雅思小作文流程图讲解 满文例文概要

ApproachesandStrategiestoAcademicWritingTask1UNIT6-流程图IELTSWRITING流程图写作要点找到流程图的过程，起点，终点。找到图上标出的已知动作，如果出现生词，尽量猜测。流程图里面存在生词是完全正常的。生词多数都是名词或者动词，而且生词旁边还配有解释性的图画，所以大致方向是可以猜出来的。最好方法是直接抄到文章里。按照步骤，分段描述，千万不能省略任何一步。切记！加入流畅合理的表示顺序的关联词。句型以主动为主，搭配被动，以及主语从句（例如：Itcanbeseenfromthegraphthat…）。时态要使用一般现在时。Writingtask1Youshouldspendabout20minutesonthistask.Theillustrationsbelowshowhowchocolateisproduced.Summarisetheinformationbyselectingandreportingthemainfeatures.Writeatleast150words.【高分范文及深度点评】Thediagramshowsthestagesintheprocessofmakingchocolate.【所有的小作文第一句话都要用一般现在时。流程图必备三个词：process整个过程；stage阶段；step步骤】【流程图特点之一：介绍过程要使用一般现在时】Chocolatecomesfromthecacaotree,whichisgrowninpartsofSouthAmerica,AfricaandIndonesia.Thetreeproduceslargeredpodswhichcontainwhitecocoabeans.【开头不能一上来就直接介绍cacaotree，而是通过主题词chocolate引出，否则显得太唐突】【流程图特点之二：大量使用定语从句，将有关联的两句话连接。】【流程图特点之三：大量使用被动语态】Firstly，whenthepodsareripe,theyareharvested,thebeansareremovedandtheyarefermentedforseveraldaysinlargewoodenboxes.Duringthefermentingprocess,thebeansturnbrown.【流程图特点之四：使用一些表示顺序的连接词】【三个句子的并列：“句子A,句子Band句子C”。【流程图特点之五：要适当地添加个别图中没有交代但能从图片中直接读出来的一些内容，否则可能达不到字数要求。但是一定要把握尺度，千万不要加上自己的主观观点，否则会扣分】Next,thebrownbeansarespreadinthesuntodry.Theyarethenputinlargesacksandtransportedbytrainorlorry.Afterthis,thebeansaretakentoachocolatefactorywheretheyareroastedinanovenattemperaturesofbetween250and350degreeCelsius.Afterbeingroasted,thebeansarecrushedandtheoutershellisremoved.Thispartisnotneededformakingchocolate.Finally,theinnerpartofthebeanispressedandliquidchocolateisproduced.【流程图特点之六：一般不需要写总结】Writingtask2Youshouldspendabout20minutesonthistask.Thediagrambelowshowstheprocessbywhichbricksaremanufacturedforthebuildingindustry.Summarisetheinformationbyselectingandreportingthemainfeatures,andmakecomparisonswhererelevant.Writeatleast150words.Brickmanufacturing*Clay:typeofstickyearththatisusedformakingbricks,pots,etc.【满分范文】Theprocessbywhichbricksaremanufacturedforthebuildingindustrycanbeoutlinedinsevenconsecutivesteps.Firsttherawmaterial,clay,whichwasjustbelowthesurfaceofsoilincertainclay-richareashastobedugupbyadigger.Thenthelumpsofclayareplacedonametalgridinordertobreakupthebigchunksofclayintomuchsmallerareas,whichfallthroughthemetalgridontoaroller,whosemotionfurthersegregatesthebitsofclay.Sandandwaterareaddedtomakeahomogenousmixture,whichistheneitherformedinmouldsorcutintobrick-shapedpiecesbymeansofawirecutter.Thosefreshbricksarethenkeptinadryingovenforatleast24andamaximumof48hours,severaldozensifnothundredsofbricksatatime.Thedriedbricksarethentransferredtoaso-calledkiln,anothertypeofhightemperatureoven.Firsttheyarekeptatamoderatetemperatureof200℃-1300℃.Thisprocessisfollowedbycoolingdownthefinishedbricksfor48to72hoursinacoolingchamber.Oncethebrickshavecooleddownandhavebecomehard,theygetpackagedanddeliveredtotheirfinaldestination,beitabuildingsiteorstorage.(215words)【考官评语】Band9Thisresponsefullysatisfiestherequirementsofthetask.Allkeyfeaturesofeachstageoftheprocessareappropriatelyandaccuratelypresented.Anexcellentoverviewisgivenatthebeginningoftheresponseandthisskilfullyincorporatespartoftherubric,changingthegrammaticalfunction,togiveabriefsummaryofthewholeprocess.Themessageisveryeasytoread,withseamlesscohesionthatattractsnoattention.Paragraphing,linkingandreferencingareallskilfullymanaged.Thelanguageusedisveryfluentandsophisticated.Awiderangeofvocabularyandstructuresareusedwithfullflexibilityandaccuracy.Onlyrareminor‘slips’canbefoundandthesedonotdetractfromthehighrating.雅思流程图的重点词汇解析：表述时间：in10daysduringtheperiodof10daysTheprocesslastsforupto10daysafter10days10dayspasseduntilsomethinghappened.表示然后：then,next,inthenextstate,followingthat,afterthat,thenextstepinthestageis....表示过程：process,procedure,formation,Development表示步骤：step,stage,phase时间阶段：afteraperiodof…months/days/minutes,during…顺序连词：first,firstofall,inthefirststage,initially,tobeginwithsecond,then,next,alsoafterthat,atthesametime,inthemeantime,meanwhilepriorto,untilthefirststageinvolves…/inthesecondstage/inthethirdstage/inthelaststage/Thenextstepinthestageisthat….目的连词：inorderto/inorderthat;soasto/sothat