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POWERPOINTTEMPLATEPOWERPOINTTEMPLATEPOWERPOINTTEMPLATEPOWERPOINTTEMPLATEPOWERPOINTTEMPLATEPOWERPOINTTEMPLATEPOWERPOINTTEMPLATEPOWERPOINTTEMPLATEPOWERPOINTTEMPLATEPOWERPOINTTEMPLATEPOWERPOINTTEMPLATEPOWERPOINTTEMPLATEPOWERPOINTTEMPLATEPOWERPOINTTEMPLATEPOWERPOINTTEMPLATEPOWERPOINTTEMPLATELOGOYoursitehereProblematicWritings(two)YoursitehereLOGOItishurtforalittlechildwhoneededmother’sloveatthattime.ImissedhereverydayandIhopedshecouldkeepmecompany.Ithurtforalittlechildwhoneededmother’sloveatthattime.ImissedhereverydayandIhopedshecouldkeepmecompany.YoursitehereLOGOInfact,Icouldnotgooutinfreetimeexceptforstayingatalittleroomwithotherboyswhohavebadmood.Infact,Icouldnotgooutinfreetime,buthadtostayinalittleroomwithotherboyswhohadbadmood.YoursitehereLOGOItisablackT-shirt,andnootherT-shirtfitmelikeit.ItisablackT-shirt,andnootherT-shirtsfitmelikeit.ItisablackT-shirt,andnootherT-shirtfitsmelikeit.YoursitehereLOGOSoIfoundthismanandaskedhimtheinformationwassenttowhom.SoIfoundthismanandaskedhimwhom/whothemessagewassentto.Myfatheractsavitalroleinmylifethatnoonecouldreplacehim.Myfatherplayssuchavitalroleinmylifethatnoonecouldreplacehim.Myfatherplayssovitalaroleinmylifethatnoonecouldreplacehim.YoursitehereLOGOMyparentsmadeafinaldecisionthatourfamilymovedintothecitywheremyfatherworkedin.Myparentsmadeafinaldecisionthatourfamily(should)moveintothecitywheremyfatherworked.Myparentsmadeafinaldecisionthatourfamily(should)moveintothecityinwhichmyfatherworked.YoursitehereLOGOIhadachievedsixyear’sstudyatthatcampuswhichwasclosetomyhome.[...]Ihadtodothatasmyfather’sthought.Finally,Ienteredintothatschool.Ihadfinishedsixyears’studyonthatcampuswhichwasclosetomyhome.[...]Ihadtodothatasmyfatherwished.Finally,Ienteredthatschool.YoursitehereLOGOThemomentIlefthome,myfatherkeptalongsilenceandsaidslightly:“Youshouldlearngoodcareofyourself.”Hesaidhe'dphoneyouthemomenthegothome.ThemomentIclosedmyeyes,Ifellasleep.WhenIwasleaving(home),myfatherkeptalongsilenceandsaidslightly,“Youshouldlearntotakegoodcareofyourself.”YoursitehereLOGOMyfatherisacommonperson,hehassmalleyes,wearsapairofglasses,lookingmoregently,thedaddy'shairarenotmanyandhesaidtheintelligentheaddoesnotgrowhair”.Whilemymotherhasbigeyes,lookingmorebeautiful,herhairistoomuch.Ilovebothofthem.Myfatherisacommonperson.Hehassmalleyes,wearsapairofglasses,andlooksmoregentle.Daddy'shairisnotmuchandhesaid,theintelligentheaddoesnotgrowhair.”Mymother,onthecontrary,hasbigeyes,lookingmorebeautiful.Herhairistoomuch.Ilovebothofthem.YoursitehereLOGOHedidnotliketotalk,beguneatinguntilfinish,weevendidnotsayoneword.Hedidnotliketalking.Fromthebeginningtotheendofthedinner,weevendidnotspeaktoeachother.YoursitehereLOGOHepaidthousandsyuanonthebareverytime.Idonotknowhehowtogetmoneysomuch,andheknewmanypeople-includingstudentsfrommanyschoolandmanyadults.Hespentthousandsofyuaninthebareverytime.Ididnotknowhowhegotsomuchmoney.Heknewmanypeople—includingstudentsfrommanyschoolandmanyadults.YoursitehereLOGONow,youmaybewanttoknowifsothat,howhegetsmoney.Now,youmaywanttoknowifso,howhegetsthemoney.Now,maybeyouwanttoknowifso,howhegetsthemoney.YoursitehereLOGOHesaidhelikedtobefriendwithme,becauseIwaskindnessandIneverwouldnothurthim,sohecouldtellmeanything.Hesaidhelikedtobefriendswithme,becauseIwaskindandwouldneverhurthim.Hecouldtellmeanything.YoursitehereLOGOIthinkeverybodyallhasdifferentwayofhisorherlife,anddifferentwayisdoomedtocannotbefriends.Ithinkweallhavedifferentwaysoflife,andpeoplewithdifferentwaysoflifearedoomednottobefriends.Ithinkeverybodyhashisorherownwayoflife,andfriendshipisimpossiblebetweenpeoplewithdifferentwaysoflife.YoursitehereLOGOInthisworld,thereisnooneIcouldcareaboutlikethisexceptmymother.Iamhereverything,ofcourse,sheismyalltoo.Inthisworld,IwouldcareaboutnooneasmuchasIdomymother.Iameverythingtoher;ofcourse,sheismywholeworld,too.YoursitehereLOGOFromtherenthousetothenewbuyingflat,whatabigexpensemyparentshadpaid.Fromtherentedhousetothenewly-boughtflat,whatabigexpensemyparentshadpaid!YoursitehereLOGOTheterribletraffictransport,thetirednessafterthework,andsometimesthebadweather,allthesecircumstancescannotstopmymother’sstep.Theterribletraffic,thetirednessafterthework,andthebadweathersometimes—noneofthesecircumstancescouldstopmymother’ssteps.YoursitehereLOGOIcouldsaynowordsaboutthesebutappreciatingandthanksgiving.Icouldsaynothingaboutthesebutwordsofappreciationandthanksgiving.Justasanoldsaying:Allgoodthingscometoanend.Justasanoldsayinggoes,Allgoodthingscometoanend.YoursitehereLOGOJustaswhatIhadexpected,webecamegoodfriendssincethen.JustasIhadexpected,webecamegoodfriends.JustlikewhatIhadexpected,wehavebeengoodfriendssincethen.YoursitehereLOGO地道表达Withkindappearanceandgoodmanners,ifyoumeetheryouwillfeelthatsheisveryfriendlyduetothewordsofmanyclassmatesofmine.Withkindappearanceandgoodmanners,shewoulddefinitelyimpressyouasafriendlywomanwhenyoumeether—thisiswhatmanyofmyclassmateshavesaid.YoursitehereLOGO动宾不符Inmyfamily,mydadwillalmosteverymealsinaday,andsometimesevendosesome