第06讲 读后续写之“亲情+友情类”主题（讲义）

资料收集整理【淘宝店铺：向阳百分百】►第06讲亲情+友情类（讲义）目录目标1亲情、友情类续写概述和写作步骤目标2冲突和矛盾纠结目标3化解冲突和矛盾目标4感情升华和领悟目标5最新模拟目标6真题感悟_____________________________________________________________________读后续写中常常会遇到人际关系及个人情感类的故事内容。如：父子关系、母子关系、师生关系、同学友情、朋友关系等之间涉及家人、朋友、邻居、亲戚或他人之间的情感沟通或交流。此类文章中常含有涉及个人的喜、怒、哀、乐、害怕、紧张、孤单、骄傲、喜悦等细节描写。【写作步骤】一冲突和矛盾纠结1.生气、震惊bedispleasedatone’sconduct对某人的行为感到不满arouseone’sdispleasure引起某人的不快beeasilyannoyedattrifles容易为琐事而恼火flamewithanger气得满脸通红getcross/madatsb.对某人勃然大怒bespeechlesswithindignation气的说不出话来资料收集整理【淘宝店铺：向阳百分百】bedeeplyshockedatherbehaviour对她的行为深为震惊1.Iwasseizedbyanger.我充满了愤怒。2.Hisvoicetrembledwithanger.他的声音因愤怒而颤抖。3.Filledwithanger/fury(狂怒)，Tomwasunabletoutterasingleword.Tom气得一句话也说不出。4.Boilingwithrage，Tomshookhisfistatme.Tom怒火中烧，对我挥舞拳头。5.Seeingthis,hewasfilled/burstingwithanger.看到这些，他怒不可遏。6.Feelingagreatsenseofjealousywellingupinherheartandsurgingthroughher,Jessicathrewthecanatthewoman.Jessica感到一股强烈的嫉妒在心中升腾、奔涌，她把易拉罐扔向那个女人。7.Whathesaidpiercedmyheart.他说的话刺痛了我的心。8.Hewasfilled/burstingwithangerandstormoutoftheroom.他怒不可遏，气冲冲地走出了房间。9.FindingClark'snoteinamess,histeacherwasblueintheface.发现Clark的笔记一团糟，他的老师脸气得发青。10.MyjawdroppedwhenIsawmyphonebill.当看到电话账单时，我极为惊讶。2.孤单、消极1.Hefeelsabandonedbytheworld.他觉得自己被全世界抛弃了。2.Ihaveastrongsenseoflossaftermydivorce.离婚后我感到有很强的失落感。3.Hefeltleftoutandwasgettingdesperatewithloneliness.他感觉被遗弃了，孤独使他感到绝望。4.Uponhearingthebadnews,hewassuddenlythrownintoaworldofdarknessandsankintohopelessness.听到这个坏消息，他突然被投入黑暗世界，陷入绝望。5.Uponhearingthebadnews,shefeltseizedbyaburstofsadnessandcouldn’thelpcryingbitterly.一听到这个坏消息，她就被一股悲伤之感控制，忍不住哭泣。6.Hesighedwithdisappointment.他失望地叹了口气。7.Withaconfusedlookonhisface,hehadnoideawhattodo.资料收集整理【淘宝店铺：向阳百分百】他露出困惑的表情，不知道该做什么。8.Amandafeltasgrayastheskyoutsidewhenshelookedacrossthetableatherthree-year-oldsister.当她望过她三岁妹妹的桌子时，Amanda感觉她的心情像天空一样灰暗。9.Sheweptatonce,withsudden,wildabandonment,inhersister’sarms.她突然纵情地在姐姐的怀抱里哭了起来。10.Enviously,Janewhispered,“Sheisn’tallthatprettyanyway.”简羡慕地小声说：“反正她也不是那么漂亮。”二化解冲突和矛盾1.回忆1.Neverwouldtheyforgetsuchathrillingsummerholidayintheirwholelife.他们一生都不会忘记这么一个激动人心的暑假。2.Thevacationwithmymyforgetfulmotherwouldalwaysstandoutinmymemory.和妈妈一起的旅行总是会让我记忆犹新。3.Arippleofsadnesswelledupinsidehim.他内心涌起一阵阵悲伤。4.Hereyesmistedoverassheimmersedherselfintheirgoodmemories.当她沉浸在他们之间的美好回忆时，双眼蒙上了一层水雾。5.Shethoughtoftheflowersglitteringinthesunshineandthemountainsturningrosyinthesettingsun.Andeverynightshecriedintoherpillowasthoughherheartwouldbreakintopieces.她想起了阳光里闪耀的花儿，落日下慢慢变成玫瑰色的山脉。每一个夜晚，她把头埋在枕头里哭，肝肠寸断。2.反省/道歉1.