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[在此处键入]第1页共7页平时作业一:SCI论文的题名1，论文题名分析：名词性词组VelocityDistributionsforLowPressureTurbines（低压涡轮的速度分布）来源期刊：JOURNALOFTURBOMACHINERY-TRANSACTIONSOFTHEASME卷:132期:4文献号:041006出版年:OCT2010简洁，准确，清楚2，论文题名分析：主副标题Optimisationofverticalaxiswindturbine:CFDsimulationsandexperimentalmeasurements（垂直轴风力发电机的优化:CFD模拟和实验测量）来源期刊：CANADIANJOURNALOFCHEMICALENGINEERING卷:90期:5页:1186-1201出版年:OCT2012准确，清楚3，论文题名分析：系列标题TheDevelopmentofEthics:AHistoricalandCriticalStudy,vol.1,FromSocratestotheReformation;vol2,FromSuareztoRousseau;vol3,FromKanttoRawls（道德的发展:一个历史和批判性的研究,1卷,从苏格拉底到宗教改革;2卷,从苏亚雷斯到卢梭;3卷,从康德到罗尔斯）来源期刊：作者:Kalderon,MarkEliETHICS卷:126期:2页:510-513出版年:JAN2016准确，简洁，清楚4，论文题名分析：疑问句Along-termsurveyofbrucellosis:Isthereanymarkertopredictthecomplicatedcases?（布鲁氏菌病的长期调查:有标记预测情况复杂吗?）来源期刊：作者:Kayaaslan,Bircan;Bastug,Aliye;Aydin,Emsal;等.INFECTIOUSDISEASES卷:48期:3页:215-221出版年:MAR32016表达直接，清楚5，论文题名分析：陈述句ScanningLaserOphthalmoscopeImagingisadiagnosticpredictorofDryEye（激光扫描眼底镜成像是干眼的诊断指标）来源期刊：作者:Espina,Mark;Arcinue,CherylA.;Camacho,Natalia;等.会议:AnnualMeetingoftheAssociation-for-Research-in-Vision-and-Ophthalmology(ARVO)会议地点:Denver,CO会议日期:MAY03-07,2015会议赞助商:AssocResVis&OphthalmolINVESTIGATIVEOPHTHALMOLOGY&VISUALSCIENCE卷:56期:7会议摘要:1969出版年:JUN2015简洁，准确6，修改论文标题Studyofthenickel-cobalt-chromium-molybdenumdiagramfromthepointofviewofpredictingtheemergenceofthesigmaphaseinsuper-refractoryalloys（从超耐热合金的预测西格玛阶段的角度研究镍-钴-铬-钼图）来源期刊：MemoiresScientifiquesdelaRevuedeMetallurgie卷:70期:12页:857-74出版年:Dec.1973[在此处键入]第2页共7页论文题名分析：名词性词组不好的地方：标题过长，且过于复杂，不简洁明了。修改后：Predictingtheemergenceofthesigmaphaseinsuper-refractoryalloys：thenickel-cobalt-chromium-molybdenumdiagram.即改成主副标题形式二:1.报道性摘要ResearchoftheVirtualPrototypingTechnologyBasedonLaserProcessing（基于虚拟样机技术的激光加工研究）作者:Wang,Zhijian;Shang,Xiaofeng;Wang,Xiaoyan编者:Cheng,K;Liu,YX;Xu,XP;等.会议:7thInternationalConferenceone-EngineeringandDigitalEnterpriseTechnology会议地点:Shenyang,PEOPLESRCHINA会议日期:AUG,2009会议赞助商:ChineseMechEngnSoc;NatlnatSciFdnChina;Bruneluniv;NEUnivE-ENGINEERING&DIGITALENTERPRISETECHNOLOGYVII,PTS1AND2丛书:AppliedMechanicsandMaterials卷:16-19页:871-875出版年:2009Abstract：Atpresent,laserprocessinghasbeenwidelyused,butthetraditionallaserprocessingcannotrapidlyadapttocurrentmarketdemands,sothevirtualprototypingtechnologybasedonlaserprocessingisputforward.Inthispaper,theresearchstatusofthevirtualprototypingtechnologybasedonlaserprocessingissummarizedandthestructurefigureoflaserprocessingvirtualprototypingsystemisestablished.Thenthevirtualprototypingtechnologybasedonmetalpartdirectrapidprototypingisstudied,whichincludesthestructureparameterizationdesignsofcoaxialpowderfeedingdeviceandpowdernozzleandthesimulationofthegas-solidtwo-phaseflowinthecoaxialpowderfeedingdeviceandthetemperaturedistributionduringthedepositionprocessofmetalpowder.