2019-2020学年高中英语 Unit 3 A healthy life Section Ⅴ Wr

-1-SectionⅤWriting劝说性建议信技法指导劝说性建议信是针对对方提出的问题或困惑，有针对性地提出自己的建议的一种书信文体。一、基本结构劝说性建议信可采用“三段式”写法：第一段：要分析问题，表明自己的观点。第二段：针对问题提出建议，并说明原因。第三段：提出期望，希望收信者积极行动，改进现状，并礼貌地结束全文。二、注意事项提出个人的建议时，应注意以下两点：1．态度认真理智。认真对待对方提出的问题，理智分析，并给出合理的解释以及实际有效的解决方法。2．简明扼要，以理服人。针对问题提出解决方法时，一定要语气柔和，态度明确，逻辑分明，重点突出，让对方感到“纳而有因，拒而有理”。黄金表达1．首段：引出问题①Iamsorryyouhavehadsomuchtroublein...②Youhaveaskedformyadviceon...andIwilltrytomakesomesuggestions.③I'mwritingtosharemyexperiencewithyou.2．主体：提出建议①Inmyopinion,itwouldbewiseofyoutotakethefollowingaction.②Firstofall...;Meanwhile...;Inaddition,...③It'simportantforyouto...3．结尾：提出期望①Cheerup!Yourtroubleswillsoonbeover.②Wherethereisawill,thereisaway.③Don'tloseheart,whateverhappens.④Iwillbeverygladifyoufindmysuggestionsuseful.⑤PleaseletmeknowifIcanhelpfurther.[典题演练]你的网友Mike由于长期上网，出现了视力下降、肥胖症等多种健康问题，并染上了一些-2-疾病，住进了医院。现在请你以李明的身份给他写一封信，希望他早日康复，并给他提一些合理的建议。注意：1.词数100左右；2．语言通顺、连贯。参考词汇：肥胖(症)obesity谋篇布局1．体裁：应用文2．话题：健康生活3．时态：一般现在时为主4．人称：第一、二人称为主5．结构第一段：引出问题第二段：提出建议第三段：希望和祝福联想词汇1．采纳如下建议__________________答案：takethefollowingadvice2．持有……观点__________________答案：holdtheviewthat3．锻炼__________________答案：workout4．没有什么比……更重要__________________答案：nothingismoreimportantthan...连词成句1．听说你由于视力下降、肥胖症等多种健康问题和一些其他疾病，住进了医院，我很难过。Ihearthatyouareinhospitalwitheyesightdecreasing,fatnessandsomeotherdiseases.Iamsad.→I'mverysorrytohearthatyouareinhospitalwitheyesightdecreasing,obesity-3-andsomeotherdiseases.(升级句)2．我认为，你应该采纳如下建议。Ithinkyoushouldtakethefollowingadvice.→Iholdtheviewthatyouaresupposedtotakethefollowingadvice.(升级句)3．为了保持身体健康，我们应该锻炼身体，因为健康最重要。Weshouldtakeexercisetokeephealthy,forhealthisthemostimportant.→Instead,weshouldworkoutsoastokeephealthy,becausenothingismoreimportantthanhealth.(升级句)连句成篇DearMike，I'mverysorrytohearthatyouareinhospitalwitheyesightdecreasing,obesityandsomeotherdiseases.Ihopethatyouwillrecoversoon.Iholdtheviewthatyouaresupposedtotakethefollowingadvice.YousaidthatyourillnesswascausedbysurfingtheInternettoomuch.IthinkthatweshouldspendlesstimeontheInternetfromnowon.Instead,weshouldworkoutsoastokeephealthy,becausenothingismoreimportantthanhealth.Onlywhenwearehealthycanwestudybetter.Andmyteachersoftentellusthatit'sharmfulforustosurftheInterneteveryday.Ihopeyouwillfindthesesuggestionshelpful.Therefore,followthedoctor'sadviceanddon'tworry,andyouwillbewellsoon.Bestwishes!Yours，LiMing[跟踪训练](2019·广东省高三“六校联盟”第一次联考)假定你是李华，你的朋友Tony刚刚升入高三，因为暑期短他没休息好，所以现在状态很差。面临高考压力，Tony不知所措。请你给他写一封信表示安慰，要点如下：1．表示难过和理解；2．就如何调整状态提出建议。注意：1.词数100左右；2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。-4-[精彩范文][名师点评]①Itisnotagoodideatoconstantlyremindyourselfofnothavingenoughrest.这是一个以it为形式主语而以动词不定式短语为真正主语的高级句式，属本单元核心语法知识。足见作者活学活用，具有较强的语言运用能力。-5-②Asthesayinggoes,failingtoplanisplanningtofail.作者恰当运用谚语“凡事预则立，不预则废”来增强自己的说服力，可谓点睛之笔。③whichcanguaranteeyourfinalsuccess为非限制性定语从句，which指代主句整体内容。非限制性定语从句的应用，言简意赅，行文流畅，为作文得分溢彩之笔。[总评]本文为书信体建议作文。开头提出写作该信的目的，然后写建议的内容，使用了Tobeginwith,what'smore,lastbutnotleast，令建议内容条理分明，最后表达愿望。该文布局合理，表达流畅，结构紧凑，建议内容合情合理，具有较强的说服力。课外拓展阅读——中国优秀传统文化专题练阅读下面短文，在空白处填入1个适当的单词或括号内单词的正确形式。(2019·广东省惠州市高三第一次调研考试)Longjingtea,__1__hastoppedthelistofthetenmostfamousteasinChinawithitscolor,tasteandshape,__2__(name)afteritsproductionregion—LongjingVillageofWestLake.Thegoodenvironmentandwaterresourceshavecontributedmuchtothe__3__(grow)ofthetea,confirm­ingthesayingthat“Longjingteaisthe__4__(good)amongalloftheteasintheworld”.Thanks__5__theQianlongEmperoroftheQingDynasty,theteahasearnedahighreputation.ThestorywentthattheQianlongEmperorvisitedamountainduringhisHangzhoutravels,andhesawsomeladiespickingtheteaat__6__footofthemountain.Hewassointerestedintheirmovementsthathedecidedtohaveagohimself.While__7__(pick)thetea,hereceivedthenewsofhismother'sillness,sohecarelesslyputtheleavesinhisrightsleeveand__8__(leave)HangzhouforBeijing.Hevisitedhismother__9__(immediate)uponhisarrivalinBeijing,andhismothersmeltthefragranceofthetealeavesfromhisrightsleeveandwantedtohaveataste.Afterdrinkingacupoftea,shefoundherselfcompletely__10__(refresh),andsheevenpraiseditasacureforallillnesses.Fromthenon,itwaslistedasthetributetea.1．________2.________3.________4.________5．________6.________7.________8.________9．________10.________答案：1.which2.isnamed3.growth4.best5.to6.the7.picking8.left9.immediately10.refreshed-6-