“I'msosorry.”hesaid,gentlypettingJackson'shead。“对不起，”他说到，轻轻的摸Jackson的头。2.“Iwantedtosurpriseyou!”hepointedataneatlywrappedboxwithhiseyesgleaming.“我想给你一个惊喜!”他指向一个包装精美的盒子，眼里闪烁着光芒。3.Havingrealizedtheproblem,Arthurmadeuphismindthathewantedachange.Insteadoflitteringlikebefore,hespentnearlyanhourinputtingthetoysaway,andevenputtinghissocksintothehamper.意识到这个问题后，亚瑟决定他想要一个改变一下。他没有像以前那样乱扔垃圾，而是花了将近一个小时把玩具放起来，甚至把袜子放进篮子里。回忆4.Atthatmoment,unexpectedly,thememoryofthesightofBillycryingonthegroundoccurredtoCarter,hoveringinhismindandremindinghimsomething.资料收集整理【淘宝店铺：向阳百分百】在这时，毫无预料地，Carter突然想起Billy躺在地上哭的回忆，一直在他脑海回旋，提醒着他一些事情。5.Iturnedtoherandsaid,“Sorry,let’sgotoseemore‘bib-bibs’!”Shewassoexcitedthatshesmiledthroughtears.Iheldherhandaswewalkedoutside.我转向她说：“对不起，让我们去看更多的‘围嘴’吧！”她非常激动，她哭了起来。当我们走出去时，我握着她的手。7.“Sorrytokeepyourcatforaweek,butIhadnoideawheretoreturnhim.Ihopeyoushouldtakebettercareofhiminthefuture.”Tearsofregretsrolleddownhercheeksatthewords.Sheheldthecattighterandclosertoherheart.很抱歉把你的猫养了一个星期，我不知道把它还给哪里。我希望你将来能好好照顾好他。”听到这些话，遗憾的眼泪从脸颊上流下来。她把猫抱得更紧，更靠近她的心。3.愧疚1.ThinkingaboutwhatIhaddonetohim,regretandguiltoverwhelmedmelikeendlesstides.一想到我对他所做的一切，遗憾和内疚就像没休止的潮水一样向我袭来。2.Soashamedwasshethatshecouldfeelthebloodrushtoherface.她感到羞愧极了，血液直往脸上涌。3.Shewenthomeashamed,chokingwithangerandconfusion.她羞愧地回了家，哽咽着，内心充满愤怒和不解。4.WatchingShirley’ssmilefadingaway,Peterfrowned.看着雪莉的微笑渐渐消失，彼得皱起了眉头。三情感升华领悟1.亲情1.ItwasHenry'skindnessthatmademefeelthewarmthfromourfamily.Iwilltreasureitwithallmyheart.正是亨利的善良让我感受到了来自我们家人的温暖。我会非常珍惜它的。2.ButforJason'stimelyandselflesshelp,Iwouldn'thavefinishedmyperformancesmoothly.如果没有Jason及时的和无私的的帮助,我就不会顺利地完成我的演出了。3.Itisatourmother'skneethatweacquireournoblestandtruestandhighest,butthereisseldomanymoneyinthem.就是在我们母亲的膝上，我们获得了我们的最高尚、最真诚和最远大的理想，但里面很少有任何金钱。4.Iranovertomyfather,reachedoutmyhandsandhugged/embracedhimtightly/firmly.我跑向父亲，伸出手，紧紧抱住他。5.Whereweloveishome,homethatourfeetmayleave,butnotourhearts.资料收集整理【淘宝店铺：向阳百分百】家是我们所爱的地方，双脚可以离开，心却不能。6.Nottomeanagreeting,nottoshyahug,getclosetoourfamilies,cherishthisextraordinaryandnobleaffection.不要吝啬一个问候，不要害羞一个拥抱，亲近我们的家人，珍视这平凡而又高贵的亲情，那是生世最真最切的永恒。7.HavingreadtheletterfromDad,Ifeltawarmcurrentwellingupinmyheartandsurgingthroughme.看完爸爸的来信，我感到一股暖流涌上心头，在我身上涌动。8.Ifthewholeworldbetrayedyou,atleastyourmotherwillnotgiveup.Stillrememberchildhoodmother'sembraceisthemostbeautifulparadise.如果整个世界都抛弃了你，至少还有母亲不会放弃你。还记得儿时母亲的怀抱就是我最美的天堂。8.Thefamilyhuggedandsmiledthroughmistyeyesandthenlaughed.这家人相拥在一起，透过含泪的眼睛露出了笑容，而后大笑起来。10.Thefamilyisshapingexcellentpersonalitylife