高考英语写作之建议信

Aletterofgivingadvice建议信写作的注意事项：a．这类文章一定要符合英语信件的基本格式。b．这类文章的基本时态多用一般现在时和一般将来时。c.人称为第二人称。假设你是李华，你的笔友张明刚去美国上学，他来信说他在交朋友上遇到一些困难，请你给他写一封回信，提一些建议，帮助处理好人际关系。内容提示：1.和同学友好相处，对别人微笑。2.多和别人沟通交流并且试图了解别人的爱好。3.多帮助别人和别人分享你的快乐和悲伤。别人会觉得你很友好，会更愿意和你交朋友这样你会更多的了解别人，交到更多的朋友这样你才能交到真正的朋友三个步骤第一段：写出写信目的；第二段：列出所提建议以及这样做的好处第三段：写出写信人的希望建议信写作步骤DearZhangMing,Iamgladtoreceiveyourletter,Iamsorrytoknowthat(你在..有困难)…However,thesituationiseasytochangeifyoutakemyadvice.Herearesomesuggestionsforyou.Firstly,it'simportantforyoutodosthIfyoudothis,…Secondly,youshould/can…Thatway,…Thirdly,itwouldbeagoodideaif…Bydoingthis,…Ihopeyouwillfindtheseideasuseful.Yours,LiHuaOutliningDearZhangMing,Iamgladtoreceiveyourletter,Iamsorrytoknowthatyouhavetroubleinmakingfriends.However,thesituationiseasytochangeifyoutakemyadvice.Herearesomesuggestionsforyou.Firstly,it'simportantforyoutogetalongwellwithyourclassmatesandsmileatthem.Ifyoudothis,theywillfeelyouarefriendlyandwillbewillingtomakefriendswithyou.•Secondly,youshouldcommunicatewithothersandtrytoknowabouttheirhobbies,Thatway,youcanknowmoreaboutothersandmakemorefriends.Thirdly,itwouldbeagoodideaifyouoftenhelpothersandshareyourhappinessandsadnesswithyourclassmates,Bydoingthis,youcanmakemoretruefriends.•Ihopeyouwillfindtheseideasuseful.•Yours,••LiHua•写作语料库：英语建议信的常用词句A．建议信开头常用句式(照应材料,表明写作意图)1．Iamverygladtohearthatyouwantto…2．Iknowyouhavetroublein…afterreadingyourletter3.Iamwritingtoyouforthepurposeof-----4.Iamwritingtosharesomeadvicewithyou6Inmypersonalopinion,itwouldbewiseofyoutotakethefollowingaction.在下认为，如果你能采取以下措施，将是一种明智的选择。B.建议信第二段常用句式,给出建议，井然有序。第一：first,firstly,firstofall,tobeginwith.第二：second,secondly,what'smore,furthermore,moreover,besides,inaddition最后：third,thirdly,finally,eventually,atlast，lastbutnottheleast2.itwouldbeagoodideaif…3.you’dbetterdosth•给出建议句型：•1.it'sadjforsbtodosth假设你是李华，你的笔友张明来信说他英语学的不大好，请你给他写一封回信，提一些建议，帮助他学好英语。内容提示：1.一定要做好课前预习2.课堂上认真听讲，记好笔记3.课后认真独立完成作业4.每天进行英语听说练习5.加强课外阅读扩大词汇量建议信结尾常用句式1.Ibelieveyouwilltakemyadviceintoaccount.我相信你会认真考虑我的建议的。2.Ihopeyouwillfindthesesuggestionspractical/useful/helpful.我希望这些建议/意见/看法对你来说实用/有用/有帮助。提一些建议，帮助他学好英语。giveyousomeadviceonEnglish/learningEnglish/howtolearnEnglishIwillgiveyousomesuggestionswhichIthinkmaybehelpfultoyou.Herearemysuggestions/tipson….做好课前预习previewPrepare/makepreparationsforLookthrough课堂上认真听讲ListentotheteachercarefullyPayattentiontowhattheteachersayscarefully记好笔记Set/writedownMake/takenotes课后认真独立完成作业每天进行英语听说练习Finishyourhomeworkbyyourself/onyourown/don’tcopyPractiselisteningandspeakingeveryday加强课外阅读扩大词汇量Enrich/enlargeyourvocabulary.