高中英语写作基础训练(1)

EnjoywritinginEnglish!写作基础训练张香玲STEP1BrainstormingStep2Sentence-making•1）主语+系词+表语•Theyarebusy.•2）主语+动词•Shecried.•3）主语+动词+宾语•ShestudiesEnglish.•4）主语+动词+宾语+宾补•Weaskedhimtocomeback.•5）主语+动词+间宾+直宾•Mumboughtmeanewdress.Conjunctions(连词)1.并列______________________2.转折_________________________3.因果_______________________4.其他_______________________and,both…and,notonly…butalso…but,however,(al)though,stillso,therefore,because,asaresultwhen,so…that…Step3Joinupsentences(1)*Hebroketheworldrecord.*Everyonegotexcited.Step3Joinupsentences•Wedomorningexerciseseveryday.•Westayintheclassroom.•Sometimesitrains.(2)•IaminterestedinsportsprogramsonTV.•Myfatheris,too.•TherearealwaysTVplaysformymother.•WedecidedtobuyanotherTVset.(3)Ilikefruit.Ihavedifferentfruitindifferentseasons.Strawberriesareinvitinginsummerandorangesarefreshinwinter.However,applesaremyfavorite.IeatthemalltheyearroundbecauseIbelievethesaying:Anappleadaykeepsthedoctoraway.Step4ListenandwritePassageorganizationpyramidstructure总分主题主题论据泛例1+泛例2特例论据Ilikefruit.Ihavedifferentfruitindifferentseasons.Strawberriesorangesapplesbecause①我妈妈每天早锻炼。②我们家都喜欢运动。③我只在周末打网球。④从周一到周五我都得忙于功课⑤我们在不同的时间进行不同的运动⑥我爸爸晚饭后散步。Step5Consolidation先按“总-分”式的结构重新整理内容，再翻译句子，最后用适当的连词联句成篇。组句成篇Myfamilyareallfondofsports.…sports…time…doesexercise……takesawalk…However,…playtennis…because…bebusywith…Correctorder:②⑤①⑥③④题目：假如你被分到一个新的班级里，第一节英语课上老师让你向全班介绍一下你的体育爱好，请你用英语做一个简短的叙述。第一句已给出：Iaminterestedinsports._____________Step6Production评分原则Clearidea5Correctgrammar5Completepassage5Beautifullanguage5Beautifulhandwriting5Step7Markforyourdeskmate•Howtodoagoodwriting?1.准备充足的相关词汇。2.把内容要点用简单的句子翻译出来。3.按照一定的逻辑顺序整理各句内容，常用的文章结构多为“总分式”。4.运用连词联句成篇。5.最后，用漂亮的书法把文章写出来！Step7SummaryThankyou!