（新课标）2019-2020学年高中英语 Unit 3 Under the sea Section

Unit3UndertheseaSectionⅤWriting——投诉信写作技法指导[文体指导]投诉信也叫抱怨信，是投诉者因对所购买的某种商品或某项服务不能达到自己的要求而向有关部门或个人写的正式信件。在信中要写出自己的不满意之处，也可提供一些解决方案，希望相关部门或个人采取一定的合理措施帮助解决。一、基本结构投诉信一般分为三个部分：1．开头段提出投诉内容。说明与收件人的关系，点出写作的意图。2．主体段说明具体情况。写明投诉的原因、问题的经过及产生的后果。3．结束段提出解决办法。表达希望上述问题得到尽快解决的强烈愿望，对于有关人员做出的努力表示感谢，并希望尽快得到满意的答复。二、注意事项投诉信与普通书信格式一样，但要注意的是写投诉信是为了解决问题，因此写信时一定要态度诚恳、礼貌委婉。[亮点句式]1．投诉信的开头常用句式Iamwritingtoyoutocomplainabout...Iamwritingtoexpressmydissatisfactionwith...I'msorrytobotheryoubut...2．投诉信的主体常用句式Therearesomeproblemswith...thatIwishtobringyourattentionto.Icanhardlybear/tolerate/putupwithitanymore.It'snotwhatIhopedfor.I'mnotatallsatisfiedwith...here.I'mreallyveryannoyedaboutit.3．投诉信的结尾常用句式Ihopethatyouwillconsidermysuggestionsand...Ihopeyoucangivemeasatisfyingreplyanddealwiththismatterreasonably.Iwillappreciateyourwillingnesstomakeupfortheloss.Iwouldappreciateitifyoucandealwiththismatterintime.满分佳作构建[写作任务]假如你是李华，请你根据以下提示向国际野生动物组织写一封词数100左右的投诉信，反映非法捕猎海洋生物的现象。1．非法捕猎海洋生物越来越严重；2．五年来非法捕猎鲸鱼导致它的数量急剧减少；3．如果得不到阻止，我们将失掉家园。[审题谋篇]体裁投诉信时态以一般现在时为主主题非法捕猎海洋生物人称以第一、二人称为主结构第一段：点明意图——海洋非法捕猎严重，鲸鱼数目锐减第二段：表述原因——保护海洋的重要性第三段：具体要求——认真对待，防止再次发生[遣词造句]Ⅰ.对接单元词汇1．______n．目标2．_____adj.急剧的；锐利的3．_______vt.当场见到；目击4．____________阻止；防止5．__________思考6．___________明白；意识到……targetsharpwitnessstop/preventreflectonbeawareofⅡ.巧用单元句式、语法(一)完成句子1．在过去的五年中鲸鱼的数目急剧减少。Thenumberofthewhale_____________________inthepastfiveyears.2．在全世界范围内鲸鱼成为非法捕猎的主要目标。Thewhalehasbeen___________________________________inthewholeworld.hassharplydecreasedthemaintargetoftheillegalhunt3．一旦生态平衡遭到破坏，我们将遭受很多灾难。Oncethebalanceofnature____________，wewillsufferalot.4．曾经有段时间我们没有意识到植物的重要性。Therewasatime_________________________theimportanceofplants.5．我们希望现在你能认真考虑这件事。Wehopethatyouwillnow______________________seriously.isdestroyedwhenwewerenotawareofreflectonthismatter(二)句式升级6．先用动词witness改写句子1，然后用because合并句子1、2_________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Thepastfiveyearshaswitnessedthesharpdecreaseofthewhalebecauseithasbeenthemaintargetoftheillegalhuntinthewholeworld.7．用独立主格结构改写句子3___________________________________________________8．用do强调谓语动词改写句子5___________________________________________________Thebalanceofnaturedestroyed，wewillsufferalot.Wedohopethatyouwillnowreflectonthismatterseriously.[妙笔成篇]____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【参考范文】DearSirorMadam，Iamwritingtocomplainthattheillegalhuntforoceancreaturesisbecomingworseandworse.Thepastfiveyearshaswitnessedthesharpdecreaseofthewhalebecauseithasbeenthemaintargetoftheillegalhuntinthewholeworld.Thebalanceofnaturedestroyed，wewillsufferalot.Therewasatimewhenwewerenotawareoftheimportanceofplants，andthendroughtandfloodwenthandinhand.Ifwedidnotstoptheillegalhuntintheocean，wewouldloseourhome.Wedohopethatyouwillnowreflectonthismatterseriouslyandmakeanefforttopreventtherecurrenceofthiskind.Yours，LiHua