英语四级作文短语、句式

一、作文开头万能句1、Withthedevelopmentoftechnologyandscience,随着科学技术的发展（后面一定要接句子，不能单独使用）Withthegrowth\progressoftechnologyandscience=Coincidentwiththeadvancementofscienceandtechnology.2、ConsideringtheworseningsituationinChina,attentionmustbepouredintoprotectingtheenvironment.(考虑到中国越来越坏的情况，环境保护需要引起更多的重视。)3、ThefirstfiveyearsofthenewcenturywitnessedtheincreasingdevelopmentofChina.(本世纪的头五年见证了中国的快速发展。)Astheglobaleconomygrowsatafeverpitch,……4、Coincidentwiththefastgrowingnationaleconomy,thereexistsanunfavorableandprevalentphenomenoninChina.5、Therearegrowingconcernfor……6、Inrecentyears,itiscommontosee\hearthat……7、Thereisageneraltendencythat……（有一种趋势）二、作文内容的陈述结构inthefirstplace/secondly/ontopofthat以下手段是增加句子复杂性的常见方法，也是得高分的“亮点”。1.改变句子的开头方式，不要一味地都是主语开头，接着是谓语、宾语，最后再加一个状语。可以把状语置于句首，或用分词做状语等。〔原文〕Wemetattheschoolgateandwenttheretogetherearlyinthemorning.〔修正〕Earlyinthemorningwemetattheschoolgateandwenttheretogether.〔原文〕Theyoungmancouldn’thelpcryingwhenheheardthebadnews.〔修正〕Hearingthebadnews，theyoungmancouldn’thelpcrying.2.在整篇文章中，避免只使用一两个句式，要灵活运用诸如倒装句、强调句、主从复合句、分词状语等。①强调句〔原文〕Imethiminthestreetyesterday.〔修正〕ItwasinthestreetthatImethimyesterday.ItwasyesterdaythatImethiminthestreet.②由with或without引导的短语。如:Hesatinachairwithanewspaperinthehand.③分词短语。如:Satisfiedwiththeresult，Hedecidedtogoonwithanewexperiment.④倒装句。如:Onlyinthiswaycanweachieveourgoal.NeverbeforehaveIseensuchawonderfulfilm.Notonlyshouldwestudyinthecollege,butalsolearnhowtobeadecentperson.⑤省略句。如:Ifso，victorywillbeours.Youcanmakesomechangeswherevernecessary.3.通过分句和合句，增强句子的连贯性和表现力。〔原文〕Hestoppedushalfanhourago.Hemadeuscatchthenextoffender.〔修正〕Hestoppedushalfanhouragoandmadeuscatchthenextoffender.〔原文〕Wehadashortrest.Thenwebegantoplayhappily.Wesanganddanced.Sometoldstories.Someplayedchess.〔修正〕Afterashortrest，wehadgreatfunsinginganddancing，tellingjokesandplayingchess.注意使用不同长度的句子，要结合使用，不能只用短句或只用长句。4.学会使用过渡词。如:①递进:then(然后)，besides(还有)，furthermore(而且)，moreover(此外)等。②转折:however(然而)，but(但是)，onthecontrary(相反)，afterall(毕竟)等。③总结:finally(最后)，atlast(最后)，inbrief(总之)，inconclusion(最后)等。④强调:indeed(确实)，certainly(一定)，surely(确定)，aboveall(尤其)等。⑤对比:inthesameway(同样地)，justas(正如)，ontheonehand…ontheotherhand(一方面……另一方面……)等。相似的比较：similarly,inthesamemanner相反的比较：ontheotherhand,conversely,whereas,while,instead,nevertheless,incontrast,onthecontrary,comparedwith…,5.注意使用词组、习语来代替一些单词，以增加文采。如:〔原文〕Anewrailwayisbeingbuiltinmyhometown.〔修正〕Anewrailwayisunderconstructioninmyhometown.6.避免重复使用某一单词或短语。如:〔原文〕Ilikereadingwhilemybrotherlikeswatchingtelevision.〔修正〕Ilikereadingwhilemybrotherenjoyswatchingtelevision.Ilikereadingwhilewatchingtelevisionappealstomybrother.三、结尾1、Allinall,whatreallymattersis,infact,that……（比如说到和谐社会Allinall,whatreallymattersis,infact,thatweshouldbuildoursocietyaharmonioussociety.）2、Therefore,it’snotdifficulttodrawaconclusionthat……3、Asaresult,weshouldtakeeffectivemeasurestodosth.（我们必须采取一些有效的措施来做些什么）4、Fromwhathasbeendiscussedabove,wemayconcludethat……5、Obviously（此为过渡短语）,wecandrawtheconclusionthatgoodmannersarisefrompolitenessandrespectforothers.四、一些用法1、陈述个人的观点Itisallegedthat(据说)Inmyview,bothsidesarepartlyright(两方面都部分的正确)AsfarasIamconcerned(就我而言)AsregardstomeMyownpointofviewisthat……Personally,Ibelievethat……Myexperiencetellsmethat……Theinventionofthehandset,Idaretosay,turnsouttobeatremendoushit.Theapplicationofwebsites,Idaretosay,turnsouttobeagreatlyhit.ItcomesasnosurprisethatChineseeconomybecomesincreasinglyhot.2、陈述别人的观点Otherindividuals,however,taketheattitudethat……（错误的观点）sbisunderthefalsebeliefthat……3、图表作文Thetableshows\indicates\revealsthat……（表明、暗示、揭示）Accordingtothestatisticsshowinginthatgraph,wecaneasliysee\found……（根据表中的数据，我们可以看见，发现）Asseenfromthechart/AsisportrayedinthepictureSaleswentintoaslightdecline=salesdeclinedslightly(小幅下降)Salesdeclineddramatically/sharply/greatly/hugely(大幅下降)Abriefglimpseatourcampus(thepicture/cartoon/caricature)vividlyshowsthatmobilephone,becomingmoreandmoreprevalent.五、好的替代themachine\thedevice代替computerhandset代替cellphone*TheMiddleKingdom代替Chinaintensely\cruciallyimportant代替veryimportant(itiscruciallyimportantthatthebenefitsofcollectivebeonourpriority.)approaches代替wayscurrent(currently)代替nowgrowingindividuals代替moreandmorepeopleindividuals/characters/folks代替people,personspositive,favorable,rosy(美好的),promising(有希望的),perfect,pleasurable,excellent,outstanding,代替goodunfavorable,poor,adverse,ill代替badanarmyof,anoceanof,amultitudeof代替many,alotoftaketheattitudethat,holdtheviewthat,itiswidelysharedthat,itisuniversallyacknowledgedthat代替thinkaffair,business,matter代替thingformypart,frommyownperspective代替inmyopinionbeneficial,rewarding代替helpfulexceedingly,extremely,intensely代替verypourattentioninto代替payattentiontobearinmindthat代替rememberenjoy,possess代替havetonameonlyafew/asanexample代替forexample/instance六、常用短语老年人theold\elderly\aged\elderlypopulation\seniorcitizens年轻人youth\youngster\youngadults\adolescent中年人middleadults网吧cybercafé网虫mousepotato电视迷couchpotato优秀的学生outstanding/superior/rare/topstudents坏的影响illeffects农村rural郊区suburban城里urban在当代社会incontemporarysociety双赢awin-winsituation双输alose-losesituation建设有中国特