雅思写作议论文

雅思写作——议论文议论文介绍提问方式写作结构范文分析真题练习介绍写作时间：大作文35-40分钟字数：250-280字各段分配：Introduction：40-50字Mainbody：60-70字/段（3段）90字/段（2段）Conclusion：30-40字格式缩进式齐头式评分标准A.任务回应——TaskresponseExample：有些人认为孩子应该由儿童看护中心照顾而不是交给祖父母，你多大程度上同意或不同意？同意：1.儿童看护中心能提供更专业的照顾。2.孩子与同龄人相处，提高社交能力。3.祖父母照顾时容易溺爱孩子。不同意：1.祖父母能够提供一对一的教育。2.祖父母作为亲人会更贴心更有耐心的照顾孩子。同意：1.在看护中心，孩子能够受到更专业的教育。2.专业的教育能够为孩子未来的学习打下良好的基础。（或）1.在看护中心，孩子能够学会和同龄人相处。2.从小培养社交能力有利于孩子未来的生活和工作。然后。。。B.连贯与衔接Cohesion&Coherence天净沙·秋思马致远枯藤老树昏鸦，小桥流水人家，古道西风瘦马。夕阳西下，断肠人在天涯。C.词汇资源——LexicalResource词汇升级：1.ItisalsoimportanttonotethatmoregirlsgotohighschoolinallpartsoftheworldexceptEastAsia.2.ItisalsoworthnotingthatfemalesaremorelikelytoattendsecondschoolinallregionsexceptEastAsia.3.AlsonoteworthyisthefactthatfemalesaremorelikelytoreceiveasecondaryeducationinallregionsexceptEastAsia.注意拼写：analyze→analyse;apartment→flat不可缩写：isn't→isnot;can't→cannot注：student's√D.语法结构的范围&准确性——GrammarRangeandAccuracy句式变换多样:被动；倒装；从句等。提问方式1.Somepeoplethinkthateveryoneshouldbeavegetarianbecausepeopledon’tneedtoeatmeattostayhealthy.Towhatextentdoyouagreeordisagree?2.Somepeoplesaythatgovernmentshouldgivethehealthcarethefirstpriorities.Someothersbelievethattherearemoreimportantprioritiestospendthetaxpayers’money.Discussbothviewsandgiveyourownopinion.3.Insomecountries,moreandmoreadultsarecontinuingtolivewiththeirparentsevenaftertheyhavecompletededucationandfoundjobs.Dotheadvantagesoutweighthedisadvantages?占比写作结构Example：Nowadayscomputersarewidelyusedineducation.Asaresult,somepeoplethinkteachersnolongerplayimportantrolesinclassrooms.Towhatextentdoyouagreeordisagree?1.Introduction简单阐述问题/现象；给出自己观点Inventedlessthanahundredyearsago,computersarenowusedeverywhere,eveninsideclassrooms.Whileteachersremainmoreorlessthesame,computersaredoublinginspeedandcapabilityeveryfouryears.Inlightoftheincreasingpresenceandimportanceofcomputersinclassrooms,peoplecannothelpwonderingwhetherteachersareasimportantastheyoncewere.//AsfarasIamconcerned,teachersstillplayamajorroleandarestillofgreatimportance.2.Mainbody段一：支持观点1.主旨句+论据（举例、对比、解释、影响）Itiswellknownthatcomputersarebetteratrepetitiveworkbutincapableofcreativethinking.Howeveradvancedtheymaybe,computersarenothingmorethanhumancontrivances,programmedtoperformcertaintasks.//Theyareunabletodealwithstudentswithdifferentbackground.Needlesstosay,aclassroomisaplacewhereindividualattentionandcreativitymattermost.Therefore,computersarenobetterthanothertoolsusedbyteachersandcouldnotpossiblyunderminetherolesplayedbythem.段2：支持观点2主旨句+论据（举例、对比、解释、影响）Itmightbearguedthatintermsofaccuracyandtheamountofinformation,computersoutshinehumans;buttomakeagoodteachermeansfarmorethanbeinganencyclopaediawhereonecanaccessallrelevantinformation.//Indeed,agoodteacherorganizesandinspiresthestudents,puttingthemintodifferentgroupsandsharingwiththemhisorherownexperienceandunderstandingofacertainsubject.Insteadofbeingthesourceofknowledge,ateacherismorelikeaguidewhoshowsstudentstherightpathtowardstheirdestination.段3：支持观点3or折中（另一方观点）主旨句+论据（举例、对比、解释、影响）Besides,theinteractionbetweenstudentsandteachersisvitalforthelearning.//Accordingtomosteducationauthorities,reallearningoccursduringthediscussionandsharingofideaswithone’steacherandclassmates,whichisataskbeyondthepowerofcomputers.Moreover,ateacheristheretomonitoreveryslightchangeinstudents’attitude,torespondtoandencouragethemwhenevertheyshowsignsoffrustrationandimpatience.Withoutthiskindofinteraction,educationisunimaginable.3.Conclusion重申自己观点。（可Paraphrase支持论点）简单总结Inconclusion,despitetheincreasingpresenceofcomputersinsideclassrooms,teachersarejustasessential,ifnotmoreso,asinstructorswereinthepast.Someinherentdrawbacksmakeitimpossibleforcomputerstoreplaceteachersinclassroomswherecreativethinkingandinterpersonalskillsarevitaltoensuresuccess.总结Introduction：简单阐述问题/现象；给出自己观点MainBody：支持观点1主旨句+论据支持观点2（举例、对比、支持观点3/折中/转折解释、影响）Conclusion：重申观点；Paraphrase；简单总结PracticeSomepeoplethinkgovernmentshouldinvestmoremoneyinteachingsciencethanothersubjectsinorderforacountrytodevelopandprogress.Towhatextentdoyouagreeordisagree？(2016.1.9)