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Howtoimproveyoursentencesinwriting---语法结构在写作句式提升中的使用•一、非谓语动词（现在分词/过去分词/不定式）•1、高考链接•（2010广东高考基础写作，报道，禁烟）•受二手烟影响人数：约5.4亿•因二手烟死亡人数：超过10万/年•Around540millionpeopleareaffectedbysecond-handsmoke,•___________________________________causing100,000deathsperyear/causing100,000peopletodieeveryyear.leadingto/resultingin100,000deaths.leading...peopletodie.•2012广东高考基础写作，报道，人物介绍）•姓名：AllanStewart•国籍：澳大利亚•出生日期：1915年3月7日•世界纪录：2006年获硕士学位时年龄最大•_____________________,AllanStewart,(whois)anAustralian,becametheoldestman__________________________BornonMarch7,1915,toobtainamaster'sdegreeovertheworldin2006.•Practice:•1、要解决这些问题和提高我们自己，我们应该敢于乐观地承认我们的缺点。•Tosolvesuchproblemsandimproveourselves,weshoulddaretoadmitourshortcomingswithanoptimisticattitude.•2、担心环境问题和严重浪费资源，中国禁止了免费塑料袋。•Worriedaboutenvironmentalissuesandaseverewasteofresources,Chinabannedthefreeplasticbags.•3、（2010广东高考基础写作，报道，禁烟）•内容：公共场所禁烟•实施时间：2011年1月1日起•目标：所有室内公共场所无烟•_____________________________,thedicisionwillbecarriedoutfromJanuary1,2011.(Inorder)tomakealltheindoorpublicplacessmoke-freeAimingto…Aimingat…•4、活动时间：上周三上午9：00•活动内容：勤俭节约，绿色校园为主题的演讲比赛•活动组织者：学生会•活动目的：提高学生的环保意识TheStudents'Unionheldaspeechonhowtokeepagreencampuswithhard-workandenergy-savingat9:00amlastWednesday,aimingtoarousethestudents'awarenessofenvironmentalprotection.Inordertoarousethestudents'awarenessofenvironmentalprotection,theStudents'Unionheldaspeech,whosethemeis...............,withthethemeof...•二、定语从句•广东高考链接•(2010广东高考基础写作，报道，禁烟）•内容：公共场所禁烟•实施时间：2011年1月1日起•目标：所有室内公共场所无烟•Thedecision,_________________________,willcomeintoeffectfromJanuary1,2011.whichaimstomakeallindoorpublicplacessmoke-freewhoseaimisto....•Practice:•1、措施：提高公民环保意识对我们有长远的好处。•（2014佛山一模基础写作，环保雾霾天气）•Itisnecessaryforustoarousepeople'sawarenessofenvironmentalprotection,whichwillbenefitusinthelongrun/term.•2、报名条件：至少18岁•做好不回地球的准备•愿与他人保持良好的关系•（2013广东高考基础写作火星志愿者选拔快讯）Thosewhoareunder18yearsold,preparednottoreturntotheearthandwillingtogetonwellwithotherscansignupforit.•三、强调句•广东高考链接•（2014肇庆一模读写任务施助于人，叙述个人经历）•Itwasourtimelyeffortsthathelpedhimoutofhardships.Eventuallyhewassaved.•Practice:•1、读完故事我很感动，他们坚强的意志力和决心使得他们成功。•Afterreadingthestory,Iwasdeeplymoved.•Itwastheirstrongwillanddeterminationthatcontributetotheirsuccess.•Itwasbecauseoftheirstrongwillanddeterminationthattheyachievedsuccess.•2、直到我面临同样的困难时，我才意识到知识的重要性。•ItwasnotuntilImetwiththesamedifficultythatIrealizedtheimportanceofknowledge.•3、很明显，就是因为三兄弟的态度不同，所以他们得到的薪酬不同。(读写任务态度决定一切）•Obviously/Evidently/Apparently,itwasbecauseoftheirdifferentattitudesthattheygotdifferentpay.