作文评讲课---演讲稿 写作---张莉

写作（演讲稿）高三英语组：张莉课程安排：1.讲评考试作文题目及写作技巧；2.当堂评改学生考试过程中所写作文；3.范文示例；4.类似题材分析；5.尝试写作；6.点评范文。[题目要求](2011·江西高考)假设你是成都七中（星光中学）的李华，将参加主题为“Let‘sRideBicycles”的英语演讲比赛。请撰写一份演讲稿，主要内容包括：1．目前汽车带来的空气污染和交通堵塞等问题；2．骑自行车的益处，如节能环保、有利健康等。参考词汇：低碳生活lowcarbonlife节能energysaving注意：1.词数：120词左右；2．演讲稿开头和结尾已给出，且该部分不计入总词数。Goodmorning,everyone,IamLiHuafromChengduNo.7HighSchool.Thetopicofmyspeechis“Let'sRideBicycles”．____________________________________________________________________________________________Thankyou![技法指导]演讲稿是人们在工作和社会生活中经常使用的一种文体，它是在较为隆重的仪式上和某些公众场所发表的讲话文稿。写好演讲稿，应注意以下三点：1．格式演讲稿一般由三部分组成，即：称呼语(Greetings)、正文(Body)和结束语(Closing)。常见的称呼语有Ladiesandgentlemen,Friends,Boysandgirls等，一般称呼语前不使用Dear。2．内容演讲稿的主题部分应该阐述清楚事情的缘由、结果和要求。第一部分的内容应该以详细完整地介绍事情为主，具体地讲，包括事情的发生、发展及结局。第二部分的内容应该提出发言稿的主题，如欢迎、欢送、号召、建议、个人看法等。3．语言演讲稿以简单句为主要的表达形式。同时，演讲稿的语言必须有感染力，所以演讲稿可以使用祈使句、感叹句、强调句等句式来达到这种目的。写作时要注意适当地使用关联词承前启后，用词要得体，符合语言环境。第一步构建框架，清晰行文[谋篇布局]第二步打造亮句，增色文章第三步串句成文，保证流畅第一步构建框架，清晰行文[谋篇布局][黄金模板]Boysandgirls/Ladiesandgentlemen,It'sagreathonorformetostandhereandgivemyspeech.Mynameis______________________(自我介绍).Thetopicofmyspeechis_________________(发言主题)．Tobeginwith,manypeoplesuggestthat...Secondly,...Thirdly...(话题或现象列举)．WhatIwanttostressisthat_____________________(重申主题).Foronething,...Foranother,...Besides,...(原因或重要性列举).Inaword,___________(总结)．Thankyouforyourlistening./Thankyou.第二步打造亮句，增色文章1．我认为，骑自行车是一个好的解决办法。►Inmyopinion,itisagoodsolutiontoridebicycles.►AsfarasI'mconcerned,ridingbicyclesisagoodsolution.2．众所周知，随着人们生活水平的提高，汽车已经成为一种很受欢迎的交通方式。►It'sknowntoall/thatwiththeimprovementofpeople'slivingstandards,carshavebecomeapopularmeansoftransport.►Asisknowntoall,withtheimprovementofpeople'slivingstandards,carshavebecomeapopularmeansoftransport.第三步串句成文，保证流畅Let’sridebicyclesHelloeveryone,I'mlihuafromchengdumiddleschool,I'mgladtostandhere,andthetopicofspeechislet’sridebicycles.Asweallknow,withthesteadygrowthofpeople'slivingstandards,peoplehaveenoughmoneytopayforcars.Thatbringmoreconvenienceforus.Butcarsalsobringsomebadproblemstous.Forexample,themorecarsinlifethemorecrowdedinlife,whichiseasytocausetrafficjams.What'smore,carsnotonlycauseairpillutionbutalsoruinourhealth.Whataseriousproblemis,andhowtosolveit.AsfarasI'mconcerned,ridingbicyclesisagoodway.Withthegloblewarmingsothatweshouldlearntoenergysavingandlow-carbonlife.Ridingbicyclescandoit.Inaddition,ridingbicyclescankeepourfitandreducetrafficjams.It'salsohelpusdomoreexersisetokeephealth.Solet'sridebicyclestoprotectourhomes.I'mlookingforwardtoyoujoiningus.