(中国传媒大学)大学英语四级写作课件

大学英语四级写作北京新东方学校国内考试部赵子凌Contactme新浪微博北京新东方赵子凌[e-mail]1905378720课程导航写作思维揭秘三种写作类型锻造完美翻译法则冲刺阶段做什么确定方向提高效率思维决定写作Itisatruthuniversallyacknowledged,thatasinglemaninpossessionofagoodfortunemustbeinwantofawife.Threepassions,simplebutoverwhelminglystrong,havegovernedmylife:longingforlove,thesearchforknowledgeandunbearablepityforthesufferingofmankind.结论一先概括后分解Ihavehadmybestlovebefore,butIdidn'ttreasureher.WhenIlosther,Ifellregretful.Itisthemostpainfulmatterinthisworld.IfGodcangivemeanotherchance,Iwillsay3wordstoher---Iloveyou.Ifyouhavetogiveatimelimittothislove,Ihopeitis10thousandyears.----《大话西游》结论二重视形合中：Weshouldtakeeffectivemeasurestoprotectourenvironment.英：Effectivemeasuresshouldbetakentoprotectourenvironment.Ithasbeenknownforalongtimethatthereisafirstrelationshipbetweensuccessandperseverance.结论三重物称结论四长短句搭配原则四级写作大纲要求30mins120words15%Topics评分标准2分--条理不清，思路紊乱，语言支离破碎或大部分句子均有错误，且多数为严重错误。5分--基本切题。表达思想不够清楚，连贯性差。有较多的严重语言错误。8分--基本切题。表达思想比较清楚，文字尚连贯；但语言错误较多，其中有少量的严重错误。我们的目标是11分--切题。表达思想清楚，文字连贯，但有少量语言错误。14分--切题。表达思想清楚，文字通顺，连贯性较好。基本无语言错误谋篇布局首段（3句）扩展段（6句）末段（3句）遣词造句第一反应词替换核心高频词汇经典句型优化首段的写作良好的开端是成功的一半。Wellbegunishalfdone.陈述现状针对热烈讨论的话题Thereisaheateddiscussionwhether...送孩子去艺术班parentsshouldsendtheirchildrentovariousartclasses.住校外还是校内studentsshouldliveoffcampusorlivetogetherwithotherroommates.学生找兼职studentsshouldtakeaparttimejobduringschool.引发关注Recently,thephenomenonof“......”hasarousedwideconcernamongthepublic.酒驾Atthepresenttime,thephenomenonofdrunkendrivinghasarousewideconcernamongthepublic.跳槽thefrequentjob-hoppingofgraduates食品安全theproblemof“foodsafety”社会趋势Nowadaysthereisagrowingtendencythat…找工作graduatesinmountingnumberscanhardlyfindasatisfactoryjob.竞选班干部热studentsinincreasingnumbersshowgreatenthusiasmforleadersselection.志愿者/才艺秀peopleinmountingnumbersshowgreatenthusiasmforvolunteerworks/varioustalentshows.考研热undergraduatesingrowingnumberstakethepostgraduateentranceexaminations.人尽皆知NooneinChinahasfailedtonoticethephenomenonthat…经济发展VS环境破坏theeconomyhasbeendevelopingataconsiderablyhighspeedattheexpenseoflivingenvironment.末段的写作概括全文，升华主旨观点重申，展望未来提出解决方案结论法Fromwhathasbeendiscussedabove,wemaydrawtheconclusionthat____.draw----arriveat,cometo副词safely,reasonably,undoubtedly建议法Awarenessoftheproblemisthefirststeptowardthesituation.awareness----recognition修改润色1.时态2.人称主谓一致3.可数与不可数名词4.指代问题5.冠词的用法6.词组的固定搭配7.单词拼写8标点符号问题解决型谋篇布局描述段：描述现实存在问题说明段1：说明原因或危害说明段2：说明解决方法和措施08.12Directions:Forthispart,youareallowed30minutestowriteacompositiononthetopicLimitingtheuseofdisposablepalsticbags.Youshouldwriteatleast120wordsfollowingtheoutlinegivenbelowinChinese.1.一次性塑料袋曾广为使用2.由此带来的问题3.限制使用一次性塑料袋的意义描述问题段总述问题Nowadays,标题hasbeenbroughttopeople'sattentioninChina.options------Recently，标题hasbecomequiteaseriousprobleminChina.------Inrecentyears，标题hasarousedwidespreadconcern.说明危害段Itisobviousthat_____isbringinggreatdamage/harmto____.Ontheonehand,____危害一______Ontheotherhand,___危害二______Asisknowntoall,___hasgivenarisetosuchproblemsasenvironmentalpollution.Ontheonehand,____危害一______Ontheotherhand,___危害二______说明方法段Consideringtheseriousnessoftheproblem,itisquiteurgent(forustotakeeffectivemeasures)tosolveit.solve----copewith,handleFirst,Second,Third,Foronething,foranother,倒装句精彩结尾Onlyinthiswaycanweprotecttheenvironmentaswellas...LimitingtheUseofDisposablePlasticBagsRecently,limitingtheuseofdisposableplasticbagshasbeenbroughttopeople'sattentioninChina.Oncetheplasticbagshadgainedgreatpopularitybecauseofitsconvenience.However,whatwouldoursocietybelikewiththeexcessiveuseofthem?Para2Thesharpincreaseinusingplasticbagshasgivenarisetosuchproblemsasenvironmentalpollution.Ittakeshundredsofyearsforplasticbagstobeabsorbedbysoil,whichblocksthedrainagesystemandcauseswaterpollution.What'sworse,somebagsareofpoorquality,andevenharmfultopublichealth.Inaddition,itinfluencesthecity'sappearance.Para3Awarenessofthematterinquestionisonething,butthemoreimportanttousishowtocopewithit.Tosolvetheproblem,usingofdisposableplasticbagsinsupermarketsshouldbelimitedstrictly.Consequently,peoplecometotakeenvironment-friendlyclothbagsandthebusinesscostofsupermarketsiscutdownaswell.Onlyinthiswaycanweprotecttheenvironmentaswellasourownhealthandbeautifythecity.真题大演练(2010.12)Forthispart,youareallowed30minutestowriteashortessayentitledHowshouldparentshelpchildrentobeindependent?Youshouldwriteatleast120wordsfollowingtheoutlinegivenbelow.1.目前不少父母为孩子包办一切2.为了让孩子独立，父母应该......第一段阐述父母为孩子包办一切这一社会问题arrangeeverythingfortheirchildren第二段分析该问题可能带来的后果，为下一段提出解决方案做铺垫cannotendurethefrustration第三段提出解决问题的具体方案givenecessaryguideonlyatcriticalmoment类似的真题还有……Dueattentionshouldbegiventospelling1.如今不少学生在英语学习中不重视拼写2.出现这种现象的原因是......3.为了改变这种状况，我认为......（2010.06）Creatingagreencampus1.建设绿色校园十分重要2.绿色校园不仅是指绿色的环境3.为了建设绿色校园，我们应该......（2009.12）小结问题解决型现象阐释型谋篇布局描述现象段：开门见山，总述现象说明原因段：承上启下，列举原因阐述观点段：我的“态度”，总结全文(2007.12)Directions:Forthispart,youareallowed30minutestowriteacompositiononthetopicWhatElectivestoChoose.Youshouldwriteatleast120wordsfollowingtheoutlinegivenbelowinChinese.1.各大学开设了多种多样的选修课2.学生因为各种原因选择了不同的选修课3.以你自己为例......描述现象段Nowadays,总述现象，w