读后续写指导讲义

Step3:Prediction课后续写（25分）提供一段350词以内的语言材料，要求考生依据该材料内容、所给段落开头语和所标示关键词进行续写（150词左右），将其发展成一篇与给定材料有逻辑衔接、情节和结构完整的短文。阅卷时将主要考虑以下内容：1.与所给短文及段落开头语的衔接程度；2.内容的丰富性和对所给关键词语的覆盖情况；3.应用语法结构和词汇的丰富性和准确性；4.上下文的连贯性。Step3:Prediction评分原则：1.本题总分为25分，按5个档次给分。21-25,16-20,11-15,6-10,1-5,02.评分时，先根据所续写短文的内容和语言初步确定其所属档次，然后以该档次的要求来衡量、确定或调整档次，最后给分。3.词数少于130的，从总分中减去2分。4.评分时，应主要从以下四个方面考虑：5.拼写与标点符号是语言准确性的一个重要方面，评分时，应视其对交际的影响程度予以考虑。6.如书写较差以致影响交际，可将分数降低一个档次Step3:PredictionSTEPS:1.通读全文，把握文本的脉络和串起文本的关键词，在此基础上确定故事情节发展的方向。2.判断划线的关键词语与主题内容的关联程度，然后确定要选用的词语，以及所在的段落位置（1,2）。如果是意林体的文章，还要考虑取舍表达message的句子。3.阅读每一段中的首句，进行布局、解读。在布局第一段的内容时，要兼顾两段的首句：第二段的首句决定着第一段的走向。Thestreetbegantoattractalotofattention.Step3:PredictionSTEPS:4.在解读首句时，可以采用Given-New策略。Thenonebyone,theywenttoseeMr.Plumbean,lateatnight.onebyone+lateatnight---can’twaittomake….changehismindseeWhydidtheygothere?Whatdidtheysee/dothere?What’stheturningpoint?effectStep3:PredictionSTEPS:4.在解读首句时，可以采用Given-New策略。Thestreetbegantoattractalotofattention.attract---focusofattentionattentionWhoseattention?Focusonwhat?What’stheturningpoint?effect/result/endingStep3:Prediction5.Polishthestyle.1.与所给短文及段落开头语的衔接程度(内容+逻辑）4.上下文的连贯性。•Thenonebyone,theywenttoseeMr.Plumbean,lateatnight.Thenextday,differentpeoplemadetheirhousedifferent.Forexample,…•Thestreetbegantoattractalotofattention.Drivenbycuriositymanyjournalistscameandasked“Whathaveyoudonetoyourhouses”•Thestreetbegantoattractalotofattention.Drivenbycuriosity,manyjournalistscameandasked,“Whathaveyoudonetoyourhouses?”Step3:Prediction5.Polishthestyle.1.与所给短文及段落开头语的衔接程度4.上下文的连贯性。•Whichonedoyoufavor?---therefore,besides/plus/additionally/furthermore,however,onthecontrary,…---Luckily/fortunately,unexpectedly,surprisingly,happilyforhim,Inspiredby…,Outofcuriosity/Drivenbycuriosity,…Step3:Prediction5.Polishthestyle.2.内容的丰富性和对所给关键词语的覆盖情况；丰富性：关注故事情节的跌宕起伏•Thestreetbegantoattractalotofattention.Wheneverastrangercametothestreet,hewouldsay,“Thisisnotaneatstreet.”Theyfeltpuzzledaboutwhatthepeoplehaddonetotheirhouses.Thenallthepeoplewouldsay,“Ourstreetisusandweareit.Ourstreetiswhereweliketobe,anditlookslikeallourdreams.”up–down--upStep3:Prediction5.Polishthestyle.3.应用语法结构和词汇的丰富性和准确性；①Theywouldsitunderthepalmtreesanddrinklemonadeandtalkabouttheirdreamsallnightlong–②andwheneveranybodyvisitedhishouse,theverynextdaythatpersonwouldsetaboutchanginghisownhousetofithisdreams.③Itseemedthatallofthemwantedtoownanimpressiveandcolorfulhouse.④Severalmonthslater,everybody’shouseonthestreetbecameauniqueworkofart.Sittingunderthepalmtrees,theydrinklemonadeandtalkabouttheirdreamsallnightlong.Andanyonewhohadvisitedthehousesetaboutchanginghisownhousetofithisdreamsthenextday.Obviously,allthepeoplewantedtoownanimpressiveandcolorfulhouse.Sittingunderthepalmtrees,theydranklemonadeandtalkedabouttheirdreamsallnightlong.Andanyonewhohadvisitedthehousesetaboutchanginghisownhousetofithisdreamsthenextday.Obviously,allthepeoplewantedtoownanimpressiveandcolorfulhouse.Severalmonthslater,everybody’shouseonthestreetbecameauniqueworkofart.Step3:Prediction5.Polishthestyle.3.应用语法结构和词汇的丰富性和准确性；①Theywouldsitunderthepalmtreesanddrinklemonadeandtalkabouttheirdreamsallnightlong–②andwheneveranybodyvisitedhishouse,theverynextdaythatpersonwouldsetaboutchanginghisownhousetofithisdreams.③Itseemedthatallofthemwantedtoownanimpressiveandcolorfulhouse.④Severalmonthslater,everybody’shouseonthestreetbecameauniqueworkofart.Sittingunderthepalmtrees,theyweretreatedtolemonadeandsharedtheirlong-lostdreamsallnightlong.Thenextday,InspiredbyMr.Plumbean,anyonewhohadvisitedthehousechangedhismindandstartedtopainthisownhouse,basedonhisdream.Obviously,allthepeoplewantedtoownanimpressiveandcolorfulhouseandlettheirdreamsfly.Severalmonthslater,withsomanyamazinghousesliningthestreet,ittookonanewlook,asifbymagic.Step3:Prediction①Theywouldsitunderthepalmtreesanddrinklemonadeandtalkabouttheirdreamsallnightlong–②andwheneveranybodyvisitedhishouse,theverynextdaythatpersonwouldsetaboutchanginghisownhousetofithisdreams.③Itseemedthatallofthemwantedtoownanimpressiveandcolorfulhouse.④Severalmonthslater,everybody’shouseonthestreetbecameauniqueworkofart.Sittingunderthepalmtrees,theyweretreatedtolemonadeandsharedtheirlong-lostdreamsallnightlong.Thenextday,InspiredbyMr.Plumbean,anyonewhohadvisitedthehousechangedhismindandstartedtopainthisownhouse,basedonhisdream.Obviously,allthepeoplewantedtoownanimpressiveandcolorfulhouseandlettheirdreamsfly.Severalmonthslater,withsomanyamazinghousesliningthestreet,thestreettookonanewlook,asifbymagic.(83words)nowonderthestreetbecamea…长短句交错Step3:Prediction5.Polishthestyle.3.应用语法结构和词汇的丰富性和准确性；verygood---amazinglygoodbadlyill---criticallyillworkhardat--–applyoneselftoStep3:Prediction5.Polishthestyle.3.两段相对平衡4.不可滥用直接引语5.字数严格控制110-150Step3:PredictionThenonebyone,theywenttoseeMr.Plumbean,lateatnight.Theywouldsitunderthepalmtreesanddrinklemonadeandtalkabouttheirdreamsallnightlong–andwheneveranybodyvisitedhishouse,theverynextdaywouldsetaboutchanginghisownhousetofithisdreams.Itseemedthatallofthemwantedtoownanimpressiveandcolorfulhouse.Severalmo