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高三第二次调研考试作文讲评一、书写潦草,卷面涂改。二、句子结构不完整,句子错误多,好词好句太少。二、审题不仔细,信息内容不完整,缺少要点。一、句式错误。二、单词拼写错误。四、词性使用错误三、动词形式错误五、主谓不一致六、代词使用错误七、名词单复数,可数与不可数八、标点符号与大小写一、句式错误1.Wheniscomestobasketball,2.Itreallyachallengeforme.3.Whatreallycountsthatit’saeasythingformeWhenitcomestobasketball,Itisreallyachallengeforme.Whatreallycountsisthatit’saneasythingforme二、单词拼写错误。1.Wecanhaveabeatifulfuture.2.Atitudeiseverything.3.Ibeliveinmyself4.Failureisthemotherofsucceeded.beautifulAttitudebelievesuccess三、动词形式错误1.ButIgrateful.2.Itcanhelpsmekeepfit.3.Itisremindmeofamatch.4.Takepartinthesportsmeetingisnecessary.5.Ilikeplaybasketball.6.I’mverylikethissport.ButIamgrateful.helpTakingplayingIlikethissportverymuch.四、词性错误1.Whenwemeetdifficult,…2.Ican’texpressmythankfultomyteacher.3.Iwaspride4.Tomysurpriseddifficultiesthanksproudsurprise五、主谓不一致1.Becauseitwitnessmycourage2.Westilldecidestohaveabasketballgame.witnesseddecide六、代词错误1.Letweenjoythesports2.Becauseweclassdon’tplayfootball3.YoufriendalsousourYour七、名词单复数,可数与不可数八、标点符号与大小写“”1.Theybecamebraveboy.2.Someofclassmatehurt.Theteachersaid:failureisthemotherofsuccess.Inmyopinion.Ithink…boysclassmatesInmyopinion,Ithink…Nothingisimpossible.Nothingisimportantthanfriendship.Nothingisimpossibletoawillingheart.Persistenceleadstovictory.Whateverdifficultiesyoumeetwith,don’tloseheart.Wherethereisawill,thereisaway.Appreciatingyourwriting老师最恨的作文…老师喜欢的…漂漂亮亮(21-25)有模有样(15-20)马马虎虎(10-15)稀里糊涂(5-10)一塌糊涂(0-5)阅卷老师评分标准While-writing:一、句子结构必须正确。单句:主语+谓语+其他成分。复合句:从句中须有主语、谓语,主句中须有主语、谓语。二、人称、时态、主谓必须一致。三、运用一些自己熟练掌握的句型、短语、过渡词。英语写作万能句型:1.Whenitcomesto…2.Therewas/isnothingambiguousthat…3.Iwasgreatlyconvincedthat…4.Tired/Child/Failas主语+谓语..,5.Itishightime(forsb.)todosth…/that主语+过去时态6.onlybydoingsth,cansb.do…7.AsfarasIamconcerned,…8.JustasanEnglishsayinggoes,...9.Itwas/is强调部分+that其它10.wecan’temphasizetheimportanceof(doing)sth.toomuch.1.当提到运动会,我不禁想起了我去年参加的校运会。2.毫无疑问,我首先积极地报名参加1000米的长跑比赛。3.开始,我害怕我不能坚持跑完。但比赛一开始,我坚信有志者事竟成。4.虽然我是那么的累,但我一直不停地跑。5.我不停地告诫自己,是考验我意志力的时候了。6.当我最终被宣布我赢得了这次比赛的时候,我是那么的为自己感到自豪。我明白只有通过自己的努力才能体会成功的喜悦。7.就我而言,无论事情看上去多么的困难,我们都不应该放弃。8.正如一句英语俗语所说的,“冰冻三尺非一日之寒。”9.就是我的信念和坚持让我取得了最后的胜利。10.最后,我们再怎么强调坚持的重要性也不为过。1.当提到运动,我不禁想起了我去年参加的校运会。Whenitcomestothesportsmeeting,Ican’thelpthinkingoftheonethatItookpartinlastyear.2.毫无疑问,我首先积极地报名参加女子5000米的长跑比赛。TherewasnothingambiguousthatIwassupposedtosighupforthegirls’5000-meterraceactively.3.开始,我害怕我不能坚持跑完。但比赛一开始,我坚信有志者事竟成。AtfirstIwassoafraidthatIcouldn’tkeeponrunning.Butwhentheracebegan,Iwasgreatlyconvincedthatwherethereisawill,thereisaway.4.