初中英语写作公开课(九年级)

ALessonofWritingExample:ImaginethatyouareLiMing,writeacompositionaboutthechangestakenplaceinyourhometown.Keypoints:1.Topic（主题）:changes2.who:LiMing3.Where:LiMing’shometown4.tense(时态):pasttense&presenttense一般过去时&一般现在时LivingconditionCellphonesjobstransportationchangeshousecars(头脑风暴)educationshopsfoodroadscomputersclothesbuildingworkingtools农耕工具reasongovernmenteffortsliveinalowhouseliveinatallbuildingplantcropswiththehelpoffarmanimalsplantcropswiththehelpoffarmmachinesstudyinanoldschoolstudyinamodernschoolLivingconditionWorkingtoolseducationLivingconditionWorkingtoolseducationchanges(正文)a.Changesinlivingconditions.b.Changesinworkingtools.C.Changesineducation.OutlineTitle题目:ChangesinLiMing’sHometownHeading开头：Greatchangeshavetakenplacein……Body正文:a.Changesinlivingconditionsb.ChangesinworkingtoolsC.ChangesineducationConclusion结尾:Thankstothegovernment’sefforts(努力),LiMing’shometownisbecomingbetterandbetter.提纲ChangesinLiMing’sHometownGreatchangeshavetakenplaceinLiMing’shometownsincethereformandopening-up.Inthepast,peoplelivedinlowhouses.Thefarmersplantedcropsonlywiththehelpoffarmanimals.Childrenstudiedinoldschools.Butnow,mostpeopleliveintallbuildings.Thefarmerscanplantcropswiththehelpoffarmmachines.Andchildrenstudyinmodernschools.Thankstothegovernment’sefforts,LiMing’shometownisbecomingbetterandbetter.Onepossibleversion:heading开头body正文conclusion结尾AWritingPracticeWriteyourowncompositionaboutGreatchangesinmyHometown.以GreatchangesinmyHometown为题，按下列提示要求写一篇80词左右短文，介绍自己家乡的变化。1、过去生活贫困，房屋破旧阴暗；道路窄交通不便。2、现在住房宽敞、明亮；现代学校，孩子可接受良好的教育；马路宽广，许多人有小车，交通方便；人们生活大为改善。3、未来会更加富饶和美丽4、我的感受是希望记住过去，展望未来是很重要的。可能会用到的词汇：poorandbackward贫穷落后的；traffic交通；convenient方便的；Thanksto多亏；thecountryandthegovernment国家和政府；takeplace发生；education教育；modern现代；dreamabout憧憬Requirement:1.topic:2.who:3.Where:4.Whatchanges：5.Tense时态:greatchangesI/myselfmyhometownliferoadshousespasttense&presenttense……Livingconditiontransportationchangeshouse(头脑风暴)educationroadsbuildingExample:Outline提纲Title题目:GreatchangesinmyHometownHeading开头：Body正文:a.Changesin…b.Changesin…c.Changesin…Conclusion结尾:LifeHouseRoadshouselifeeducationtransportationnowUsedtobe…Once曾经pastManyyearsagois/areInthepastAtpresentbeforenowadaystodayWas/wereMakesentences.eg:1.Inthepast,myhometownwaspoor.2.Myhometownusedtobepoor.Then:(时态)LivingconditionCellphonestransportationwideroadscleancars(正文)dirtybetternarrowpoorclothesConvinent方便的improveeg:1.Manyyearsago,theroadsinmyhometownwasnarrowanddirty.2.Nowadays,theroadsinmyhometownarewideandclean.3.Today,manyfamilieshavecars.schoolhouse(正文)以GreatchangesinmyHometown为题，按下列提示要求写一篇80词左右短文，介绍自己家乡的变化。1、过去生活贫困，房屋破旧阴暗；道路窄交通不便。2、现在住房宽敞、明亮；现代学校，孩子可接受良好的教育；马路宽广，许多人有小车，交通方便；人们生活大为改善。3、未来会更加富饶和美丽4、我的感受是希望记住过去，展望未来是很重要的。可能会用到的词汇：poorandbackward贫穷落后的；traffic交通；convenient方便的；thanksto多亏；thecountryandthegovernment国家和政府；takeplace发生；education教育；modern现代；dreamabout憧憬TheChangesinMyHometown•IamLiMing,todayIhaveinterviewedmygrandmother.Shehaslivedinmyhometownformorethanseventyyears.Shehasseenthechangesinmyhometownherself.•Inthepast,myhometownwasverysmallandpoor.Theroadswerenarrow.Thepeoplecouldn’tgetenoughfood.•Butnow,theroadsweresowide,andtherearemoreandmorekindsoffoodtosatisfypeople’sneeds.Andnow,eachfamilyhastelephones,TVs,computersandsoon.•Ithinkmyhometownwillbemoreandmorebeautifulinthefuture!ChangesinMyHometownMyhometownusedtobeabackwardplace,becauseitwasdeepinthemountains,wheretherewerenonicebuildingsandtheroadsweresonarrowanddirty.Peoplelivedapoorlife.Whileinrecentyears,withthedevelopmentofsociety,myhometownhasbeengreatlychanged.Nowtheroadsaregettingmuchwider.Treesandflowersareplantedonthetwosidesoftheroads.Theycanprovideuswithoxygenandfightagainstthepollutions.Sotheskybecomescleanerandbrighter.What’smore,youcanseemanymodernandbeautifulbuildingseverywhere,andthelivingconditionsareimproving.Peopleareenjoyingacomfortablelifenow.