Book 1 Unit 2 Writing 建议信

Book1Unit2Writing建议信[文体分析]1．概念：建议信是写信人对某事提出的建议和忠告。2．分类：(1)建议信有可能是写给个人，就其遇到的某个问题提出自己的看法和观点。(2)建议信也可能是写给某个组织或机构，就改进其服务提出建议或忠告。3．内容安排：(1)首段：表明写作意图。陈述事由，简单介绍自己，注意语气。(2)主体段落：应该首先肯定对方的优点，然后再写需要改进的地方或针对具体情况提出具体建议或忠告。(3)结尾段：对提出的建议进行总结，要注意有礼貌以使读者容易接受。4．语言特征：提出的理由要合情合理，语气一定要礼貌。因此建议信要写得简明扼要、目的明确、具有合理性和说服力。[高分句式]A．建议信开头常用句式：1．Iamsorrytoknowthat...2．Iamverygladtohearthatyouwantto...3．Iknowyouhavetroublein...4．Iamwritingtoyouforthepurposeof...5．Inmypersonalopinion,itwouldbewiseofyoutotakethefollowingaction...B．建议信主体段落常用句式，给出建议：1．first，firstly，secondly，then，afterthat，intheend，finally，meanwhile.2．Ithinkitwouldbemorebeneficialifyoucould...C．建议信结尾常用句式：1．Ibelieveyouwilltakemyadviceintoaccount.2．Ihopeyouwillfindtheseproposals/suggestionspractical/useful/helpful.3．Iwillbemorethanhappytoseeimprovementsinthisregard.[佳作构建]假如你是李华，上周日去动物园，看到游客对动物乱扔石子甚至往一头熊的脑袋上泼水，对此你感到非常气愤。现在请你用英语就此事给某报社编辑写一封信，并提出你的建议：请求该报社帮助呼吁人们保护和尊重动物。词数：100－120个词，开头已给出，不计入总词数。[审题立意]项目结论体裁①________话题②________时态③________人称④________答案：①建议信②提出建议③以一般现在时为主④以第一人称为主[谴词造句]1．人们对动物的恶劣行径，令我深感遗憾和羞愧。①对……感到羞愧________②用what从句翻译此句Ifellterriblysorryand________________.2．任何虐待动物的人都要被罚款。①一般表达(and并列句)___________________________________________________，andtheyshouldbefined.②句式升级(定语从句)→___________________________________________________shouldbefined.3．首先，我们应让人们知道：动物是我们的朋友，而且对人类的生活很重要。①一般表达First，weshouldmakepeopleknowthatanimalsareourfriendsandareimportanttopeople'slife.②句式升级(运用notonly...butalso)First，weshouldmakepeopleknowanimalsare________________________________________________________________.4．Isuggestthattheseanimalsshouldbesetfreeinnature.①汉语译文：_____________________________________________________②句式升级(转换为表语从句)_____________________________________________________答案：1.①beashamedofsth....②ashamedofwhatpeopledidtotheanimals2．①Manypeopletreattheanimalsbadly②Anyonewhotreatsanimalsbadly3．②notonlyourfriendsbutalsoimportanttopeople'slife4．①我建议这些动物应被放归自然。②Mysuggestionsisthattheseanimalsshouldbesetfreeinnature.[连句成篇]答案：DearEditor，HereIwritetotellyouaboutwhatIsawinthezoolastSunday.Ifeelterriblysorryandashamedofwhatpeopledidtotheanimals.Itseemedthatmanyanimalskeptinthezoowerenotbeingtreatedwell.Isawmanyvisitorsthrowsomestonesatthemandsomevisitorsevenpouredwaterontoabigbear'shead.Somepeoplejustlookedandlaughed，butnoonethoughtthosewerewrong.Hereiswhatweshoulddo.First，weshouldmakepeopleknowanimalsarenotonlyourfriendsbutalsoimportanttopeople'slife.Second,anyonewhotreatsanimalsbadlyshouldbefined.Last,ifpeoplecan'tstopdoingso，mysuggestionisthattheseanimalsshouldbesetfreeinnature.Ihopeyoucanhelpeducatepeopletoloveandrespectanimals.Thankyou.Yourssincerely，LiHua实战演练•Unit2作业5Usinglanguage第三大题：书面表达