（目前,激光加工已广泛应用,但传统的激光加工不能迅速适应当前的市场需求,因此,虚拟样机技术提出了基于激光加工。本文基于虚拟样机技术的研究现状总结了激光加工和激光加工的结构图建立虚拟样机系统。然后基于虚拟样机技术研究了金属零件直接快速成型,包括同轴粉装料装置的结构参数化设计和粉末喷嘴模拟气固两相流的同轴粉喂养设备和沉积过程中温度分布的金属粉末）。评论：这是一份写得很好的报道性摘要，内容很完整，从研究目的、研究方法，到结果和结论，层层展开，使我们不看原文，仅从摘要中就知道文章的主要内容。[在此处键入]第3页共7页2.指示性摘要RecentDevelopmentsandFutureTrendsofTechnologyStudyonCarbonDioxidePipelineinChina（中国二氧化碳管道在最近的发展和未来趋势的技术研究）作者:Zhao,Qing;Li,Shun-Li;Li,Yu-Xing书籍团体作者:DestechPublicatInc会议:InternationalConferenceonEnvironmentalProtectionandHumanHealth(EPHH)会议地点:Wuhan,PEOPLESRCHINA会议日期:DEC13-14,2014INTERNATIONALCONFERENCEONENVIRONMENTALPROTECTIONANDHUMANHEALTH(EPHH2014)页:428-433出版年:2015Abstract：Forreducingthecarbonemissionsandimprovingtheclimate,CarbonCapture,UtilizationandStorage(CCUS)isanimportantoption.Comparedwithship,truckandtrain,pipelinetransportationhasbeencertifiedasanoptimizedchoiceforCO2transportationonshore.Forsafetycontrolofthepipelineproject,severalimportantissuesincludesinfluenceofimpuritiesonfracturepropagation,preventionofdryiceformationinchockingprocess,transientflowinshutdownprocessandthedangeroustimerangeofshutdown.ChinatakesactiveactionsforglobalCO2emissionreductionandclimateimprovementthroughdevelopingthefurtherresearchonCO2pipelinetransportationandCCUStechnology.（减少碳排放和改善气候、碳捕集、利用和储存(CCUS)是一个重要的选择。与船相比,卡车和火车,管道运输已被认证为二氧化碳运输在岸的优化选择。管道项目几个重要的的安全控制问题包括杂质对裂缝延伸的影响,预防干冰形成堵塞的过程,在关闭瞬变流动过程和危险的关闭时间范围。中国需要积极行动对全球二氧化碳减排和气候改善通过开发进一步研究二氧化碳管道运输和CCUS技术。）评论：这是一份很典型的指示性摘要——概括地介绍了论文的主题内容——管道项目几个重要的的安全控制问题只给读者一个简要的了解。至于具体内容,还请读者详看原文。三：引言检索关键词：HastelloyX1，文摘式引言（通讯）题目：Surfaceroughnessofmagnesiumoxidebufferlayersgrownbyinclinedsubstratedeposition来源：IEEETRANSACTIONSONAPPLIEDSUPERCONDUCTIVITY卷:15期:2页:3031-3033子辑:3DOI:10.1109/TASC.2005.848712出版年:JUN2005会议名称会议:2004AppliedSuperconductivityConference会议地点:Jacksonville,FL会议日期:OCT03-08,2004[在此处键入]第4页共7页摘要BiaxiallytexturedMgOfilmsweregrownbyinclinedsubstratedeposition(ISD)astemplatelayersforYBa2Cu3O7-x(YBCO)-coatedconductors.Thesurfaceroughnessoffilmsdepositedatdifferentanglesandwithvaryingthicknesswasexaminedbyatomicforcemicroscopy.Resultswerecorrelatedwiththetexture,measuredbyX-raydiffraction,todeterminetheoptimalthicknessanddepositionangle双向纹理氧化镁薄膜的生长了斜底物沉积(ISD)作为模板图层为YBa2Cu3O7-x(YBCO)-涂层导体。薄膜表面粗糙度存放在不同的角度，以及变厚度由原子力显微镜的审查。结果与纹理，用