托福独立写作篇章结构

IntegratedWriting综合写作(33%)IndependentWriting独立写作(67%)时间：30min字数：至少300字，越多越好体裁：议论文指法准备工具：QQ等聊天软件一个有点破旧，可能有灰尘，个别按键可能不太灵光的USB键盘1.支持或反对agreeordisagreeDoyouagreeordisagreewiththefollowingstatement?Allstudentsshouldberequiredtostudyartandmusicinsecondaryschool.Usespecificreasonstosupportyouranswer.2.观点对比someholdaviewthat.....,othersprefer......Somepeopleliketocooktheirownmealsathome.Othersprefertoeatinarestaurantoracafeteria.Whichdoyoupreferandwhy?Includedetailsandexamplesinyourexplanation.3.问题分析what....,why......,how......Whatisyourideaoftheperfectvacation?Describeitandexplainwhyitwouldbetheidealvacationforyou.Includedetailsandexamplesinyourexplanation.4.介绍说明Aforeignvisitorhasonlyonedaytospendinyourcountry.Whereshouldthisvisitorgoonthatday?Why?Usespecificreasonsanddetailstosupportyourchoice.Score5:★Effectivelyaddressesthetopicandtask★Iswellorganizedandwelldeveloped,usingclearlyappropriateexplanations,exemplifications,and/ordetails★Displaysunity,progression,andcoherence★Displaysconsistentfacilityintheuseoflanguage,demonstratingsyntacticvariety,appropriatewordchoice,andidiomaticity,thoughitmayhaveminorlexicalorgrammaticalerrors1.减少语法错误2.观点鲜明，结构清晰连贯，前后呼应3.句式结构多样，用词准确精当1.Today,peoplearoundtheworldbecamemoreandmoreconcernedabouttheirhealth(today和werebecame时态不搭)IamhavingtoemphasizetheimportanceofdoingexerciseinthemorningWhenJackwasfiveyearsold,hehasmanagedtorecitemorethan300Chineseclassicpoems注意动词的时态2.Workathomecanbringusalotofbenefits(Work改成working，动名词做主语)ManystudentsarelikestudyingAPhistory(are和like只能保留一个)TheInternetcaninsteadofteachersinmanyclassroomsGirlshadbetterbebringupinarichenvironment(bebroughtup表被动)动词要正确的使用3.Intelligentstudentsshouldnotbetreateddifferentbytheirteachers(differently,副词修饰动词)4.Theproblemsthatarecreatedbyenvironmentalpollutionisveryhardtoresolve(is改成are,主谓一致)5.Farmercangetmorebenefitsfromthenewfertilizer.(farmer改成farmers)英文当中任何一个可数名词，必须在前面加上限定词，比如the,a,my,your等，否则该可数名词就必须用复数1.多用书面词汇，少用口语词汇。Ithink2.少用或者不用略缩语。It’s=ItisI’ll=Iwill3.不用俗语、俚语passaway/kickthebucketPersonalopinion/view/choiceReason1Reason2Reason3Conclusion1.观点鲜明a.开头段要有直接，明确的观点Personallyspeaking,Ibelieve.........Itotallyagreewiththeviewthat........Inmyopinion,Iprefertheidea.........It’sbetterforchildrentogrowupinthecountrysidethaninthecity.Doyouagreeordisagree?b.每个发展段的第一句都是分论点(理由/原因)，简单粗暴地提出分论点Citiescandefinitelyprovideabetterhealthcondition,whichisquiteimportanttothechildren’sgrowth.Childrenfromcitiesalsohaveahigherchanceofgettingintoexcellentuniversities2.句式结构多样：定语从句，名词性从句，非谓语动词，反问句，强调句，动名词/不定式做主语，状语从句，并列结构(排比)用词准确精当a.用词要多样b.用词要准确3.结构清晰连贯a.基本结构一万年不变b.1,2,3;发展段段首用First,Second,Third或者是thefirstreasonis.....c.使用必要的连接词，体现逻辑和层次比如:therefore,however,furthermore,naturally,also,because等d.注意观点的比较和对比无论是同意还是不同意一个观点，不要完全就围绕这一方面来说。独立写作的开头，有且只有一个目的：亮出你的观点。其它神马的都是浮云。开头可以有模版。独立写作的开头一般包括两个部分1.复述原题(告诉别人这篇文章说的是什么)2.发表你自己的观点(告诉别人你准备写什么)Doyouagreeordisagreewiththefollowingstatement?Patienceisusuallynotagoodstrategy.Weshouldtakeactionnowratherthanlater.Growingup,welearnthatpatienceisavirtue,believingthatgoodeventuallycomestothosewhowait.However,societyvaluesinstantandautomatic.Fortunefavorsthebold,thedecisive,andtherisk-takers.Soispatiencestillavaluablequalitythatweshouldlearnandcherish?Absolutely.Patiencecanstillserveusinourpersonallives,thebusinesssector,andthesportsworld.Itisthereasoninthemidstofchaos.Growingup,welearnthatpatienceisavirtue,believingthatgoodeventuallycomestothosewhowait.However,societyvaluesinstantandautomatic.Fortunefavorsthebold,thedecisive,andtherisk-takers.(题目正反两方面观点的阐述)Soispatiencestillavaluablequalitythatweshouldlearnandcherish?(用疑问句形式准备引出论点)Absolutely.(简单粗暴的选择观点)Patiencecanstillserveusinourpersonallives,thebusinesssector,andthesportsworld.(确认自己的观点，并进行解释，与下文要阐述的内容进行呼应)1.观点要鲜明比如absolutely简单粗暴，赤裸裸的告诉人家，这就是你的观点2.第一段别写的太长了。(第一段写的再长也不是重点,浪费脑细胞)3.个人推荐：观点后面加个becausebecausepatiencecanbenefitusinmanyaspectsbecauseparentspossessmanyadvantagesoverteachersinchildren’seducationbecauseitwillbringusalotofhelp.1.简单粗暴型Thereisaprincipalreasonforagreeingwiththestatementthatparentsmakethebestteachersanditisthefactthatchildrenareclosertoparentsthantoanyotherpeople2.忆苦思甜型家长和老师是否有权决定孩子的未来DuringtheIndustrialRevolution,inmanyEuropeancountrieschildrenworkedupto19hoursadayindingyfactoriesataveryearlyageandthefactoryownerscouldbeatthosewhofellasleepatworkordidn’tworkfastenough.Butnowevenparentsorteachersarenotcompletelyfreetodothingsastheypleasetothekidsbecausetheyareentitledtoprotectionandfarmorerights3.先礼后兵型Someclaimthatuniversitiesshouldallocateasmuchmoneyasmuchmoneytosportsfacilitiesastothelibrariesbecausesportscanhelpstudentskeepfitandcopewithheavyworkload.Butinfact,asacademicinstitutions,universitiesdohavetheobligationtogivehigherprioritytothefundingoflibrariesthantothatofathleticfacilities.义愤填膺型明星是否应该获得高收入Withoutthesweat,bloodandhardworkofartisans,laborers,farmers,builders,technicians,domesticworkersandallotherswhoworkwiththeirhands,ourcountrywouldcometoastandstil