（江苏专用）2021版新高考英语一轮复习 层级3 篇章结构 第1讲 合理恰当的细节添加课件 牛津译林

层级三篇章结构第1讲合理恰当的细节添加小试寻盲点身手根据括号内的提示完成句子1．However,itseemsthatpeoplearenotawareofthenegativeeffectsofmobilephonesoncommunication._____________________________________________________________________(比如，很多人越来越不重视面对面的交流)．2．Atthatmoment,Ibecamethefocusofthewholeclassand____________________________________(充满了自豪和自信)．Forexample,manypeoplebegintopaylessattentiontofacetofacecommunicationwasfullofgreatprideandconfidence3．IsuggestthattheteachershouldchoosemoreEnglishfilms,___________________________________________(这样就使得我们的英语学习更加有趣)．4．___________(如果可能的话),I'lltakepartinsocialactivities__________________________________________(以便我能更多地了解这个社会)．thusmakingEnglishlearningmoreinterestingIfpossiblesothatIcanknowmoreaboutthesociety5．IalsohelpedchildrenintheneighborhoodwiththeirEnglishlessons.______________________________________________________________________(令我高兴的是，他们进步很快而且他们的父母对我评价很高)．6．Let'sdevelopgoodhabitsofsavingenergyinourdailylifeand_________________________________________________(尽力为我们的环境做出更多贡献)．Tomyjoy,theymaderapidprogressandtheirparentsthoughthighlyofmetrytomakemorecontributionstoourenvironment要点求正解精析在书面表达的“注意”中有明确规定：1.词数80左右；2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。这里既规定了词数，又指出了充实文章的方法，即“适当增加细节”。适当添加细节的具体方法如下：1．列举具体的实例进行补充说明①我要花一些时间和父母在一起。I'llspendsometimestayingwithmyparents.→I'llspendsometimestayingwithmyparents,chattingwiththemanddoingsomehousework.②我看到了一些不良行为。Ifoundsomebadbehaviours.→Ifoundsomebadbehaviours.Somepeoplescribbledonthewall;someplayedonthelawnandsomethrewrubbisheverywhere.③我是一个充满活力的健康男孩，我非常喜欢体育运动。IamahealthyboyfullofenergyandIlikesportsverymuch.→IamahealthyboyfullofenergyandIlikesportsverymuch.WheneverIhavetime,I'llgohikingormountainclimbingwithmyclassmates.2．增添相关的神态、动作、心理描写以及背景渲染等内容①我有时去村西的小河游泳。Iwentswimmingintheriverinthewestofthevillagenowandthen.→Weatherpermitting,Iwentswimmingintheriverinthewestofthevillagenowandthen,inwhichthewaterwasveryclear.②旅行了一周后，他回到了家。Afteraweek'strip,hereturnedhome.→Afteraweek'strip,hereturnedhome,tiredbuthappy.3．增添相关的原因、结果、条件、让步、手段、目的等内容①我需要好好休息，我要做些阅读。Ineedagoodrest.I'lldosomereading.→IneedagoodrestbecauseIdofeeltiredafterthehardworkofalltheseyears.I'lldosomereadingforfun,aswellasforknowledge.②慈善募集的钱将送给急需的人。Themoneyraisedforcharitywillbesenttothoseingreatneed.→Themoneyraisedforcharitywillbesenttothoseingreatneed.Thiswillnotonlyhelpthemthroughdifficulties,butalsogivethemwarmthandhappiness.③演讲时要面带微笑；要讲慢些，讲清楚。Youshouldwearasmileonyourfacewhenyouspeak.Besides,remembertospeakslowlyandclearly.→Youshouldwearasmileonyourfacewhenyouspeak,whichwillmakeyourelaxed.Besides,remembertospeakslowlyandclearlysothatyoucanleaveagoodimpressionontheaudienceandjudges.4．结尾适当发挥，写出个人感受、评价、愿望、倡议等①AlthoughIwasverytiredthissummerholidays,IfeltveryhappyforwhatIdid.(个人感受)尽管我这个暑假很累，但是我为我做的感到高兴。②Ithinksuchactivitiesarenecessaryandmeaningful.(评价)我认为这样的活动很有必要也很有意义。③Isincerelyhopemyadvicecanbehelpfultoyouandthatyoucanenjoyyournewschoollife.(愿望)我衷心希望我的建议能够对你有所帮助，你能够享受你在新学校的生活。④Asastudent,it'sourdutytoprotectourschoolenvironmentandmakeitclean.(倡议)作为一个学生，保护我们校园的环境并使之干净是我们的职责。语篇提考能演练根据提示，给下列短文增添合理恰当的细节假设你是李华，你的美国网友Peter打算到中国留学，他写信询问怎样才能受到中国高校的青睐。请你根据下列要点给对方写一封回信：1．语言是道硬门槛；2．适应能力很重要；3．兴趣爱好被看重。注意：1.词数80左右；2．开头语和结束语已为你写好，不计入总词数。DearPeter，InyourletteryoumentionedhowtogetthepreferenceofChineseuniversities.Ibelievetherewouldbethreemainaspectstobeconsidered.Firstly,masteringChineseisabasicneedtoliveinChina.1._____________________________________________________________________________________________(有了这种能力，你与当地Withthisability,youcancommunicatewithnativespeakerseasilyandhaveaccesstomanyresources人交流就会很容易，而且还可以获得很多资源).Besides,itisimportanttoadapttothenewenvironmentquickly.2.________________________________________________________________________________________(你熟悉新环境越早，好处就越多).Finally,personalinterestsandhobbiesarealsohighlyvalued.3.__________________________________________________(你应该选择一个想要从事的专业).Thesooneryoucangetusedtothenewenvironment,themorebeneficialitwillbecometoyouYoushouldchooseamajorthatyouwanttotakeupWithallthestrengthsImentionedabove,4.____________________________________________________________________________(我相信在中国你能够克服所有困难，取得更大的进步)．Bestwishesandgoodluck!Yours,LiHuaIbelieveyoucanovercomeallthedifficultiesandmakegreaterprogressinChinaThankyouforwatching!