2014高二-改错每日一练答案

1（1)UncleMarionwasoneofmymother'syoungerbrotherbrothers.Hehasbeendieddeadforayear.WhenIwasateenager,hetaughtusmehowtohuntintheNewJerseywoodsusedusingthehoursbeforedawn.Weusuallylefthomeatthreeo'clockinthemorning,stayedin∧alocalrestaurantforbreakfast,andthentraveltravelledontooneofhishuntingdestinations.Justafterbeforedawn,hewouldfindtherightspotinthewoods.Hewouldshowmehownottomakeasoundandoramovement.ThoughIneverhuntedananimalsuccessfully,but＼Ilearnedtobebraveandpatientlypatientthroughtheexperience.（2)Mydreamistobecomeaschoolteacherinthefuture.Infact,I∧havehadthedreamofbecomingateachersincemychildhood.Inmyopinion,withoutteachers,nosocietycouldmakeprogressesprogress.Thereisnodoubtwhetherthatteachersplayanimportantroleinchildrenchildren'sgrowth.Notonlydoteacherspassonknowledgefortochildren,buttheyalsoteachchildrenhowtobehavethemselves.ComparingComparedwithotherjobs,teachingishardharderandthepayislower.AndButtome,whatgreatfunitistobewithchildren!Theymakemeto＼feelyoungforever.BecauseSoI'llstudyharderandtrymybesttorealizemydream.(3)I'msorrytotellyouthatIwon'tbeabletovisitBeijingwithyouin＼nextweekend,justbecausemyeldersisterwouldwillcometovisituswhilemyparentsareverybusy.TheytakeitforgrantedwhatthatIshouldpickhimherup.Yousee,wehaven't2seeneachotherforages.Andsheiseagertoseeingseewhathasgreatgreatlychangedinourcity.Iwanttoexpressmyapologizeapologyagainformakingyouwaitingforme.Whatismore,IhopethatIcangetanotherchanceschancetogotoBeijingwithyouwhenitisconvenienttoyou.Areyoufreetwoweekslatelater？Ifyouareavailablethattime,pleaseinformme.ThankThanksalot!(4)I'mgladtotellyouthatIhavemadegreatprogressinmyEnglishstudysinceIbecametheaseniorhighschoolstudent.WhenIstartedseniorEnglish,Ifound∧itmuchmoredifficultthanthatwhatwelearnedinjuniorschoolandIalmostlostmy＼heart.Later,IrealizedtheimportantimportanceofEnglish,soIgotupearlyeverymorning,reciterecitedEnglishword,listenedtoEnglishtapesanddidalotofexerciseexercises.IalsoaskedmyteachersandclassmatesforbetterwaystooflearningEnglish.Now,I'mimprovingmyEnglishgreatly.ButAndI'mgettingmoreandmoreinterestedwithinlearningit.Thankyousomuchforyourgreathelpinyourclass.(5)Yesterday,LiMeigoeswenttoastoretoreturnashirtwithoutcarryingthereceipt(收据)．Whenshegotthere，she∧wasrefused.Thesalesmansaidthathe3wouldn'ttakeitbackifunlesssheshowedhimthereceipt.Thinkingittherewasnowayout，LiMeiputtheshirtbackinherbagandleft.Suddenlytwoshopguardguardsstoppedherandbegantosearchfor＼her.Theyfoundtheshirtinthebagandlookedatitcarefulcarefully.Manyeyeswerestaringather,whatwhichmadeLiMeiveryembarrassingembarrassed.Luckily,athesalesmancameupintimeandshewasallowedtogo.(6)I'maseniorstudentfromChina,agingagedseventeen.WhilesurfingtheInternet,IhavefoundthatyourorganizationwillholdasummercampinSingapore.Withgreatlygreatinterest,I'dliketoapplyforthemit.I'manoutgoinggirlwholikelikescommunicatingwithothers.IcouldcanspeakEnglishwell.MywrittenEnglishisexcellent,eithertoo.Iwishtojoinintheactivities.Foronething,I'mwillingtointroduceChinatootherstudentsfromallover∧theworld;foranother,Iexpecttolearnfrom＼moreaboutothercountries.Inaddition,I'dliketomakefriendfriends.ThechanceissopreciousasthatI'mreallylookingforwardtoyourapproval.(7）WhenIfirstlearnedtowriteinEnglish,Irunranintomanydifficulties.Themainproblemwasin＼thatIalwaysthoughtinChineseandtriedtotranslateanythingeverythingintoEnglish.Myteacheradvisedmetokeepmyadiary.Ifollowedheradvicesoandputdown100wordsorsoeachday.SoonIbegantoenjoytalktalkingtomyselfonpaperasIwaslearningtoexpressmemyselfinsimpleEnglish.OnedayIwrotealittlestoryandshowed∧ittomyteacher.Shelikeditverymuchandreadingreadittotheclass.All4saidthestorywasagoodone.Theirwordwordswereagreatencouragementtome.（8)LiYueandZhangHuawentto∧anursinghomeanddidsomevoluntaryworkonMayDay.AtOntheirarrival,theywerewarmwarmlywelcomed.Theypresentedtheelderlypeoplewithflowersandfruits.Then,theystartedworkingatonce,cleaningthewindowsandsweptsweepingthefloor.Everythingdone,theysitsatintheyardchattingwiththeelderly.Whenitwastimeforthevolunteervolunteerstoleave,theelderlythankedthemfortheirkindness.LiYueandZhangHuawereveryhappybecauseof＼whattheydidbringbroughtjoytoothers.Italsoenrichedourtheirownexperience.Theymadeapromisewhichthattheywouldcomeagaintoseetheelderlywhenevertheywerefree.(9)It'sreportedthatmanypeopledieddieoftrafficaccidentseachyear.Roadsafetyhasarousedthewidelywideattentionofthepublic.Manyruleshave∧beenmadetoreducethetrafficcrashes,especiallyfor＼theonesinvolvedinthepedestrians.Inmyopinion,weshouldmaketakeroadsafetyseriouslyinourdailylife.Whileusedusingtheroad,wemustwalkonthepavementandlearntoprotectusourselves.Besides,cardriversshouldobeythetrafficrules,thatwhichisbothgoodforthemselvesandothers.Intheaword,obeyingthetrafficrulesareiswhatallofusshouldpayattentiontoparticularly.Afterall,lifeisnotasmallmatter.（10）DearDavid，Ihaverecentlyfeltguilty,staystayingsleeplessatnight.Youmaywonderhowwhy.To5tellyouthetruth,itisjustbecauseofthefactthatIseldomoftencheatinexamsandIjustcan'tstopmemyself.Inmanyexams,Iusedcellphonestosurfthenetforan