65高考英语作文教学课件

高考英语作文“六步法”教学创意与制作:新世纪中学郭中伦Step1．仔细审题Step2.理清要点Step3.译写单句Step4.连句成篇Step5.检查润色Step6.定稿誊写高考英语作文“六步法”教学范例1题目：Mr.SmithandMr.Greenusedtobeneighborsforyears.OnemorningMr.SmithcalledatMr.Green’s.Thefollowingistheirconversation.S:Goodmorning.G:Goodmorning.S:Ihaven’tseenyoursonTomforalongtime.Hashemadegreatachievements?G:Oh…,Idon’tknowifheissuccessful,butIknowthathehasdrawnthegovernment’sattentionandthepolicearesearchingforhim..分析：题目不难，但要完成两件事情：一是要把要点表达清楚，要传神、达意；二是要把直接引语转换成间接引语。要求：1、用间接引语描述如上幽默故事。2、词数为80~100。第一步：仔细审题情景提供的方式是对话，题材是故事。内容是两个邻居之间的一段幽默对话，涉及到的词汇有：usedto，callon，hesitate，makeachievements，etc,涉及的句子有简单句、并列句、和复合句。词数为80~100。第二步：理清要点本文是一篇记序文，发生的时间是一天下午，地点是Mr.Green家,人物有Mr.Smith和Mr.Green，事件是谈论Mr.Green的儿子，故事以Mr.Green一段幽默的话结尾。所以，本文要点如下：1、Mr.Smith和Mr.Green是曾是多年的邻居。2、一天上午，Mr.Smith去Mr.Green家拜访。3、他们互致问候早上好。4、Mr.Smith说他已多年不见Mr.Green的儿子Tom了，相知到他是否已取得了很大的成就。5、Mr.Smith踌躇了一会儿，说不知道儿子是否取得成就，但政府很重视他，警察也在全国各地找他。.第三步：译写单句1.Mr.SmithandMr.Greenusedtobeneighborsformanyyears.2.Onemorning,Mr.SmithcalledonMr.Greenathishouse.3.Theysaidgoodmorningtoeachother.4.Mr.SmithsaidthathehadnotseenMr.Green’sson,Tomforseveralyears.Heaskedifhehadmadegreatachievements.5.Mr.Greenhesitatedforamoment.Hesaidhedidnotknowifmadeanyachievements.Hesaidheknewthatthegovernmentsaidthathissonwasveryimportant.Thepolicewereafterhimeverywhereinthecountry.第四步：连句成篇Mr.SmithandMr.Greenusedtobeneighborsformanyyears.Onemorning,Mr.SmithcalledonMr.Greenathishouse.Theysaid“goodmorning”toeachother.ThenMr.SmithsaidthathehadnotseenMr.Green’sson,Tomforseveralyears.Heaskedifhehadmadegreatachievements.Mr.Greenhesitatedforamoment.Hesaidhedidnotknowifmadeanyachievements.Hesaidheonlyknewthatthegovernmentsaidthathissonwasveryimportant,forthepolicewereafterhimeverywhereinthecountry.第五步：检查润色Mr.SmithandMr.Greenusedtobeneighborsformanyyears.Onemorning,Mr.SmithcalledonMr.Greenathishouse.First,theygreetedeachother(←said“goodmorning”toeachother),thentheytalkedaboutMr.Green’sson,Tom.Mr.SmithsaidthathehadnotseenMr.Green’sson,Tomforseveralyearsandwondered(←.Heasked)ifhehadmadegreatachievements.Mr.Greenhesitatedforamoment.Thenhesaidhedidnotknowifmadeanyachievements,buthesaidheonlyknewthatthegovernmentthought(←said)thathissonwas“very”important,forthepolicewereafterhimeverywhereinthecountry.第六步：定稿誊写Mr.SmithandMr.Greenusedtobeneighborsformanyyears.Onemorning,Mr.SmithcalledonMr.Greenathishouse.First,theygreetedeachother,thentheytalkedaboutMr.Green’sson,Tom.Mr.SmithsaidthathehadnotseenMr.Green’sson,Tomforseveralyearsandwonderedifhehadmadegreatachievements.Mr.Greenhesitatedforamoment.Thenhesaidhedidnotknowifmadeanyachievements,buthesaidheonlyknewthatthegovernmentthoughtthathissonwas“very”important,forthepolicewereafterhimeverywhereinthecountry.