BEC中级写作

BEC中级写作BEC考试概况考试概况:1.考试时间:每年5,6月份,11,12月份2.报名费用:初级360中级460高级5803.报名地点:大连外国语学院机关楼一楼大外考试中心(带身份证)4.考试地点:笔试(大外图书馆六楼)口语(第四教学楼四楼)自带铅笔橡皮签字笔5.考试顺序:阅读写作听力口语6.考试等级:ABCDE7.考官及监考人员组成:BEC写作介绍:1.时间:45分钟两篇文章2.分数:总分120分每部分30分小作文10分大作文20分3.考试使用英式英语/美式英语都可以不要使用Chinglish或mixture4.题型分析:1.商务便条/商务便函40-502.商务书信/商务报告120-1405.评分标准5.全部完成答题要求所有内容点都已经包括在内并在答题要求下可以加以发挥语言规范,自然,错误少,均属小错多样化的语言结构和丰富的词汇量组织效果好,注意前后呼应语域和格式完全适当给读者的印象极佳语言能力修炼扩大商务词汇量积累商务知识bankbankerbankingorderfinancinginvoiceturnoveroverheadoutstandingdebt/order/balanceInstallmentForinstallmentloan,interestiscalculatedonoutstandingbalance.100万5年10%VATCOD2.积累商务知识-写作所涉及的话题1.工作环境与日常事务(theoffice,environmentandroutine)2.接待和商务休闲活动(entertainment,relationshipswithcolleaguesandclients)3.商务旅行(travel)4.健康(Health)5.购买与销售(buyingandselling)6.公司结构,系统及程序(companystructures,systemsandprocesses)7.产品与服务(productsandservices)8.成就和成绩(resultsandachievements)CompanyStructureHoldingCompany/ParentCompanySubsidiaryWholly-ownedsubsidiaryPartially-ownedsubsidiaryAGM-AnnualGeneralMeetingBoardofDirectors(5人)Chairman/President(1人)BoardofSupervisors(5人)ManagementCEO-ChiefExecutiveOfficerMD-ManagingDirectorLineManager/GeneralManagerHR-HumanResourceFinance(会计)PR-PublicRelationsR&D-ResearchandDevelopmentMarketingDepartmentBalanceSheetAssetsLiabilities500300Equity200Assets:1.currentassets2.fixedassets3.intangibleassets-goodwill4.externalinvestmentBEC写作经典句型同位语和定语从句分词做状语强调句型倒装前置后置定语商务便条类题型分析-NOTEYouworkforacompanywhichproduceslaserprinters.Youarevisitinganothercompany,softcell,tobuysomecomputersoftwaredepartment.Theyhaveexpressedaninterestinyourcompany’sprintersandyouwouldliketotaketwentybrochuresandthreesampleprinterswithyou.Write40-50wordsonyourAnswerSheetWriteashortnotetoMr.JimAsano,thesalesmanager:1.Askingforhispermissiontotaketheseitems.2.Explainingwhyyouwantthem.3.Mentioningthetimeanddatewhenyouwanttocollectthem.出题结构:1.Input:situationdescription(已知信息)2.Task:memo(长,正式用语)note(非正式用语,较短)email(换汤不换药)contentpoints(缺一不可)3.Write:internalmessage(40-50words)(公司结构)注意:格式和内容(内容比格式重要)Content(内容点,发挥部分)Accuracy(语言准确)Conciseness(字数要求)小作文考试注意三点要求商务便函(Memo):例:Christmasiscoming.YourcompanyisgoingtoholdtheannualChristmasparty.Asthesecretaryofthegeneralmanager,youhelparrangethepreparationforit.Writeamemotoalltheemployees.1.Announcingtheplannedparty2.Welcomingalltheemployeestojoinit3.IntroducingtheprogramsofitMentionthetimeandplacethatittakeplaceWrite40-50wordsonyoursheet.写作方法与要求与商务便条类似(语言更正式)商务书信类这一题型要求考生根据所提供的短文,如书信,传真,便函,留言条(电话留言条等),起草一封书信字数要求达到120-140词左右.例题:Youhaveorganizedaproductionconferenceforyourcompanywhichwillbeheldon10October2005.ThefollowingistheconfirmationyoureceivedfromConferenceCentre.(SituationDescription)Readtheletterandfaxbelow,whichgivesdetailsoftheconference.Thenusingallinformationfromthefax,writeyourlettertoJohnSmith(targetreader-目标读者)attheNuffieldConferencecentre,explainingthechangestothearrangement.Donotincludepostaladdresses.Write120-140wordsonseparatesheet.DearConferenceOrganiser:Iamwritingtoconfirmthearrangementsfortheconference.DATEANDTIME:10thOctober-10a.mto5p.m.NUMBEROFGUESTS:50ROOMSRESERVED:10a.m.to12:30p.m.ConferenceHall32p.m.to5p.m.SEMINARROOMS1,2,3CATERING:Coffee—11a.m.to11:30a.m.Lunch---12:30p.m.to2p.m.FAXI’mafraidwehavetomakesomelast-timechangestothearrangementsforourproductionconference.1.Tenmoreguestshaveaccepted.2.Thepresidentwantsonlyonehourforlunch,andjustasimplebuffet-notseatedintherestaurant.TheConferenceSpeakerTommoorscan’tcomeuntil2pm.Sohewillgivehispresentationintheafternoon.Canwemovetheseminarstothemorning?Sorryaboutthis!Sam商务书信类注意:1.不要跑题(内容点,不可节外生枝)2.适当发挥(可以发挥,别跑题)3.目标读者(注意对方职位)4.不要抄袭(不要抄袭题目)-三种对策A.换句型Theruleappliesineverycase.Therearenoexceptionstotherule.(肯定句变否定句)B.换同义词Theargumentsputforwardbythesetwoauthorsarenearlythesame.Theviewsexpressedbythetwowritersarealmostidentical.C.改词性TheEnglishlanguagehashadamajorimpactondevelopingotherworldlanguage.OtherworldlanguageshavebeengreatlyaffectedbytheEnglishintheirdevelopments.商务报告类Yourecentlyattendedaone-daycourseonofficemanagement.Belowisthecourseprogramme,withthecommentsyouwroteonit.Writeashortreportaboutthecourseforyourmanager.IncludeallyourcommentsandsaywhetheryourcompanyshouldsendotherstaffonthiscourseWrite120-140wordsWriteonyourAnswerSheet.DonotwriteincapitallettersOfficeManagementSeminarProgramme9.00-10.45ManagingpeopleanddevelopingproductiveWorkingrelationships(verygeneralnothingnew)10.45-11.00Coffee11.00-12.45Planningtheday,workflow,prioritising(goodpractical)12.45-13.30Lunch13.30-15.15Problem-solvinganddecision-making(fellasleep)15.15-15.30Tea(tooshorttomeetpeople)15.30-17.00Staffappraisalandstaffdevelopment(usefulideas)商务便函和便条审题Mr.Smith,yourboss,toldyoutoaskMsLiutoattendasalespresentationonanewproduct.WriteanotetoMsLiu:Sayingwhowantshertoattendthesalespresentation(分清人物关系-不可盲目)Informingherwhenandwherethesalespresentationwillbeheld商务便函格式商务便函:一般公司往往都印有按照自己公司风格的商业便函MemoTo:(收信人)From:(发信人)Date:(日期)Subject:(事由)Message:(正文)大企业往往拥有许多分支机构,其商务便函信笺包含许多内容:MemoTo:(收信人)From:Company:(分公司)Company:Dept:(部门)Dept:Location&Ext:(地址与分机号)Location&Ext:Subj