•注意衔接词使用:•表先后次序：•First,second,third….Finally•Firstly,secondly，…eventually•tobeginwith/tostartwith,atlast•递进关系：furthermore；moreover；notonly...butalso...；not...but...；,besides；inotherwords；ontheonehand...，ontheotherhand...；meanwhile；atthesametime；点睛之笔：•Nothingisimpossibletoawillingheart!•Practicemakesperfect•Nevergiveup/loseheart•Ifyouhaveanytrouble,pleaseturntomeforhelp.•I’dliketosharemymethodswithyou.•Onlyinthisway,canyoulearnEnglishwell•readnovels,magazinesandeverythingtodowithEnglish改错1.I’llhelpyouinyourEnglish2.MyEnglishisnotverywell.3.Finishitonyourself.4.Therearesomeadvise.5.Don’tafraidofEnglish.6.Setupalearningaim,goaheadtoachieveit.7.Setdowntheknowledgeintheclass8.Youmustlistencarefullyandfollowteacherssaid.9.Onlyifyoureadaboutitaheadofschedule,youwilllearnitbetter.with/OnyourownisbeandwhatadvicewillyouWell---goodOn----by•Iamsureyou’llbesuccess.•Youcansetdownthatyouthinkisimportant.successfulYoucansetdownwhatyouthinkisimportant.allBeautifulsentencesinyoucompositions1.HereissomeusefuladviceforyouabouthowtolearnEnglishwell(class2JirunZe)2.HearingthatyouareintroublewithEnglish,I’dliketogiveyousomeadviceonhowtogetalongwellwithEnglish.(Class1MaguoQin)3.NoonecanfailtonoticethefactthatlisteningandreadingareplayinganimportantroleinlearningEnglish.(Class1HanXu)4.IwillgiveyousomenecessaryadvicewhichcanimproveyourEnglish.(Class7XieShuang)5.Noonecandenythefactthatitisimportanttolistentotheteachercarefully.(Cass7LiuxinYan)6.Onlyintheseways,canyouhaveagoodcommandofEnglish.DearZhangMing,Iamgladtoreceiveyourletter,IamsorrytoknowthatyouhavetroubleinstudyingEnglish.Herearesomesuggestionsforyou.Firstly,it'simportantforyoutopreviewthelessonsbeforeclass.Ifyoudothis,youwillunderstandwhatyourteachersayseasily.Secondly,youshouldlistentotheteachercarefullyandtakenotesintheclassandfinishyourhomeworkcarefullybyyourselfafterclass.Thatway,it’seasierforyoutoknowhowyouunderstandthelesson.Thirdly,itwouldbeagoodideaifyoupracticelisteningandspeakingeverydayandreadmoreEnglishbookstoenrichyourvocabulary.Bydoingthis,yourabilitytouseEnglishcanbeimproved.Ihopeyouwillfindtheseideasuseful.Yours,LiHua小试身手•你的朋友Mary为了迎接高考努力学习，进来冰岛了。请你以李华的名义给她写一封信，就健康和学习方面提些建议。•词数：100•2008年高考全国卷Ⅱ•假定你是李华，你的英国朋友Peter来信向你咨询如何才能学好中文。请你根据下列要点写回信。•要点：⑴参加中文学习班；•⑵看中文书刊、电视；•⑶学唱中文歌曲；•⑷交中国朋友。•注意：⑴词数100左右；•⑵可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；•⑶开头语已为你写好。•DearPeter,•I'mgladtoreceiveyourletteraskingformyadviceonhowtolearnChinesewell.•Hereareafewsuggestions.First,itisimportanttotakeaChinesecourse,asyou'llbeab