高一英语--人物写作技巧

Todaywe’lllearn…•thevocabularyandtheexpressionsondescribingaperson•howtodescribeapersonDoyouknowwhohe/sheis?Listencarefullyandtakenotes.Whenwasheborn?_______________.Whatwasheknownas?Heisknownas___________________.Whatdopeopleconsiderhisappearance?Peopleconsiderhim_______.Whendidhedie?______________.In1958thekingofPopstrangeOnJune25,2009Let’sdrawamindmaptodescribeaperson!Pre-writingComparethetwopassagesonyourhandoutandchoosethebetterone.Talkaboutthereasons.Summary•Towriteagoodpassage,youshouldusesomegoodpatternsandsentencesinsteadofsimpleones,suchasAppositive(同位语),v.-ing,p.p.,NounClauseandAttributiveClause.Practise1.YangLiweiwasborninapoorfarmer’sfamily.Heisafamousastronaut.YangLiwei,____________________,wasborninapoorfarmer’sfamily.afamousastronaut(同位语）2.LiuXianghasbeentraininghard.Hehopestobreaktheworldrecord.__________________________,LiuXianghasbeentraininghard.Hopingtobreaktheworldrecord（分词作伴随状语）3.WeshouldlearnfromMadamCurie.Shewillberememberedforeverforherdeterminationandachievement.WeshouldlearnfromMadamCurie,_________________________________________________________________.whowillberememberedforeverforherdeterminationandachievement（定语从句）4.Shesucceededbecauseshedevotedherlifetoscience._____________shesucceeded__________shedevotedherlifetoscience.ThereasonwhyisthatDiscussingroupstooutlinethestructureofdescribingaperson.Birthday(birthplace)occupationeducationappearancepersonalityachievementjudgementWritingWriteapassageofateacherbyusingtheinformationthatyou’vegotbeforeclassingroups.Homework题目：GreatSwimmerMichaelPhelps米高.·菲尔普斯是美国一位非凡的游泳运动员。1985年6月30日出生于美国马利兰州巴尔的摩市。他7岁开始游泳,经历了许多艰苦的训练。15岁的时候，他参加了2000年奥运会，并在200米蝶泳比赛中排名第五。据报道，他是这次次奥运会中自1932年以来竞争的最年轻的男性选手。在北京奥运会,菲尔普斯实现了他的8枚金牌梦，打破了7个世界纪录，创造了历史。•参考词汇：迈克尔.菲尔普斯MichaelPhelps；马利兰州巴尔的摩市Baltimore,Maryland；非凡的extraordinary;蝶泳butterfly