范文示例：Goodmorning,everyone,IamLiHuafromChengduNo.7HighSchool.Thetopicofmyspeechis“Let'sRideBicycles”.Asisknowntoall,withtheimprovementofpeople'slivingstandards,carshavebecomeapopularmeansoftransport,bringinggreatconveniencetoourlife.However,theyhavealsocausedsomeproblemssuchasairpollutionandtrafficjams.Howcanwesolvetheseproblemsthen?AsfarasI'mconcerned,ridingbicyclesisagoodsolution.Foronething,bicyclesdon'tneedanypetrolandtheyareenergy-saving.Foranother,bicyclesareenvironmentallyfriendlybecausetheywon'tgiveoffwastegas.What'smore,ridingbicyclesisagoodwayforustoexerciseanditisbeneficialtoourhealth.Therefore,let'staketheresponsibilitytobuildupalowcarboncitybyridingbicycles.Comeonandjoinus!Thankyou假定你校将举行一个成人仪式，你将作为代表在仪式上发言。请你按以下内容要点准备一篇英文发言稿。1．过去对成年的向往；2．现在的感受和认识；3．将来的目标及措施。参考词汇：责任responsibility注意：1.词数100左右；2.可以适当增加细节，使行文连贯；3.发言稿的开头与结束语已为你写好(不计入总词数)。Goodmorning,everyone!Thetopicofmyspeechtodayis“Thoughtsonbecomingagrownup”．___________________________________________________________________Thankyouforlistening.[写作点拨]：这是一篇演讲稿体裁的半开放式作文。命题者从“过去→现在→将来”三个时间阶段出发，给考生一个自由发挥的空间，并考查学生灵活转换时态的能力。写作时要避免逐词逐句翻译，除了语言基本功外还要注意好句子的运用，出一些闪光点。[写作要点]1.梦想着做某事：dreamofdoing2.表达目标：aimto/mypurposeisto...3.有……的责任：haveresponsibilityfor...[写作范文]:Goodmorning,everyone!Thetopicofmyspeechtodayis“Thoughtsonbecomingagrownup”．Asachild,IalwayshopedthatIcouldgrowupassoonaspossiblesothatIcouldhavewhateverIwantedanddowhateverIliked.NowI'magrownup,butIfindthingsdonotgoasIexpected.AlthoughIcanenjoymorefreedom,atthesametimeIrealizethatbeingagrownupnotonlymeansthis,butalsomoreresponsibilities.Ihopetodomoreformyparentsandsocietyinthefuturetomakemylifemoremeaningful.Toreachthegoal,Imustfirsttrymybesttopassthecollegeentranceexaminationandenteragooduniversity.Thankyouforlistening.(2012·日照模拟)假定你是某学校学生会主席，你校将选拔学生参加模特大赛。请你按以下内容要点准备一篇英文发言稿，谈谈你的看法，并鼓励大家积极参与。1．实现梦想；2．学会生活；3．促进学习。注意：1.词数120—150；2.可以适当增加细节，使行文连贯；3.发言稿的开头与结束语已为你写好(不计入总词数)。Goodmorning,everyone!It‘sknownthatourschoolwillchoosesomestudentstoattendthemodelcontest.Inmyopinion，----------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------Thankyouforlistening.参考范文：Goodmorning,everyone!It'sknownthatourschoolwillchoosesomestudentstoattendthemodelcontest.Inmyopinion,it'sagoodideaforusstudentstoenterforthemodelcontest.Someofusarefondoffashionandmodeling.Wewanttobefashiondesignersorprofessionalmodels.Wemaywellseizetheopportunitytomakeourdreamscometrue.Beside