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第六讲书面表达第一节常用应用文写作七、求助信母题探究栏目导航题组集训【写作方法】1.求助信多以自我介绍为开头,然后点明写信的目的;2.陈述需要哪方面的帮助或者自己遇到的问题;3.恳求对方给予帮助。【写作模板】Dear________,Mynameis__________(自我介绍).I'mwritingalettertoyoutoaskforsomehelp.Ihavemetdifficultyin__________(求助内容).First,Ifind_________(困难1).Besides,________(困难2).What'smore,________(困难3).Facedwithsomanydifficulties,Ihavetoaskyouforsomehelp.Wouldyouliketo_________(委婉提出请求)?Inthemeanwhile,Ibegyouto__________(请求内容)sothat_________(请求目的).I'msurethatIcanmakegreatprogressin________(表达期待).Yours,LiHua【必备佳句】1.Iamwritingtoaskyoutodomeafavor.Ihavesomedifficultiesindoing…whichbothersmealot.SoIhavenochoicebuttoturntoyouforhelp.我写信向你求助。我在做……方面有一些困难,这很困扰我。所以我别无选择只能向你求助。2.I'meagertogetyourtimelyhelp./I'meagerforyourtimelyhelp.我渴望得到你及时的帮助。3.Facing/Facedwithsomanydifficulties,Ihavetoturntoyouforhelp.面对如此多的困难,我不得不向你求助。4.Iwillbeverygratefulifyoucouldhelpme…/Iwouldappreciateitifyoucoulddomeafavorand…如果你能帮助我……我会非常感激。(2016·高考全国新课标卷Ⅰ)假定你是李华,暑假想去一家外贸公司兼职,已写好申请书和个人简历(resume)。给外教Ms.Jenkins写信,请她帮你修改所附材料的文字和格式(format)。注意:1.词数100左右;2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________本文是一封求助信。本文写作要点有:简单介绍自己、解释写信的缘由;说明写信的目的(修改文字和格式);告之所附材料在哪里;表示感谢。因是向老师求助,要注意措辞委婉、礼貌。开放性很强,给考生留下了很大的自主发挥的空间,可适当增加必要的细节,充实内容。【范文赏析】DearMs.Jenkins,IamLiHua.Iamwritingtotellyousomethingaboutmyplanforthecomingsummervacationand①Ialsowantyoutodomeafavor.②Inordertogetsomepracticalexperience,Iamplanningtotakeaparttimejobinaforeigncapitalcompany.Ihavealreadyfinishedmyjobapplicationandpersonalresume.But③thisisthefirsttimethatIhavewrittenanapplicationandthepersonalresume,Idon'tevenknow④ifthereissomethingtopayattentionto.So,I'mwritingyoutheletter,⑤hopingyoucangivemesomehelp.Iwillbeverygratefulifyoucanhelpme.Lookingforwardtoyourreply.AndI'dbereallythankful.Yours,LiHuaA(2019·郑州一中高三摸底测试)假定你是李华,你的家乡剪纸艺术负有盛名,你写了一篇英文宣传稿,想请外籍教师Bob帮助润色。请根据提示,用英语给Bob写一封求助信。内容包括:1.求助事由;2.求助内容;3.表达感激。注意:1.词数100左右;2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【参考范文】DearBob,I'mwritinginthehopethatyouwillbekindenoughtodomeafavor.Whenitcomestopapercutting,thereisnodenyingthatitenjoysagreatreputationinmyhometown.ForalongtimeIhavebeenlongingtowriteanappealingarticletomakeitbetterknown.However,onlywhenIputtheideaintopracticedidIfindthatmyEnglishisfarfromsatisfaction.AsfarasI'mconcerned,youhaveagoodcommandofwrittenEnglish,whichimpressesmealot.Wouldyouliketodomeafavortohavemydraftpolished?Iwillpayyouavisitatyourearliestconvenience.Iwouldappreciateitifyoucouldtakemyrequestintoconsideration.Yours,LiHuaB假定你是高中生李华,你们学校要在3月10日举办英语配音比赛(dubbingcontest)。你想参赛,但是不知道该选什么电影。你给笔友Peter写一封邮件,请他给你推荐一部电影。内容包括:1.主题是关于友谊;2.时间限定在4到5分钟;3.每个节目最多6个角色。注意:1.词数100左右;2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,LiHua【参考范文】DearPeter,Howiseverythinggoing?Iamwritingtoyou,hopingtoseekforhelp.OurschoolwillholdanEnglishdubbingcontestonMarch10th.Iameagertohaveatry.However,Idon'tknowwhichfilmissuitable.Asamoviefan,wouldyoubesokindastogivemesomerecommendations?Accordingtotherequirements,thethemeshouldbeaboutfriendship.Andeachvideomaylast4to5minutes.What'smore,thereshouldnotbemorethansixcharactersineachvideo.Iwouldreallyappreciateitifyoucoulddomethefavor.Lookingforwardtoyourreply.Yours,LiHua
本文标题:(新课标)2020高考英语二轮总复习 第六讲 书面表达 第一节 常用应用文写作 6.1.7 求助信课
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