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1Howtomakecompositionbetter?(Basedonthemonthlytest—ComparisonbetweenAdvantagesandDisadvantagesType)234Whatmakesagoodfirstimpressionofyourcomposition?5Whatmakesupagoodcomposition?StructureSentenceWord&Expression6Structure---Agoodcompositionisonewith“perfectbody”.7Whichoneisbetterinstructure?89StructureTopicparagraphSupportingParagraph1(advantages)SupportingParagraph2(disadvantages)ConcludingparagraphTopic&AdvantageParagraphs10Brainstorm--Wordsusedtolinkthesentencestogether11Sentence---Agoodcompositionisonewithvariedsentences.12I.Wetakemobilephonetoschool.Itwillhaveaninfluenceonourstudy.Which,EX:手机在日常生活中很有用,使人们保持联系变得更加简单。(makeiteasierto..)Mobilephoneisveryusefulindailylife,whichmakesiteasierforpeopletokeepintouchwitheachother.13II.Thereasonwhy/for…isthat…EX:学校禁止学生带手机入校的原因是手机会干扰教学。Thereasonwhyschoolforbidsstudentstobringmobilephonetoschoolisthatitmaydisturbteaching.14III.With的复合结构with/without+名词/代词+分词/不定式/形容词/副词/介词短语15III.With的复合结构eg:Whentheclassison,callingonthephoneisconsideredasanimpolitedeed(行为).,callingonthephoneisconsideredasanimpolitedeed.Withtheclasson16III.With的复合结构EX1:Becausethephonehadbeenlost,wecouldn’tcallourrelativesanymore.Withthephonelost,wecouldn’tcallourrelativesanymore.17III.With的复合结构EX2:如果合理的利用手机,我们能生活的更加美好。Withusingthephonereasonably,wecanhaveabetterlife.18III.With的复合结构与状从的转换法则不动主句动从句,连词去掉改with;主谓宾补相对应,主被关系要分清P.S时态跟我没关系,没关系啊没关系!19Words&ExpressionsApoordogbarkspoorly:20Words&ExpressionsAwealthydogwithadvancedbarks:21Summary:Agoodcompositionisonewithclearstructure.Agoodcompositionisonewithvariedsentences.Agoodcompositionisonewithadvancedwordsandexpressions.22Homework:1.Completeyourowncomposition!2.FinishtheclozeonPaper2.2324Goodafternoon,everyone!Thetopicofmyspeechtodayis“MyAttitudetobeinginFashioninSchool”.Nowinourschoolthereisahotpursuitoffashion.Somestudentsliveaveryexpensivelife._______._______,theyhopetolooksmartandspecial._______,theywanttowinothers’admirationandrespect.Inaddition,itmakesthemfeelcool._______,westudentsshouldholdtherightsenseofvalues.Weshouldpracticethriftinourdailylife._____,itisadvisableforustodonatesomepocketmoneytotheHopeProjectsothatthosepoorchildreninruralareascanreturntoschool.______,itistheinnerbeautyratherthanourappearancethatmakesusrespectable.Thankyouforlistening!A.thereasonswhytheydosoareasfollowsB.firstlyC.lastbutnotleastD.what’smoreE.asfarasIamconcernedF.SecondlyABCDEF
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