短文改错公开课课件

1德才高级中学王刚2HowtodoProof-reading3Task1:Task2:Task3:Ourtasks:theexerciseandsecretetheskillsofdoingproof-readingtheinformationanddemandinoutline4高考短文改错专题一.考纲对短文改错的要求高考短文改错的目的在于测试考生判断发现,纠正语篇中语言使用错误的能力,以及考察考生在语篇中综合运用英语知识的能力.5二.近三年高考短文改错错误类型统计设题方式试卷多一词(\)缺一词(∧)错一词(__)2009年浙江卷1182009年辽宁卷2172009年宁·海卷1182008年宁·海卷1182007年宁·海卷1186三.近三年高考短文改错考点分布表时态语态非谓语动词一致副词形容词名词代词介词冠词连词2009年浙江1101113112009年辽宁1001122122009宁·海1001123112008宁·海0121021122007宁·海211111201考查点试卷71、Wearegoingtohaveameetingonnextweek.4、Thebossmadeworkerstowork10hoursaday.Lookatthesesentencesandcorrectthemistakesinthemwiththerightsigns.3、HeisfondoflikeEnglish.2、Heismoretallerthanme.5、Hemarriedwithabeautifulgirl.8总结1、时间状语前是否多了介词。2、形容词、副词比较级前是否多了相似词。3、固定搭配中是否多了词。4、不定式前是否多了应该省的to。5、及物动词后受母语的影响是否多了介词。一、多词9Lookatthesesentencesandcorrectthemistakesinthemwiththerightsigns.1.Imetstudentyesterday.2.Heislookingamissingbook.3.Hewantshavearest.a^for4.Hepraisedbytheteacherseveraltimes.^towas^^5.I’mlookingforwardyourletter.to^10总结1.名词前特别是可数名词前是否缺冠词。2.不及物动词是否缺介词。3.不定式是否漏了to.4.被动语态是否缺少了助动词be.5.习惯用法是否漏了不可缺少的词。二、缺词111.Itistimeofmetowalkmydog.forLookatthesesentencesandcorrectthemistakesinthemwiththerightsigns.3.Passedthebookstore,hestoppedtobuyabook.4.HeaswellashissisterareaLeaguemember.readPassingis5.Mypronunciationwasterribly.6.Idon’tknowthattheydon’tliketotalkwithme.7.Somestudentsmayalsosaveupforourcollegeorfutureuse.their2.Shelikeditverymuchandreadsittotheclass.8.Sheissmilingatmebutnoddingatme.terriblewhyand12总结1.介词是否误用。2.动词的时态、语态是否误用。3.非谓语动词是否误用。4.主谓是否一致。5.判断句子中形容词和副词是否误用。三、错词6.从句中关联词是否误用。7.代词是否误用。8.连词是否误用。13做题要求假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词。2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。14Passage1：2009年浙江卷OnerainydaywhileIwaswalkinghomewithoneofmyfriend,atruckcametoastopbesidesus.Thedriverputthewindowdownandofferedusaumbrellabecausehefoundwewerewetthrough.Istoodthereandcouldn’tbelieveinthatacompletestrangerissothoughtful.Themaninsisted,soIgratefulacceptedtheoffer,thankedhimandwatchedthetruckdisappeardowntheroad.Thismanmightneedtheumbrellahimself,andhepreferredtogiveittoeveryoneelse.Itwasalessontousthatitwaspossiblegivewithoutexpectanythinginreturn.15OnerainydaywhileIwaswalkinghomewithoneofmyfriend,atruckcametoastopbesidesus.Thedriverputthewindowdownandofferedusaumbrellabecausehefoundwewerewetthrough.Istoodthereandcouldn’tbelieveinthatacompletestrangerissothoughtful.Passage1：friendsbesideanwas16Themaninsisted,soIgratefulacceptedtheoffer,thankedhimandwatchedthetruckdisappeardowntheroad.Thismanmightneedtheumbrellahimself,andhepreferredtogiveittoeveryoneelse.Itwasalessontousthatitwaspossiblegivewithoutexpectanythinginreturn.butPassage1：gratefullysomeone\somebody^toexpecting17短文改错口诀动词形，名词数，注意是形和副．非谓动词细辨别，习惯用法要记住。句子成分多分析，逻辑错误需关注。删加各次心有数，改完一定要读读。18Passage22009海南卷Asiswellknow,whenseniorstudentsgraduatefromschool,mostoftheirtextbooksarethrowingaway,whicharestillingoodcondition.Whatawasteofit!Iquiteagreetothesuggestionweshouldrecyclethesetextbooks.Foronething,recyclingtextbookscansavealotofnaturematerials,whichareusedtomakingtextbooks.Foranother,seniorstudentsmayhaveplentyofusefulnotesinthepages.Theyareverymuchhelpfultothosetextbooksusers.what’smost,thecostofthebookswillunloadsomeburdenofthefamiliesofthestudents.ActuallyinAustraliaandanyothercountries,recyclingtextbooksarepopularanditgivesusagoodexample.19Passage2Asiswellknow,whenseniorstudentsgraduatefromschool,mostoftheirtextbooksarethrowingaway,whicharestillingoodcondition.Whatawasteofit!Iquiteagreetothesuggestionweshouldrecyclethesetextbooks.Foronething,recyclingtextbookscansavealotofnaturematerials,whichareusedtomakingtextbooks.^knownthrownthatnaturalmake20Passage2Foranother,seniorstudentsmayhaveplentyofusefulnotesinthepages.Theyareverymuchhelpfultothosetextbooksusers.What’smost,thecostofthebookswillunloadsomeburdenofthefamiliesofthestudents.ActuallyinAustraliaandanyothercountries,recyclingtextbooksarepopularanditgivesusagoodexample.moreisonsome21短文改错应注意的问题㈠.四不改。即：①标点符号不改。②大小写不改。③词序错误不改（不是不改，而是按错词或少词来改)。④在纲外生词不改。文中出现带汉语注释的词，在句中不可能用错。㈡.规范做题方法。①要严格按照示范，即用规定的符号去改错。不要用文字去说明或用箭头去表示。②换词、去词和加词三者不可混淆。22Practicemakesperfect.[谚]熟能生巧Inasmalltownwheretherelivedtwobrotherswhomwereverylazy.Oneday,beforethemotherwentouttoaneveningparty,sheaskedabouthertwosonsgivethehouseagoodcleaning.Butbeforethemotherlefttheroom,theelderbrothersaidtohisyoungerbrother,“Tom,whenmothercameback,youwillsayIhavebeenillandIcangetoutofbed.”theyoungerbrothersagreed.“OK,andwhenmotherturnsbackyouwillsayIhavegonetocallforadoctorforme.”23Inasmalltownwheretherelivedtwobrotherswhomwereverylazy.Oneday,beforethemotherwentouttoaneveningparty,sheaskedabouthertwosonsgivethehouseagoodcleaning.Butbeforethemotherlefttheroom,theelderbrothersaidtohisyoungerbrother,“Tom,whenmothercameback,youwillsayIhavebeenillandIcangetoutofbed.”theyoungerbrothersagreed.“OK,andwhenmotherturnsbackyouwillsayIhavegonetocallforadoctorforme.”who/that^toaftercomescan’tbrotherbutyou24Hom