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资料整理【淘宝店铺：向阳百分百】注意：1.所续写短文的词数应为150左右；2.续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已经为你写好。Long,longago,inalittlevillagelivedahumble(谦虚的)mannamedAshwin.Hewentaboutmakingendsmeetbypullingarickshaw(人力车)andtransportingpassengersfromonedestinationtoanother.Timeswerehardandhehadtotaketheresponsibilityforsupportinghisfamily.Oneday,whilereturningfromwork,amanwholookedlikeawealthypersoncomingfromthecitystoppedhisrickshaw.HequicklytoldAshwintheplacehewantedtovisit.Hiscarhadbrokendownandhedesperatelyneededtogettothementionedaddressurgently.Afteranuneventfulride,theyreachedthedestination,andthepassengerpaidthefare.Ashwin,onreturninghome,foundtohissurprisethathispassengerjustthenhaddroppedasmallbaginhisrickshaw.Onopeningit,hefound50goldcoinsinit.Heshowedittohisfamilywhocouldn’tbelievetheirluck.Hiswifesaidwithjoy,“Thankgoodness.Nowwefindasolutiontoourproblems.”Thatnight,Ashwincouldn’tsleep.Hisconscience(良心)kepttroublinghim.Atthecrackofdawn,hewokehiswifeup.Hesaid,“Lalita,Ithinkit’swrongtokeepsomeoneelse’sgoldcoins.Iamgoingtosearchforthemanandhandoverthecoinstohim.”Lalitawasshockedandcried,butAshwinstucktohisword.Hetriedhardtofindtheman,butnothingseemedtowork.Eventuallywhenhewasabouttogiveup,hesawthatwealthypassenger.Ashwinrantohimandthrust(塞)thebaginhishand,“Sir,youleftthisbaginmyrickshaw.IhavebeenlookingforyousincethenandIamsorelievedtofindyou.Pleasetakethis,”hesaid.Paragraph1:Themanwassurprised.Paragraph2:Ashwin’schildrenthengoteducatedanddidwell.资料整理【淘宝店铺：向阳百分百】资料整理【淘宝店铺：向阳百分百】【文章概要】本文以人物为线索展开，讲述了贫穷的Ashwin以拉人力车为生，一天一个有钱人乘他的车去某地时，把一个装有50个金币的包忘在了车上。妻子想把这些金币据为己有，但Ashwin的良心过意不去，他决定去寻找失主。就在多次寻找无果，准备放弃时，Ashwin看到了这个有钱人，并把包还给他。线索：吃惊—发现Ashwin生活贫困—提供帮助—拒绝—提出负责孩子教育—同意—孩子学成归来—经常教育孩子—孩子以父亲为榜样【参考范文】Paragraph1：Themanwassurprised.HewastouchedbyAshwin’sconscienceandsaidhewantedtomeethisfamily.Ashwintookthemanhomeandintroducedhimtohisfamily.ThemanlookedatthepoorconditionofAshwin’shouseandhischildrenandtoldAshwinthathewouldliketohelphisfamily.Ashwinrefused,butthemanwasinsistentandsaid,“Iwouldliketotaketheresponsibilityforeducatingyourchildren.”AshwincouldnotrefusetheassistancesincehewantedthechildrentobecomesoGANmeoneimportant.Heagreedtosendthemtothecity.Paragraph2：Ashwin’schildrenthengoteducatedanddidwell.Eachvacationtheywenthometovisittheirparents.Ashwinoftenremindedthem,“Neverdoanythingatthecostofsomeoneelse.”Thechildrenrememberedtheadviceandfollowedit.Yearslater,theybecamesuccessful.Whenthepoorman’schildrenhadchildrenoftheirown,theyoftentoldthemthestoryaboutthesmallbagwith50goldcoins.