高中英语书面表达技巧.

1.要点齐全2.语言正确3.表达生动4.行文流畅5.适当发挥Payattentiontothefollowinginstructionswhenwriting.3.表达生动4.行文流畅专题复习：书面表达训练之三如何使句子优美如何使文章流畅Sample1Thestudentsliketochoosemajors.Theycanlearninterestingthings.Theywillhavegoodjobsinthefuture.Thestudentsbelievethattheenvironmentisimportanttous.Theygraduatefromuniversities.Theycanfindgoodjobs.Theycangetmuchmoney.Ithinkstudentsshouldgotoagooduniversity.Welikeitandwestudyhardatit.Sample2Somestudentsprefertochoosemajorstheycanlearnwhattheyareinterestedin.Itwillmakeitpossibleforthemtohavetheirfavoritejobsinthefuture.,thosewhothinkdifferentlybelievethattheenvironmentisimportanttoone’sdevelopmentgraduatesfromleadinguniversitiesareoftenlikelytofindagoodjob.sothatalsoHoweverandthatSample2Somestudentsprefertochoosemajorstheycanlearn.Itwilltheirfavoritejobsinthefuture.,theenvironmentisimportanttoone’sdevelopmentgraduatesfromleadinguniversitiesareoftenlikelytofindagoodjob.,thebestchoiceisagoodmajoratagooduniversity.Ifwecan’tobtainboth,thefirstthingtoconsiderisagoodmajor,westudy,wecanstillachievealotinacertainfieldifwetryourbest.sothatalsoHoweverandthatInmyopinionbecausewhattheyareinterestedinmakeitpossibleforthemtohavethosewhothinkdifferentlybelievethatnomatterwheresothatalsoHoweverInmyopinionwhattheyareinterestedinmakeitpossibleforthemtohavethosewhothinkdifferentlybelievethatnomatterwhereElegance（语言优美）Coherence（行文连贯）句式多变化作文更优美怎样用不同的表达方式表示相同的意义怎样通过对句子结构的变化,使文章显得更加丰富多彩怎样运用高级词汇，给文章增加亮点怎样使句式多变语言优美呢？1.Whatsurprisedmemostwasthathedidn'tknowmeatall.→=surprisedmehedidn'tknowmeatall.=,hedidn'tknowmeatall.ItthatTomygreatsurprise2.Toomanypeopletothezoowillcausetrafficjam.Toomanypeopletothezoowill_________trafficjam.Toomanypeopletothezoowill__________trafficjam.leadtoresultin3.Themandidn'tknowwhatheshoulddonext.=Themandidn'tknow_______________next.4.Hurryup,oryou'llmissthetrain.=Youwon'tcatchthetrain_____you________hurry.=Youwillmissthetrain________youhurry.whattodoifdon’tunless5.虽然他是个孩子，但他懂得很多．(一句多译)1)___________________________________________________________________2)__________________________________Although/Thoughheisachild,heknowsalot.Childas(though)heis,heknowsalot.6.这本书是如此的有趣，以致于我读了一遍又一遍。1)________________________________2)________________________________3)_________________________________4)________________________________ThisbookwassointerestingthatIreaditagainandagain.ThiswassuchaninterestingbookthatIreaditagainandagain.SointerestingwasthisbookthatIreaditagainandagain.ThiswassointerestingabookthatIreaditagainandagain.7.Theteachertookabookinhishandandcameintotheclassroom.=Theteachercameintotheclassroom,________________________．(用with的复合结构)＝Theteachercameintotheclassroom,________________.（用独立结构）Withabookinhishandbookinhand句子开头的变化1.Theboywassurprisedatwhathehadseen,hestoodthereandcouldn’tsayaword.=__________whathehadseen,theboystoodthere,_______________aword.(形容词做状语)Surprisedatunabletosay2.Ididn'trealizemymistakeuntilyoupointeditout.→=________notuntilyoupointeditout_____Irealizedmymistake.(强调句型）=_________youpointeditout______________mymistake.（倒装句）NotuntildidIrealizeItwasthat3．Youaresuretosucceedonlybyworkinghard.=____________________________suretosucceed.(only+状语提前)4.Weallknowthatheishonest.=____________________________(It做形式主语)=.(as引导的非限制性定语从句)Itisknowntousallthatheishonest.Asisknowntoall,heishonestOnlybyworkinghardareyou5.Ipassedthephysicsexamwithyourhelp.1).Ipassedtheexam__________yourhelp2).Icouldn’thavepassedthephysicsexam__________ourhelp.3).Icouldn’thavepassedthephysicsyourexam_________help.thankstobutforwithout1.Theybelieveapublicparkshouldbefree.Theybelieveapublicparkshouldbe_______________.2.Therailwayinourcountyisbeingbuilt.Therailwayinourcountyis_________________.freeofchargeunderconstruction3.Wethinkthemeetingisveryimportant.=We______________thatthemeetingis_____________________.4.Theresultisnotsatisfyingatall.=Theresultis_______satisfyingholdtheviewofgreatimportancefarfromSomepeopleclaimthatreadingselectivelyismorehelpful,sincetheybelievethatreadingwithoutchoiceisawasteoftime.However,someotherpeoplearguethatweshouldreadextensively,fortheyholdtheviewthatinsucharapiddevelopingsociety,weneedtoenlargetherangeofourknowledgeinsteadofrestrictingittooneortwofields.Inmyopinion,bothsidesaregoingtoextremes.欣赏一下起承转合好作文更流畅Task1在下列句子空白处填入恰当的过渡用语,使行文连贯流畅。1)Idon’twanttogo.,Ihavesomethingimportanttodo.2)I’dliketocome,I’mafraidIcan’t.3)LucyistwelveandLilyiseleven;,LucyisoneyearolderthanLily.4)Somepeoplewastefoodothersdon’thaveenough.Besidesbutthereforewhile在下面短文空白处填入恰当的过渡用语,使行文连贯流畅.Task2However,Inaword,Besidesthat,ButAlotofpeoplesmoke.Theysaythatsmokingcanbringthemhappiness.____Iamstronglyagainstsmoking.Maybesmokingcangivepeoplealittlepleasure._____,itbringsmuchmoreharmtopeople’shealth.Everyyearmanypeoplediefromsmoking-relateddiseases.__________,smokingisalsooneofthecausesofpollution._________,IamstronglyagainstsmokingandIcallonallthepeopletodosomethingaboutit.ButHoweverBesidesthatInaword在文中需要的地方加上合适的过渡用语，使行文连贯流畅。Task3May25,SundayCloudyThismorningIwenttotheshoptochangethecoatIboughtyesterday.Thesal