高一二短文改错(外研版)

中国教育培训领军品牌1语法专题：短文改错1ThefirsttimeIdecidetoleavehomewaswhenIwasupongraduationinhighschool.Iwashavingtroublegetalongwithmyparents.Ihadaboutfiftydollarinmypockets,andsoIthoughtaboutleavinghome.IttookmeonlytwoweeksawayfromhomewhileIstartedtofeelhomesick.Livingonmyownisatotaldifferentexperienceforthreemainreasons:beingmoreresponsible,moredecisiveandmorecreative.BecauseofI’monmyown,Igettodealwithmydutieswithoutbeingtold.Ihavetobemorecarefulbecausemyparentsarenotheretogivemetheiradvices.Intheotherhand,Icouldmakemyownfutureplan.Ihavemaderulesformetofollow.2Rosewantedajob.Shewenttomanyofficesandshedidn’tlikeanyofthem.Onedayshesawaboardinanofficeread:“Thisofficeneedsatypistwhomcantype200wordsaminute.”Rosewasexciting.WhenRosewenttothemanager’soffice,themanwaswritingsomething.Roseknockedatthedoorandthemanagerraisedherhead.“Doyouneedatypist?”askedRose.“Yes!”hesaid.Roseclappedherhand.Shecouldn’thelpsaying,“OK!Howmuchwillyoupayformeeverymonth?”Themanagerthoughtforawhileandsaid,“Iwillpayyou77dollarsforfirstthreemonths.ThenIwillpayyou30dollarseverymonth.”Rosesmiledandanswer,“Great!Iwillcomeandworkherethreemonthslate.”Themanagerwasspeechless.3Iwenthikingtoamountainwithmyfriendslastsummer.Itwasgoodtripattebeginningandsomethingunexpectedhappenedhalfway.Oneofmyfriendsuddenlyfeltaterriblepaininhisstomachandbecouldn’tmoveanyfar.Nobodyknewwhattodoit.Onegirltriedtocallhermuminhermobilepone,buttherewasnosignalinthemountainarea.Luckywehadbroughtatentwithus.Weputitupandlethimrestedinit.Hetooksomemedicine.Thenhedrinksomewater,andatesomefood.Afterwhile,hefeltmuchbetterandwewalkedon.Weallenjoyedusonthetopofthemountain.4Thewinterholidayiscoming,whichmademeexcited.Ihavebeenlookingforwardatrelaxingmyself.I’dliketogoskating,climbmountainsandseeseveralmovie.IthinkIcanplay中国教育培训领军品牌2thebasketballwithmyclassmates.HowawonderfultimeI’llhaveduringthewinterholiday!However,myparentsthinkdifferent.Theydon’twantmegoout.TheyareafraidI’llbeknockeddownbyatruck,fallenoffatree,orfightwithothers.Besides,theyareafraidIwilllosemyway.Ihatebeingtreatedlikeabirdkeepinginacage.Togetmorefreedom,soIwilltrytopersuadethem.5OnSaturdayafternoon,LiHuaandWangPing,membersfrom“GreenEyes”,washavinganenvironmentalprotectionactivityneartheriversidewhentheycatchsightofabirdontheground.Theypickeditoutandfounditwounded.Thinkingitshoulddiewithouttimelyhelp,theytookithome.Undertheirtreatmentandcare,theluckybirdgotrecoveredsoon.Whentimecameforthemtoflythebird,theyfeltabitofpitybutverydelightfulIthinkit’sworthwhileforhimtodosuchathing.HereIcallonthepublictoshowrespectsforthenature.Onlybychangingthewaywhichwetreattheenvironmentcanwegetalongwellwithit.6OurEnglishteacherisamiddle-agedwoman，whohadbeenteachingEnglishformorethan20years．Sheisalwaysworkinghard．Foramodelteacherformanyyears，sheiskindandfriendlytousandverystrictwithus.Inclass，shealwaysencouragesusspeakandreadEnglishasmuchaspossible．Sheisquitegoodatteachingandtrytomakeherlessonsliveandinteresting．InherspareSheIntime，sheoftenteachesusEnglishsongandhelpsustoputonEnglishshortplays．Shelovesusso10muchassheisalwaysreadytohelpus．Inthefact，sheisnotonlyourgoodteacherbutalsoourgoodfriend．Weallrespectandlovehim.7ThedayismyDad’sbirthday.ThisafternoonIwenttotheshoppingcenterdowntown,andboughtpresentforhim.ThenItookthesubwaytraintohome.Sittingonthetrain,Ithoughtmydadwillbeveryhappywhenshesawthepresent.Atthenextstation,anoldladywithtwoheavybaggotintothetrainandstoodinfrontofme.Shelookedtiring.Ihesitatedforamoment,andthenofferedmyseattoher.Theoldladythankedmealotandsatdown.Seenhersmile,Ifelthappily.Iwillalwaysreadytohelpothersinthefuture.8中国教育培训领军品牌3IjustcomebackfromBritainlastweek.IwasluckilyenoughtobeoneofthestudentfromdifferentcountriestovisittheUKfromFeb.16to28.Wepaidavisittomanyplaces,likeLondon,OxfordortheLakeDistrict.IlearnedmuchaboutBritishcultureandhistoryinLondon,wherewasmyfavorite.IalsolikedOxford,inwhichIsawmuchmoreoldbuildings.TheLakeDistrictwasbeautiful,butitwaspitythatitrainedheavilywhentheywerethere.ThemostexcitedthingformeintheBritainwasthatImadealotoffriendsthere.9Nowadaysmoreandmorepeopleareconcerningabouttheirhealth,buthowtokeephealth?First,itisnecessarytotakeanyexerciseeveryday．Researchshowsthatgetplentyofexercisemakestheheartbeatfastandthelungsworkharder．Second,eatmorefruits,vegetableandlessmeat．Third,gettingridofbadhabitsassmokinganddrinkingisalsoimportantwaytokeephealthy.Smokingandalcoholdrinkinginjuresone’shealthagreatdeal,andthereforeshouldbegivenup.Ifpeoplefollowthesethreewaysofkeepingfit,they’llgreatimprovetheirhealth．10OnedayTomandIwerewalkingdownthestreetwhilewesawanoldmanfalloffhisbike.Hewasbadlyhurt.Manypeoplecrowdedaroundus.Someonesuggestedcarryingtheoldmantotheroadside,soTomdisagreed.Hehaslearnedfirstaid.Hesaidthattheyoughttoleavehimwherehewasandcheckedhimfirst.Atthattimetheoldmanwasn'tbreathing.TomaskedmetocallintheFirstAidCenteratonceandhebegantostarttheoldman'sbreathing,usethemouth-to-mouthway.Withinfiveminutes,theoldmanbegantomovelittleanddoctorsalsoarrived.Theysaidthatwehaddonewascorrect.Ihavelearnedfromt