英语写作---描述性写作

描述性写作一.教学内容：描述性写作二.重点、难点：I.特点及常用结构1.描述性文章是把人物、事件、景观、地点、环境等用生动的语言，形象地描绘出来。2.描述性文章的结构（1）人物：开头应有简明的介绍文章的主体部分可按时间或事件的主次进行描述结尾进行评论或谈感受（2）地点：要学会准确地表示方位的词或短语描述地点的位置通常由上至下，从里到外，从左至右，从远到近。总之，无论是描述人物，还是地点、环境，都要详略得当，重点突出。3.学习并牢记下面的短语和句型表空间顺序infrontof,inthefrontof,atthebackof,ontheright（left）sidecloseto,nextto,opposite,across,inside,outsidein（to）thesouth/east/west/northononeside…,ontheotherside（of）常用短语和句型：方位1.Thereisatallshelfontheleftofmyroom.（ontherightof,inthefrontof,nearthewindow,）2.Abovethebed,thereisalargepaintingofthebluesea.（Ontherightoftheroom,）3.Nexttoitisabed.（Infrontofit,Atthebackof,Inthemiddleof,Totherightof）4.Theyareoppositethedoor.（ontheleft/rightoftheroom.）5.Theofficebuildingisintheeastofthecampus.（inthesouthof,tothewestof,infrontof,behind,atthebackof,）6.Themonument,whichwasbuiltin1894,standsinthecenterofthesquare.描述国家，城市等7.ChinaislocatedinAsia.（besituated…besurroundedby,lietotheeastof）8.Itcoversahugeareaof9,600000squarekilometers.9.Thepopulationofthiscityis100,000.路线10.Whenyoucomeoutof…（getto…reach…）11.Crossthestreet（river）（keepwalkingalong…walkdown…）12.TurnrightattheendofBridgeStreetintoRiversideRoad.（thesecondtrafficlights,thefirstcrossing,）13.Takethefirstturningonyourleft.（takethepathwhichcrossestheriver.））14.Gostraightontothetrafficlightandthenturnright.15.You’llsee（find）it人物16.Mygrandpa,kindandpatient,enjoystalkingwithkids.17.Heisabout5feetand7inchestall.18.Shehasaroundfacewithtwobigeyes.描述物品19.Thisropeis100meterslong.=Thelengthofthisropeis100meters.=Thisropeis100metersinlength.（inweight,inwidth,inheight,insize,incolor,inshape）20.Itisaroundyellowhatwithpinkflowersonit.It’smadeofstraw.21.Therearethreebooksintheherdrawer.II.范文讲解1.1999年NMET书面表达假设你是李华，在一所中学读书。最近收到美国朋友Smith先生的来信。他三年前参观过你校，听说现在变化很大，希望了解有关情况。参照下图，给他写一封回信，介绍你校的变化。注意：（1）回信须包括图画的主要内容，可适当增减细节，使内容连贯。（2）词数100字左右。A.审题：（1）一封信（体裁）（2）谈学校的变化（三年前图1，三年后图2）（3）重点在三年后的描述B.题纲及常用结构（1）开头语：收到来信hearfromsb./get（receive）yourletter…（2）学校的变化：新教学楼：anewschoolbuilding图书馆：ournewlibrary新操场：thenewplayground树木环绕：lotsoftrees（3）表述方位的词：ononeside（ontheotherside）ontheright（left）Therebe…,infrontof,inandaroundC.将以上要点扩展成句并连文，注意句与句之间的过渡。DearMr.Smith,IwassopleasedtohearfromyouandIamwritingtotellyousomethingaboutmyschool.Youareright,Quiteafewchangeshavetakenplace.Ononesideoftheroadthereisanewclassroombuilding.Ontheotherside,wheretheplaygroundusedtobenowstandsanothernewbuildingourlibrary.Initthereareallkindsofbooks,newspapersandmagazines.Theplaygroundisnowinfrontoftheschool.Wehavealsoplantedalotoftreesinandaroundtheschool.Ihopeyoucomeandseeforyourselfsomeday.Bestwishes.Yours,LiHua2.假如你叫Alice，你本应去机场接Danial，但你不得不去医院接你的母亲回家，你的朋友Mary主动提出替你去机场接Danial，你给Danial写信说明上述情况，并描述Mary的外表。SomethingAboutMissMaryAgeinhertwentiesLooksslim,ofmediumheight,wavyhair,withglassesClothesaT-shirtShoeshigh-heeledshoesPersonalitykindandcheerfulA.审题：（1）描述性文字的信。（2）重点描述人物的特点和外貌B.题纲：（1）开头：表明不能去的原因及解决办法。（2）中间：描述Mary的外貌及特点。利用表中的key-word（3）信的结尾：I’mlookingforwardtoseeingyou.1.DearDanial,I’mverysorryIcan’tcometomeetyouattheairportsinceIhavetotakemymotherhomefromhospital.MyfriendMaryhaskindlyofferedtomeetyouandbringyouhome.Asyouhavenevermetherbefore.I’lldescribehertoyou.MissMaryisayoungladyinhertwentieswithglasses.Sheisofmediumheight.Shehasaroundfacewithwavyhair.Shelikeswearinghigh－heeledshoes.ItiseasytorecognizeherbecausesheisusuallydressedinT－shirtandaskirt.Sheisalwayscheerful.IdohopeyoumanagetorecognizemyfriendMarywithoutanydifficulty.I’mlookingforwardtoseeingyou.Yoursincerely,Alice【模拟试题】1.假设你是李华，你的美国朋友Mike将于6月底到北京作短暂停留，请你帮他安排一天的活动。要求用所给的示意图写一封信向他提出建议并对各地点加以简单的介绍。颐和园饭馆北京大学宾馆图书城2.假如你昨天参观了一所高中示范校。请按照图中规定的顺序（从主楼出发），根据以下图表和中文提示，向你班里的其他同学用英文讲述你参观该校时的所见所闻。注意：（1）词数100左右；（2）开头与结尾已为你写好。生词：喷泉fountain参观地点学生活动实验楼做实验艺术中心练乐器报告厅听报告操场足球赛【试题答案】1.DearMike,I’mgladtohearyouarecomingsoon.I’veplannedaone-daytripforyouinBeijing.InthemorningyoucanfirstgototheSummerPalace,whichisoneofthemostbeautifulparksinBeijing.Thereyoucangoboatingandclimbing.It’salsoaniceplacefortakingpictures.TheninthemiddleofthedayyoucanenjoyaChineselunchinarestaurant.Intheafternoon,IsuggestyouvisitBeijingUniversity.Asyouknow,itisfamousbothinChinaandintheworld.Beforeyougobacktoyourhotel,youcandropintheBookTown.TherearenotonlydifferentkindsbooksbutalsomanyChinesepaintings.Ihopeyou’llhaveagoodtime.Bestwishes,Yours,LiHua2.YesterdayIpaidavisittoamodelhighschool,togetherwithmyfriend.It’sverybigwithabeautifulfountaininthecenteroftheschoolyard.Westartedourvisitfromthemainbuilding.Firstwewenttothelabbuildingwheresomestudentsweredoingexperiments.Thenweenteredthelecturehallbehindthelabbuildingandsawmanystudentslisteningtoalecturegivenbyaprofessor.Oppositetothelecturehallwastheartcenter.Therewewatchedgroupsofstudentsplayingmusicalinstruments.Finallywearrivedattheplaygroundatthefarbackoftheschool.Someboyswerehavingafootballgame,whichwassoexcitingthatwecouldn’thelpcheeringforthem.Itwasreallyanimpressivevisit.