虽然我是那么的累,但我一直不停地跑。TiredasIwas,Iranonandon.5.我不停地告诫自己,是考验我意志力的时候了。Ithoughttomyself,“Itishightimetotestmywillpower.”6.当我最终被宣布我赢得了这次比赛的时候,我是那么的为自己感到自豪。我明白只有通过自己的努力才能体会成功的喜悦。AsitwasannouncedthatIwasthewinner,howproudIfeltofwhatIhaddone.Iknewthatonlybymakingourownefforts,canweexperiencethejoyofsuccess.7.就我而言,无论事情看上去多么的困难,我们都不应该放弃。AsfarasIamconcerned,nomatterhowhardsomethingseems,nevergiveup.8.正如一句英语俗语所说的,“冰冻三尺非一日之寒。”JustasanEnglishsayinggoes“Romeisnotbuiltinaday.”9.就是我的信念和坚持让我取得了最后的胜利。Itwasmybeliefandpersistencethatmademeachievethefinalglory.10.因此,我们再怎么强调坚持的重要性也不为过。Therefore,wecan’temphasizetheimportanceofkeepingtryingandnevergivinguptoomuch.Practicemakesperfect.1.当提到校园浪费现象,我不禁想起同学们浪费的不良习惯。2.毫无疑问,每天,我们在校园浪费大量宝贵的资源。3.在餐厅,在三餐后,我们经常看到许多食物残留在桌上。我们寝室,我们通常在洗后让水留着。在教室,我们经常在离开后忘了关灯。4.就我而言,是我们该厉行节约的时候了。5.就如政府所号召的那样,厉行节约不仅是中华传统美德之一,且有助于我们节约资金和资源。6.我们可以从小做起。如:我们应吃完所买的食物。离开之前要关灯,用水之后要关龙头。7.只有这样,我们的生活才会越来越环保。8.因此,我们再怎么强调节约也不为过。1.当提到校园浪费现象,我不禁想起同学们浪费的不良习惯。Whenitcomestothephenomenaofwaste,Ican’thelpthinkingofthebadhabitofwaste.2.毫无疑问,每天,我们在校园浪费大量宝贵的资源。Thereisnothingambiguousthateverydaywewastealotofvaluableresourcesonthecampus.3.在餐厅,在三餐后,我们经常看到许多食物残留在桌上。在我们寝室,我们通常在洗后让水留着。在教室,我们经常在离开后忘了关灯。Inthedinninghall,weoftenseemuchfoodleftonthetableaftermeals.Inourdormitories,weusuallyhavewaterrunningafterwashinghandsorfaces.Inourclassroom,weoftenforgettoturnofflightsafterweleave.4.就我而言,是我们该厉行节约的时候了。AsfarasIamconcerned,itistimethatwepractisedthrift.5.就如政府所号召的那样,厉行节约不仅是中华传统美德之一,而且有助于我们节约资金和资源。Justasourgovernmentcallson,notonlyispractisingthriftoneoftheChinesetraditionalvirtues,butalsoitcanhelpussavemoneyandresources.6.我们可以从小做起。如:我们应吃完所买的食物。离开之前要关灯,用水之后要关龙头。Wecanstartsmall.Forexample,weshouldeatupthefoodwebuy.Weshouldturnofflightsbeforeleavingandswitchoffwatertapsafterweusewater.7.只有这样,我们的生活才会越来越环保。Onlyinthiswaywillourlifebecomegreenerandgreener.8.因此,我们再怎么强调节约也不为过。Therefore,wecan’temphasizetheimportanceofpractisingthrifttoomuch.DearHenry,I’mgladtohearfromyou,butI’mafraidIdisagreewithyou.AsfarasI’mconcerned,friendsplayanimportantpart/roleinourdailylife.Whenweareintroubleorfeelupset,itisourfriendswholendusahand.Wearewillingtoshareoursorrowsaswellasourjoysnomatterhowfarawaywearefromeachother.Pleasetreatyourfriendsthewayyouwanttobetreated.Besides,don’tbelieveinthosewholeaveyoueasilybecause“Afriendinneedisafriendindeed.”Bestwishes.Iamlookingforwardtoyourreply.Yourstruly,XiaoWeidongPracticemakesperfect!Studyhardeverydayandimproveyourwritingstepbystep:•加强基础词汇和基本句子结构学习•提高综合运用复合句的能力•注意句子间的过渡与衔接•仿写、背诵、熟读话题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