第六步：定稿誊写Mr.SmithandMr.Greenusedtobeneighborsformanyyears.Onemorning,Mr.SmithcalledonMr.Greenathishouse.First,theygreetedeachother,thentheytalkedaboutMr.Green’sson,Tom.Mr.SmithsaidthathehadnotseenMr.Green’sson,Tomforseveralyearsandwonderedifhehadmadegreatachievements.Mr.Greenhesitatedforamoment.Thenhesaidhedidnotknowifmadeanyachievements,buthesaidheonlyknewthatthegovernmentthoughtthathissonwas“very”important,forthepolicewereafterhimeverywhereinthecountry.范例2题目：根据以下提示，用英语写一篇介绍香港的短文，字数100字左右。香港位于中国的东南部，面积1045平方公里，人口600多万，被称为“东方明珠”。1842年鸦片战争后，当时的中国政府被迫将香港割让给英国。1997年她已回到祖国的怀抱，其前景会更美好。参考词汇：明珠pearl，鸦片opium。第一步：仔细审题本文属说明性文章。第二步：理清要点1、香港的地理位置、面积和人口。2、鸦片战争后香港的处境。3、1997年她回到祖国的怀抱。4、其前景会更美好。第三步：译写单句1.HongKongliesinthesoutheastofChina.Herareais1,045k㎡.Herpopulationismorethan6million.2.ShewasgivenuptoBritainafterthe1842OpiumWar.3.In1997,shereturnedtomotherland.4.Herfutureisverybeautiful.第四步：连句成篇HongKongliesinthesoutheastofChina.Herareais1,045k㎡and(←.Her)populationismorethan6million.ShewasgivenuptoBritainafterthe1842OpiumWar.In1997,shereturnedtomotherlandand(←.Her)futureisverybeautiful.第五步：检查润色1HongKongliesinthesoutheastofChina.shehasanareaof(←Herareais)1,045k㎡and(←.Her)hasapopulationofmorethan6million(←populationismorethan6million).Sheiswell-knownas“thePearloftheEast”.In1842,ShewasgivenuptoBritainbythethenChinesegovernmentafterthe1842OpiumWar,andthepeopleinHongKonglivedahardlife.In1997,shereturnedtomotherlandandthepeopleofHongKongareandwillbeworkinghardtomakehermorebeautiful.(←.Her)futureisverybeautiful.第五步：检查润色1之后的文章HongKongliesinthesoutheastofChina.shehasanareaof1,045k㎡andhasapopulationofmorethan6million.Sheiswell-knownas“thePearloftheEast”.In1842,ShewasgivenuptoBritainbythethenChinesegovernmentafterthe1842OpiumWar,andthepeopleinHongKonglivedahardlife.In1997,shereturnedtomotherlandandthepeopleofHongKongareandwillbeworkinghardtomakehermorebeautiful.第五步：检查润色2HongKongliesinthesoutheastofChina.shehasanareaof1,045k㎡andhasapopulationofmorethan6millionand(←.She)iswell-knownas“thePearloftheEast”.In1842,thethenChinesegovernmentwasforcedtogiveupHongKongtoBritain(←ShewasgivenuptoBritainbythethenChinesegovernment)aftertheOpiumWar,andthepeopleinHongKongsufferedalot(←livedahardlife).AfterthereturnofHongKongtoChinain1997(←In1997,shereturnedtomotherlandandthepeopleofHongKongareand),th