2018天津高考英语作文范文和讲解-Tianjin

CompositionTianjin2018•第二节：书面表达（满分25分）假设你是晨光中学的机器人兴趣小组组长李津，你的美国朋友Chris就读于天津某国际学校，他曾在机器人技能竞赛中获奖。你打算邀请他加入你的团队，参加即将于7月底在天津举行的世界青少学机器人技能竞赛。请根据以下提示代表兴趣小组给他写一封电子邮件。（1）比赛的时间、地点；（2）邀请他的原因；（3）训练计划将发送其邮箱，请他提出建议。注意：（1）词数不少于100；（2）可适当加入细节，使内容充实、行文连贯；（3）开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。参考词汇：世界青少年机器人技能竞赛theWorldAdolescentRoboticsCompetitionDearChris,Ihavegoodnewstotellyou.______________________________________________________________I’mlookingforwardtoyourreply.Yours,LiJin•Wordsandphrases•七月底•在…有天赋•与…合作•训练计划•获奖•之所以原因是…•提出宝贵意见attheendofJuly/inlateJulyhaveagift/talentfor…cooperatewith/incooperationwith(prep)trainingplanwinawardsthereasonwhy…isthat….bringup/putforwardyouradvice•1.审题，活动邀请信•2.拓展任务，第一段告知有比赛，可以延伸谈比赛的重要性和意义或者目的，第二段谈及邀请对方的原因，必不可少内容是对方以前所取得的成绩，可以拓展谈到对方的能力和天赋，最后谈到合作带来的更大愿景。第三段谈及训练计划，希冀得到对方的意见并接受你的邀请。•3.时态。比赛时间地点将来时态，邀请他参加比赛的原因，他身上的特质本领才能用一般现在时，已经取得的成就用现在完成时。训练计划用一般现在时，内容用一般现在时。•4.构思单词，词组句型•5.行文，草稿•6.抄写，检查•DearChris,Ihavegoodnewstotellyou.Inordertopromoteenthusiasmforscientificactivitiesanddiscovertalentsinthisfield,acompetition,theWorldAdolescentRoboticsCompetition,intendedforteenagersacrossthewholenation,isgoingtobelaunchedinTianjinChildren’sPalaceattheendofJuly.Iamconvincedthatitisawonderfulstageforcompetitorstoshowtheirtalents.•Knowingthatyouhavewonseveralawardsinthepreviouscompetitionsofrobotics,Iamsurethatyouareexperiencedandcompetitiveenoughtoparticipate.Besides,Ihavealwaysbeenimpressedbyyourinitiativeandcreationinscience,whichplayasignificantroleintechnicalinventionandresearch.Ifwecouldhaveyouinvolvedinourteam,onewithyearsofexperienceandgiftedmembers,thatwouldbeawin-wincooperation.Onlyincooperationwitheachother,canwetakeineachother’sstrengthsandreapmorebenefitsandvictories.•Ifyouarewillingtojoinus,Iwillsendthetrainingprogramtoyouremailbox.Don’thesitatetoputforwardyouradvice,whichwilldefinitelybecomeourpreciousproperty.I’mlookingforwardtoyourreply.Yours,LiJin•DearChris,Ihavegoodnewstotellyou.Targetedatcultivatingtheteenagers’interestinscientificexplorationandencouragingmorestudentstothrowthemselvesintoresearch,acompetition,titledtheWorldAdolescentRoboticsCompetition,willtakeplaceintheChildren’spalaceTianjininthelateJuly.Thecompetitionoffersadolescentsagoodchancetoshowtheirtalentsandinitiativeandlearnfromeachothermeanwhile.•Iameagertoinviteyoutojoinourteamfortheupcomingevent,inwhichyouwilldemonstrateyourabilityandmakeacquaintanceofmorefriendswiththesameinterest.AsfarasIknow,youhaveprovedyourselfbycarryingoffsomeprizesinthepreviouscompetitions.Impressedbyyourteamworkspiritandtalentinthisfield,Iamconfidentthatyouwilllovethechallengeandourteam.Byworkinginagroup,weareabletoovercomeourweaknessesbyacquiringothers'strongpointsaswellasdoubleourachievements.•Ifyouareinterestedinit,pleaseletmeknowandIwilldeliverthetrainingprogramtoyouronlinemailbox.Itwouldbefantasticifyoucouldbringupyouradvice,whichisboundtobeofgreatuseforus.I’mlookingforwardtoyourreply.Yours,LiJin•Usefulstructures•Ican’twaittoinviteyoutojoinourinterestgroup…,cooperatingwithoneanothertostriveforthevictoty.•Onlybyattachinggreatimportancetothetraining,canyouensureoursuccessinthecomingcompetition.•Youradviceandparticipationareboundtobeourcrowningglory.