 2 The Renaissance Section Ⅴ

SectionⅤWriting—英文日记[写作技法指导]日记常用来记述自己一天生活中所发生的有意义的事情或用来抒发自己对当天某些事情的感受等。要写好英文日记，需要注意以下几点：1．格式要正确。英文日记与中文日记写法大致相同，都是在正文之前依次注明日期、星期几及当天的天气情况。2．文体要口语化。因为日记是写给自己看的，其内容多是记述自己亲身经历的事或抒发自己的感情等，所以用第一人称写，文体也不必过于正式。3．时态多用过去时态。但当表示习惯性动作、客观事实、普遍真理、名言或谚语时，可以使用一般现在时；当发表自己的感想、打算、期望或决心时，可以使用一般将来时。积“黄金”词句，写高分文章1．Althoughtired,Ihadthemostexcitingdayinmylife.2．Wehadsuchagoodtimethatwedidn'trealizeitwaslate.3．Ihopeitwon'tbelongbeforewehaveanotherchancetogettogether.4．Wesawdifferentkindsofcrops,allofwhichgrewwell.5．MrYangtoldusthattechnologyplayedaveryimportantpartinmodernagriculture.6．Todaywetookatriptothe...withourclassmatesand...7．Wesetoutbybikeat...andittookus...hourstogettothe...8．Whiletraveling,wenoticedsomepeople...andwethoughtthiskindofbehaviourshouldbeforbiddensothatwecould...[三步写作规范][题目要求]你班于昨天(周六)组织同学们去海边游玩。请你根据以下提示内容，写一篇英语日记，记述这次游玩的过程。1．游玩地点：海边2．出行方式：乘坐校车3．过程：(1)早上八点从学校出发(2)一小时后到达海边(3)拍照；玩沙子(4)乘坐游船去猴岛看猴子(5)海边吃午饭，下午5点开始返回注意：1.词数100左右；2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。第一步搜索词汇1．去旅行___________2．出发______3．尖叫_______4．返回_________goonatripsetoutscreamheadback第二步由词造句1．完成句子①我们乘坐游船去猴岛看猴子。WeMonkeyIslandtoseethemonkeys.②这是最激动人心的事。Thiswas.③我们用香蕉喂它们。Webananas.④这让它们很高兴。This.tookacruiseshiptothemostexcitingthingfedthemwithmadethemveryhappy2．句式升级⑤用表语从句连接①②句_________________________________________________________________________________⑥用定语从句连接③④句___________________________________________________ThemostexcitingthingwasthatwetookacruiseshiptoMonkeyIslandtoseethemonkeys.Wefedthemwithbananas,whichmadethemveryhappy.第三步连句成篇SaturdayMay7SunnyIwentonatriptotheseasidetodaywithmyclassmatesandteachers.Wesetoutateighto'clockfromourschoolbyschoolbusandwegottotheseasideonehourlater.Assoonaswegotoffthebus,westartedtoscreamwithgreatexcitement.Someofustookphotos;othersplayedwiththesandonthebeach.ThemostexcitingthingwasthatwetookacruiseshiptoMonkeyIslandtoseethemonkeys.Wefedthemwithbananas,whichmadethemveryhappy.Weenjoyedourlunchbytheseasideandtheseabreezewasverycool.Weheadedbackatfiveintheafternoon.Whatagreatday！Ihopesuchtripsshouldbearrangedregularlybecausetheycanhelpstudentsrelax.谢谢观看