写作技巧点拨系列(八)

写作技巧点拨系列(八)揣摩内涵,从容掌控图画作文图画类作文以图画和文字相结合的方式呈现内容要点,其难点在于将图画语言转化为逻辑语言。注意以下几点:1.仔细观察图画,图画中的每一个要素对表达图画的寓意都有提示作用;2.品味图画文字。图画配有的语言文字言简意赅,认真思考这些文字所隐含的观点;3.挖掘深刻内涵。图画背后隐藏的深刻寓意才是图画要揭示的真正主题;4.适度联想发挥,以使上下文更好地衔接。但一定要根据图画做到合情合理。【写作指导】Ⅰ.常用句型1.用于描述图画或引入话题的句式:(1)Asisdescribedinthepicture,...正如这幅图画所描述的那样……(2)Fromthepicturewecanseethat...从这幅画我们可以看到……(3)Thepurposeofthepictureisto...这幅图画的目的是……(4)Asisshowninthepicture,wecanseeclearlytherelationshipbetween...and...正如图画展示的那样,我们可以清晰地理解……和……之间的关系。(5)Thepictureindicates/conveysthemeaning...这幅画表明了这样的意义……(6)Thesightremindsmeof...这景象使我想起了……2.用于记叙事件经过或分析现象:(1)Atfirst...then...fiveminuteslater...finally/intheend/atlast...开始时……然后……五分钟后……最后……(2)Uponarrival,webegantowork.我们一到达就马上开始工作。(3)Some...;some...;others...一些人(做)……一些人(做)……另一些人(做)……(4)...was/weredoing...whensuddenlysb./sth.did...当某人/某事正在……突然又……(5)Moreandmorepeoplehavecometorealizetheimportanceof...越来越多的人已经意识到……的重要性了。(6)Thereisaheateddiscussiontodayabout...现在人们都在激烈地讨论……(7)Thanksto...,moreandmore...多亏了……,越来越多的……3.发表议论或总结:(1)Ifsuchmeasureswerenottaken,theproblemof...wouldhavebeenmoreserious.如果没有采取这样的措施,……的问题会更加严重。(2)Unlessthereisacommonrealizationof...,itisverylikelythat...除非达成共识,否则……将会……(3)Wecanconcludefromthispicturethat...由这幅图画我们可以推断出……(4)Ashasbeenstatedabove,wemustattachmoreimportanceto...如上所述,我们必须更加重视……Ⅱ.黄金模板第一段:描述图画Asisvividlyshowninthepictureabove,图画的内容.Thepicturetellsusthat这幅图画反映的大致意思.第二段:解释、说明和分析图片Theimpliedmeaningofthepictureshouldbetakenintoaccountseriously.First/Tobeginwith,揭示涵义/原因/结果1.Second/What’smore,揭示涵义/原因/结果2.Lastbutnotleast/Finally,揭示涵义/原因/结果3(如果有的话).Andthesocialproblem(如果是现象的话可以用phenomenon)hasarisenthegreatconcern/careofourwholesociety/world/allthepeople.第三段:给出自己的看法和想法以及解决问题的办法Inmyview/pointofview/Asforme,Weshouldtakesomemeasuresasfollowstodealwiththeproblemsshowninthepicture.First,weshould具体的措施1.Andthenwehaveto/must具体的措施2.Onlyinthesewayscanwesolvetheproblemof具体的问题.【典题示例】假设你是红星中学高三(1)班学生李华。下面四幅图描述了上周一你骑自行车上学路上发生的一件事情。请根据图片的先后顺序,将这件事用英文以日记的形式记叙下来。【审题谋篇】文章体裁记叙文中心人称第一人称主要时态一般过去时信息要点骑自行车上学;剐蹭了停在路边的汽车;留条以便车主联系;因诚实而得到表扬【词句构建】1.词汇汉语一般词汇高级词汇因为,由于because,since,as_______________看到,注意到see,notice________________________想,考虑think________nowthat,inthatcatchsightof,takenoticeofconsider汉语一般词汇高级词汇为了(inorder)to_________________________发生happen________________开班会haveaclassmeeting__________________为……自豪beproudof___________重视value__________________________soasto,inorderthat,sothatoccur,comeaboutholdaclassmeetingtakeprideintreasure,thinkhighly/muchof2.句式①因为我正戴着耳机听我最喜欢的音乐,所以我没有看到停在路边的汽车。一般表达:Iwaslisteningtomyfavouritemusicwithaheadphone,soIdidn’tsee/noticeacarparkedontheroadside.高级表达:Ididn’t________________________acarparkedontheroadside,______Iwaslisteningtomyfavouritemusic________________.(状语从句+with复合结构)takenoticeof/catchsightofinthatwithaheadphone②想到我要上课,我便留了个上面有我的名字和地址的条,以让司机知道发生了什么事。一般表达:BecauseIwouldhaveclasses,Ileftanotewithmynameandaddresstoletthedriverknowwhathappened.高级表达:_________________________________,Ileftanotewithmynameandaddress_______letthedriverknowwhatoccurred.(分词作状语)ConsideringthatIwouldhaveclassessoasto③下午晚些时候,我们正在开班会,校长带着一个陌生人来到了我们的教室。一般表达:Laterintheafternoon,whenwewerehavingaclassmeeting,ourheadmasterbroughtastrangertoourclassroom.高级表达:Laterintheafternoon,we______________________________ourheadmastercameintoourclassroomwithastrangerfollowinghim.(bedoing+when)wereholdingaclassmeetingwhen【连句成篇】Monday,October28FineThismorning,Iwenttoschoolbybicycleasusual.Ididn’ttakenoticeofacarparkedontheroadside,inthatIwaslisteningtomyfavouritemusicwithaheadphoneonmyhead.Iscratchedthecarandleftascaronit.ConsideringthatIwouldhaveclasses,Ileftanotewithmynameandaddresssoastoletthedriverknowwhatoccurred.Laterintheafternoon,wewereholdingaclassmeetingwhenourheadmastercameintoourclassroomwithastrangerfollowinghim.Hewasthecarowner.Heexplainedtotheclassthewholestoryandpraisedme.Bothmyteacherandclassmateswereimpressedandproudofmyhonesty.Ithinkhonestyshouldbetreasuredmost.【即时应用】这幅漫画展现了城市停车难的状况。请根据你对这幅漫画的理解用英语写一篇短文。你的短文应包含以下内容:1.简要描述漫画内容;2.谈谈你的感想;3.如何改善停车难的状况。(Novacancy)注意:1.可根据下面文章开头所给提示,做必要的发挥想象。2.词数100个左右。开头已经写好,不计入总词数。Withthedevelopmentofeconomy,moreandmorefamilieshavetheirowncars,whichmakesitdifficultforpeopletoparktheircarsinpublicplaces._____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【参考范文】Withthedevelopmentofeconomy,moreandmorefamilieshavetheirowncars,whichmakesitdifficultforpeopletoparktheircarsinpublicplaces.Ascanbeseenfromthecartoon,adriverbecomesannoyedwhenseeingthenoticesaying“Novacancy”.Thereisnodoubtthatit’sveryconvenientforpeopletogotoworkortaketheirchildrentoschoolbycar.Despitetheadvantagescarshave,carparkingproblemsarebecomingincreasinglyfamiliartothegeneralpublic.Iholdtheopinionthatthesevereshortageofparkinglotsisinfluencingthelivingenvironmentofthosewholiveincities.Tosolvecarparkingproblems,variousmeasuresshouldbetakenbythegovernment.Inmyview,it’shightimethatmoreparkinglotsshouldbeconstructedtoreducetheproblems.Besid