2017专四写作新题型特训-DAY-2

TEM4WRITINGDAY2检查应注意以下几个方面:①主语是正确的吗?（名词，代词，动名词，不定式，that+句子)②谓语动词是一个吗?（每句话一个）这个动词时态、语态、语气正确吗?若是在shall，will，must，may，can等情态或助动词后，用原形了吗?除了这个谓语之外的其它动词消掉了吗?（使用动词的非谓语形式）③主语与谓语一致吗?④及物动词或介词后，使用宾语的形式了吗?⑤定语或状语的位置放的合理吗?⑥从句的引导词使用恰当吗?⑦单词有没有拼写错误?最易错的句子Therearestillmanypeoplethinkweshouldnottakeitforgranted.Asmoreandmoremigrantsfloodingintocities,moreandmorepeoplebegintoquestionthepositiveeffect.Formentalpowerissoimportanttousthatourcollegeshouldtakeitsresponsibilitytochangethesituation.Recently,ithasbecomeahotlydiscussissuewhichisabestchoiceforustolearnfrombook.Aimingtoachievethisgoal,moreandmoreextracurricularactivitiesarecarriedout.Youcanbemoreawareofwhatahappylifeyouarelivingandbecomemorecherishitsoastostudyandworkharder.可以多用的句型…,while…thosewho…,which…Thosewhoareinfavorofartisticandculturalprojectsadvocatethatculturalenvironmentwillattractmoretourists,whichwillbringhugeprofitstolocalresidents.Thefactthat…(hasbeenbroughtintofocus.)Despitethefactthat…/N.,….Weshould…instead.itisnotalwaysthecase.Isitreallythecase?Acaseinpointis…Itisessential/imperative/advisable/desirablethat…Propermeasuresmustbetakentolimitthe…andthegreateffortsshouldbemadetoprotect…fromtheharmfuleffectsof….启1.Recentyearshaswitnessed/seenXXX,whichhasarousedragingdebateoverwhether…should/shouldnot…among…2.Recentyearshaswitnessed/seenXXX,whichhasattractedlotsofattentionfromXXX.Accordingly,whetherXXXshoulddo/bedoneby…hasbecomeoneofthemostcontroversialissuesthroughoutXXXoramongXXX.3.Somepeopleclaim/assert/argue/observe/hold/believe/findthat…,while,othersholdtheview/holdtheoppositeopinion/doubtthat…4.…Incontrast,….1.2.承personalpointofviewFirst(ofall),......Moreover,.........Firstly,............Noonecandenythat....Inthefirstplace,.........Obviously.....Tobeginwith,.........Ofcourse,.........Also,.......Similarly,.........Atthesametime......Therefore,weshouldrealizethat.....Certainly......Thereisnodoubtthat.......Inaddition,.....What`smore,..........Infact........Itcanbeeasilyprovedthat...Meanwhile......转But...Still,......Buttheproblemisnotsosimple...Thereisacertainamountoftruthinthis,butwestillhaveaproblemwithregardto.......However,.......Tooursurprise,..........Nevertheless,........Unfortunately.......Ontheotherhand,.......YetdifferencewillbefoundandthatiswhyIfeelthat........Othersmayfindthistobetrue,butIdonot.Ithink.....合Aboveall,Inbrief,........Accordingly,.....Inconclusion,........Allinall,.......Inotherwords,itishardtoescapetheconclusionthat........Asaconsequence,.........Inshort,.........AsIhaveshown/said/stated/....Insum,........Insummary,.......Ashasbeennoted,....Obviously,.........Bysodoing,.....Onthewhole,.....Consequently,........Presumably,.......Eventually,.........Toconclude,......Finally,........Tosumup,.....Inaword,......Tosummarize,........1.增补(Addition)inaddition,furthermore,again,also,besides,moreover,what'smore,similarly,next,finally.2.比较(Comparison)inthesameway,likewise,similarly,equally,incomparison,justas3.对照(Contrast)whereas,incontrast,ontheotherhand,instead,however,nevertheless,unlike,eventhough,onthecontrary,while4.因果(Causeandeffect)because,becauseof,for,since,dueto,owingto,thanksto,asaresult(of),accordingly,hence,so,thus5.强调(Emphasis)certainly,aboveall,indeed,ofcourse,surely,actually,asamatteroffact,chiefly,especially,primarily,inparticular,undoubtedly,absolutely,mostimportant6.让步(Concession)although,though,afterall,inspiteof,nevertheless,still,provided,whileitistrue....7.例证(Exemplification)forexample,forinstance,thatis,namely,suchas,inotherwords,inthiscase,bywayofillustration.8.总结(Conclusion)tosumup,toconclude,inaword,inshort,inbrief,allinall,inall,toputitinanutshell,insummary9.推断(Inference)therefore,asaresult(of),consequently,accordingly,so,otherwise10.时间和空间(Timeandspace)afterward,after,first,later,then,soon,outside,near,beyond,above,below,ontheright(left),inthemiddle,opposite,infrontof开头部分引出话题Whenitcomesto…,somepeoplethink/hold/believe….,whilesomeotherpeopleargue/maintain…Inrecentyears,…hasbeenbroughtintofocus./hasbecomeahottopicbothonandoffcampus/homeandabroad.Nowadays,itisaheatedlydiscussedtopic/controversialissuethat…提出观点Inmyopinion,/personally,Frommypointofview,Ithink…Formypart,Iwouldliketosupporttheformer/latter.AsfarasIamconcerned,Iwouldprefer…Myviewisthat….Iamquiteinfavorofthelatter.主体部分理由First(ly),second(ly),…Tobeginwith,…Ontheonehand….Ontheotherhand…Foronething,…Foranother,…Firstofall,..Lastbutnotleast,…AboveallApartfromthat,…Inaddition,inadditionto…What’smore,…假象，举例Wecanassume…Supposethat…Itisnotsurprisingthat…Forexample/instance,…Agoodcaseinpointis…….suchasA,…Let’stake…asanexample提出原因Therearemanyreasonsfor…Thereasoninvolvesmanyfactors.Thefollowingfactorsaccountforit.Thereasonsareasfollows.对比TheadvantagesofAoutweighthedisadvantages.Although…,Astillenjoysadistinctadvantage.Maybe…,butitsuffersfromthedisadvantagethat…Incontrast,…结尾部分Insummary,…Inshort,…Inbrief,…Tosumup,…Inconclusion,…Onthewhole,…Allinall,…Onaccountofthis,…Fromwhathasbee