•...itwasbecausetheyhaddifferentattitudesthattheygotdifferentpay.•...itwastheirdifferentattitudesthatmadethemgetdifferentpay.•四、倒装句(notonly...butalso...)•广东高考链接•1、（2014茂名二模基础写作，健康讲座：久坐伤身）•久坐的危害：颈痛，背痛，肥胖，心脏病，死亡•Notonlycanthishabitmakeyourneckorbackache,butitmayalsomakeyoufat,increasetheriskofheartdiseaseandevendeath.Practice:（2014茂名一模基础写作，电影介绍：曼德拉）1993年：获诺贝尔和平奖1994年：当选为南非总统NotonlydidhewintheNobelPeacePrizein1993,but(also)hewaselectedasPresidentofSouthAfricainthenextyear.•2、only在句首后面跟了副词、介词短语或从句等状语，则主句用倒装结构•广东高考链接•（1）2010广东高考读写任务，你认为怎样才能更好地鼓励孩子学习•Onlybybuildinguptheirconfidence,canweencouragethemtolearnwell.•（1）2014肇庆一模读写任务，施助于人，呼吁大家积极参与。•Ithinkonlywhenweofferassistancetoeachothervoluntarily,canweliveinaharmonioussociety.•Practice:•1、所以我认为只有通过家庭、学校和政府的一起努力，我们才可以确保学生有多一些睡眠时间来保持健康。•SoIthinkonlywhenfamilies,schoolsandthegovernmentworktogether,canwemakesurethatthestudentscanhavemoresleeptokeephealthy.•Onlybymakingjointeffortsoffamilies,...•2、只有当环境污染被禁止，我们才能呼吸到新鲜的空气和过健康的生活。•Onlywhenenviornmentalpollutionisforbidden,canwebreatheinthefreshairandliveahealthylife.•五、虚拟语气•广东高考链接•1、（2013广东高考读写任务，假如没有清洁工，环境会变得如何？）•Ifitwerenotforthecleaners,whatwouldtheenvironmentbecome?•=Butfor/Withoutthecleaners,...•=Wereitnotforthecleaners,...•2、假如你处在那些动物的处境，你会有什么反应？(2009年广东高考读写任务）•IfIwereananimalinthewildlifepark,Icouldfeelannoyedwhenpeoplekeepphotographingme.•Practice:•1、如果不是因为他的帮助，我们永远不会成功。•Ifithadnotbeenforhishelp,wewouldn'thavesucceeded.•=Haditnotbeenforhishelp,we...•=Withouthishelp,...•2、如果我可以和别人互换身份，我想成为我的妈妈。（2015广一模读写任务）•IfIcouldswitchroleswithothers,Iwouldliketobemymother.•如果我当时在现场，我会毫不犹豫地帮助小悦悦。•ItIhadbeenonthespotatthattime,IwouldhavehelplittleYueyuewithouthesitation.•=HadIbeenonthespot,I.....•广东高考链接•1、（读写任务，学生安全教育）•Itishightimethatwearousedthestudents'awarenessofself-protection.•Practice:•我们该采取有效措施杜绝这样的浪费粮食的行为了。•Itishightimethatwetookmeasurestopreventsuchbehaviorofwastingfood.•六、同位语从句•广东高考链接•(2014江门一模基础写作春节回家）•Accordingtothesurvey,about70%ofthemchoosetogobackhomeforthereasonthattheSpringFestivalisanimportantforfamilyreunion.•Thereisnodoubtthat...(毫无疑问...)•Itisacommonphenomenonthat...•(...是普遍现象)•Duetothefactthat...Becauseofthefactthat...•(因为...)•Despitethefactthat...（尽管...)•Practice:•1.然而，我们36%的人反对这个观点，认为我们应该努力学习，快乐生活。•However,36%ofusareagainsttheidea,holdingtheopinionthatweshouldworkhardaswellasliveahappylife.•2、普遍现象：不随手关灯关水龙头•后果：浪费资源[2015模拟金卷（一）]•Itisacommonphenomenonthatsomestudentsdon'tturnoffthelightsortapsafterusingthem,whichisawasteofenergy.•他发明收叶机的原因