【详解】由第一段首句内容“这个人很吃惊”知，第一段可写他被Ashwin的良知感动了，准备登门道谢。看到他们贫穷的生活后，有钱人准备给他们提供帮助。但被善良的Ashwin拒绝了。在有钱人再三坚持下，Ashwin终于同意他帮助自己的孩子接受良好的教育。由第二段首句内容“Ashwin的孩子们得到了很好的教育，并且学习很好”知，第二段可描写Ashwin经常教育孩子，孩子们也谨记父亲教诲，并把他的事迹讲给子孙后代听。资料整理【淘宝店铺：向阳百分百】词汇积累行为①帮助：help/dosb.afavor/offerhelptosb.②拒绝：refuse/decline③拜访：visit/payavisitto情绪①感动：touch/move句式表达ThemanlookedatthepoorconditionofAshwin’shouseandhischildrenandtoldAshwinthathewouldliketohelphisfamily.（that引导宾语从句。Ashwincouldnotrefusetheassistancesincehewantedthechildrentobecomesomeoneimportant.（since引导原因状语从句。Whenthepoorman’schildrenhadchildrenoftheirown,theyoftentoldthemthestoryaboutthesmallbagwith50goldcoins.（when引导时间状语从句。资料整理【淘宝店铺：向阳百分百】注意：1.所续写短文的词数应为150左右；2.续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已经为你写好。JackandRoseweresittingfacetoface.Atthismoment,thelandlordcameinandasked,“Areyousureyoudonotrentthehouseanymore?”Hekeptsilentandsheonlyshookherhead.Theyweregoingtodivorce,soitwasobviousthattheywouldnotcontinuerentingthehouseanymore.Thenthelandlordbeganexaminingthehouse.Afterlookingaround,hescreamed,“Goddamn!Seehowyouhaveruinedmyhouse?Thewallsarefullofnails!HowcouldIrentthehousetoothers?Jacksaid,Theroomistoosmallandcanhardlyaccommodateallloadsofourstuff.Sowecouldonlyhangthemonthewalls.Thelandlorddidnotlistentohimandturnedarounduptothefloor.Rosebeganlookingaroundherfamiliarroom.Fouryearsago,shebecamehisbridehere.Onthenightoftheirmarriage,hefeltdeeplyguiltytoher,saying,“Ifeelsosorryforyouforhavingyouliveinthissmallroom.InthefutureIwillearnalotofmoneytobuyourownhouse.”Theroomwasonly13squaremeterswithtwonailsonthewallnexttothedoor,oneforhertohangherbagandtheotherforhangingumbrellas.Atthattime,shethrewallherstuffsuchasherbagandumbrellaontheflooroncesheenteredtheroom,staringatthewholemessandfeelingterriblyupset.Therewerethreenailsontheleftwall,onwhichhehunghisclothesyesterday.Aftershelivedintheroom,heremovedalltheclothesboxesandboughtheradeskinthesparedroombecauseheknewshelovedwritinganddrawing.Therewerefournailsontherightwallthatwereusedtofixtheirweddingphotoframe.Butnowtherewereonlyfournailswithouttheframe.Shestillrememberedhegothurtonhisfingerswhentryingtodrivethenailshome.Itwasherwhopushedhimtoreceiveaninjectionagainsttetanus(破伤风)。Paragraph1:Thelandlordtriedtopry(撬动，撬开)thenailsoutwhencomplainingatthesametime.Paragraph2:Theyhungallthethingsbacktothewall.资料整理【淘宝店铺：向阳百分百】资料整理【淘宝店铺：向阳百分百】【文章概要】通过阅读所给文章可知，Jack和Rose这一对夫妻由于决定离婚而不再租赁房东的房子，房东抱怨他们把房子的墙上钉了太多的钉子。他们开始回忆房间里这些钉子的来历以及它们背后的故事。【参考范文】Paragraph1：Thelandlordtriedtopry(撬动，撬开)thenailsoutwhencomplainingatthesametime.Afterthenailswereremoved,thewa