2016年浙江省台州市区“概要写作”教学研讨活动资料：1.读后续写(台州一中) (共21张PPT)

台州一中读后续写2016.5.18meteachotherandfellinlovegotmarriedandhadbabiestheGoddessgotangryforcedtoleaveeachothercrosstheMilkyWaytomeetonlyonceayearTheStoryofTheHerdBoyandTheWeavingGirlIfthestorydoesn'tendhere,imagine...auctioneer拍卖人__________________bidder出价人___________________lot拍卖物____________________________________________________________forappreciationandforsalefinepiecesofartistryandcraftsmanshipAnauctionconducttheauctionmakeabidforthelotWho:What:Para1Iwastakentoan______atthe___________downtownwhereeverythingwasfor______.Para2.3.4Sincenothing______myeye,Iclimbedupstairsandatesome_____while______(lean)ontherailing(栏杆).AsIpulledapackofmintsfrommy______togetridofonion_______,I_________pulloutmykeychain,whichdroppedinsideanexpensive_____.Irandownstairstostagea_______butunfortunatelymyhandwas______.Ifelt__________Para5.6.7What'sworse,Iheardthe_________begantheauctionwiththevase.Everyonewaswalkingtowardme,includingmy________.auctionartgallerycaughtsnacksleaningaccidentallyvaserescuestuckembarrassedauctioneertheauthor;hisparents;auctioneersalepocketbreathparentsPara(2.3.4)Para(8)Para(1)Para(5.6.7)A.DevelopmentB.Climax(高潮)C.BeginningD.EndWhat'sthestyleofthepassage?A.Narration(记叙)B.Exposition(说明)C.Argumentation(议论)Theunderlinedkeywords:auctionparentssnacksanddrinkskeychainvasedroppedrescuemyhandstuckauctioneerunderlinedwords（选5个以上）who(人物）：scene（场景）：vase（事件）：parentsauctioneerauctionvasekeychaindroppedmyhandstuckrescue？FocusontheconnectionofthetwogivensentencesParagraph7:Everyonewaswalkingtowardme,includingmyparents.Paragraph8:Mydadleanedincloseandwhisperedintheauctioneer’sear.Itwasmydadwhogotmeoutoftrouble.introublemydadwisdom/ideagetmeoutoftroubleInPara7,ItoldmydadthatIwasintrouble.InPara8,mydadcameupwithanideatogetmeoutof...Paragraph7:Everyonewaswalkingtowardme,includingmyparents.Q1:What'stheirfeelingwhenseeingmeholdingavase?embarrassed/nervousQ2:HowwouldIfeel?surprisedQ3:Whatwouldmyparentsdo?askedforwhathadhappenedParagraph7:Everyonewaswalkingtowardme,includingmyparents.1.Theywereverysurprised.2.Ifeltveryembarrassedandnervous.3.Mydadaskedmewhathadhappened.4.Itoldthefacttomydad.Theunderlinedkeywords:auctionparentssnacksanddrinkskeychainvasedroppedrescuemyhandstuckauctioneerMyhandwasstuckinthevase.addsomedetailsUseadvancedwords,phrases&sentencesUsetransitionalwords（过渡语）Paragraph7:Everyonewaswalkingtowardsme,includingmyparents.Theywereverysurprised.Ifeltveryembarrassedandnervous.Mydadaskedmewhathadhappened.Itoldthefacttomydad.Withtheentireroomstaringatme,theywerewhisperinginsurprisewhyIwasholdingthevase.Asaresult,Iloweredmyheadwithembarrassment,standingtherelikeafool.Meanwhile,Iwassonervousthatmyheartwasbeatingveryfast.Thenmydadmadehiswaytomeandasked,“Whatareyoudoing?”Nothingwasgoingtosoundmoreunbelievablethanthetruth.“Myhandisstuck,”Isaidinalowvoice.“Oh,Mark,”mymomcried.Paragraph7:Everyonewaswalkingtowardsme,includingmyparents.Withtheentireroomstaringatme,theywerewhisperinginsurprisewhyIwasholdingthevase.Asaresult,Iloweredmyheadwithembarrassment,standingtherelikeafool.Meanwhile,Iwassonervousthatmyheartwasbeatingveryfast.Thenmydadmadehiswaytomeandasked,“Whatareyoudoing?”Nothingwasgoingtosoundmoreunbelievablethanthetruth.“Myhandisstuck,”Isaidinalowvoice.“Oh,Mark,”mymomcried.addsomedetailsUseadvancedwords,phrases&sentencesPropertransitionParagraph8:Mydadleanedinclose&whisperedintheauctioneer’sear.Q1:Whatwouldmydadwhispertotheauctioneer?Yes.Q2:Didtheyagreeornot?toldmytroubleandaskedifhecouldbuythevaseQ3:Howdidmydadgetmyhandoutofthevase?usedvegetableoil/soapywatertoslidemyhandoutParagraph8:Mydadleanedincloseandwhisperedintheauctioneer’sear.1.Mydadtoldthefacttohimanddecidedtobuythevase.2.Theauctioneeraskedforagreement.3.Nobodyopposedandmyparentstookmehomewiththevase.4.Mydadusedoiltogetmyhandouttogetherwiththekeychain.Theunderlinedkeywords:auctionparentssnacksanddrinkskeychainvasedroppedrescuemyhandstuckauctioneerThewaytogetmeoutofthevaseTip1Solution[positive/creative]Paragraph8:Mydadleanedincloseandwhisperedintheauctioneer’sear.Theauctioneernoddedandspoke,“Ladiesandgentlemen,sinceitappearsthisvasealsocomeswithared-facedyoungman,arethereanyobjectionstolettinghisparentspurchasethepieceatareasonableprice?”Iheardsomelaughsattheideaofabiddingwarbreakingoutforavasewithmeattached,butluckilynoonedid.“Soldtotheparentsofthe,uh,luckyyoungman!”Theauctioneerannounced.WhenwegothomeandIwasmorerelaxed,mydaddippedinsomevegetableoilandIwasabletoslidemyhandout,withmykeychainofcourse.Tip2Language:[formal/informal]Tip3Comment(感想):[Itdependsonyou.]Ihopedtheauctioneerwouldstartwiththepaintings.Theauctionchosethevaseasthefirstpieceforsale.Itrieddesperatelytogetthekeychainout.Myhandwasstuck.Ileanedontherailingwhileenjoyingmysnacks.Istoodinthemiddleofanartgallerywithmyhandstuckinthevase.Ipulledapackofmintsfrommypocket.Ipulledoutmykeychainaswell,whichdroppedinsideavase.An_________DayUnluckyUnluckily,Unluckily,Unluckily,Unluckily,anunluckydayaluckyyoungmanThebigcontrast(对比)inthestoryachievesatoneof____________________humor/fun/amusementSolution（解决）:po