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任务测试内容时间1G应用信函：至少150词20分钟1A图表，流程图：至少150词20分钟2G/A议论文：至少250词40分钟雅思考试写作部分测试内容时间：60分钟剑桥真题6P164-some/others剑桥真题5P165-adva/disadvan剑桥真题7P173-agree/disagree剑桥真题5P173-cause/solution•Successfulsportsprofessionalscanearnagreatdealmoremoneythanpeopleinotherimportantprofessions.•Somepeoplethinkthisisfullyjustifiedwhileothersthinkitisunfair.Discussboththeseviewsandgiveyourownopinion.剑桥真题6P164-some/others剑桥真题5P165-adva/disadvan•Insomecountriesyoungpeopleareencouragedtoworkortravelforayearbetweenfinishinghighschoolandstartinguniversitystudies.Discusstheadvantagesanddisadvantagesforyoungpeoplewhodecidetodothis.INTRODUCTION首段Asaresultofconstantmediaattention,sportsprofessionalsinmycountryhavebecomestarsandcelebrities,andthoseatthetoparepaidhugesalaries.Justlikemoviestars,theyliveextravagantlifestyleswithhugehousesandcars.---背景介绍,转述题目,但未发表观点.BODY1正文第一段Manypeoplefindtheirrewardsunfair(正文第一段分论点),especiallywhencomparingthesesupersalarieswiththoseoftopsurgeonsorresearchscientists,orevenleadingpoliticianswhohavetheresponsibilitiesofgoverningthecountry.However,sportssalariesarenotdeterminedbyconsideringthecontributiontosocietyapersonmakes,orthelevelofresponsibilityheorsheholds.Instead,theyreflectpublicpopularityofsportingeneralandthelevelofpublicsupportthatsuccessfulstarscangenerate.Sothenotionof‘fairness’isnottheissue.BODY2正文第二段Thosewhofeelthatsportsstars’salariesarejustifiedmightarguethat(正文第二段分论点)thenumberofprofessionalswithrealtalentareveryfew,andthemoneyisarecognitionoftheskillsanddedicationapersonneedstobesuccessful.Competitionisconstantandaplayeristestedeverytimetheyperformintheirrelativelyshortcareer.Thepressurefromthemediaisintenseandthereislittleprivacyoutofthespotlight.Soallofthesefactorsmayjustifythehugeearnings.CONCLUSION结尾段Personally,Ithinkthat(发表观点---中立观点)theamountofmoneysuchsportsstarsmakeismorejustifiedthanthehugeearningsofmoviestars,butatthesametime,itindicatesthatoursocietyplacesmorevalueonsportthanonmoreessentialprofessionsandachievement.(251)Introduction背景介绍---20题目转述---15承上启下---15Body1---观点ABody2-观点BBody1分论点---15Body2分论点---15Body1分论点展20×3Body2分论点展20×3Body1分论点总结---15Body2分论点总结---15Conclusion承上启下，发表观点---30Introduction背景介绍---20题目转述---15承上启下---15Body1---advantagesBody2-disadvantagesBody1分论点---15Body2分论点---15Body1分论点展20×3Body2分论点展20×3Body1分论点总结---15Body2分论点总结---15Conclusion承上启下，发表观点---30Introduction---50背景介绍---20:状语从句题目转述---15承上启下---15Body1---90Body2---90Body1分论点---15Body2分论点---15Body1分论点展开--20×3Body2分论点展开--20×3Body1分论点总结---15Body2分论点总结---15Conclusion---30承上启下，发表观点---30收集属于自己的背景介绍句型…!Withtheadvanceofthetechnology,…Withtheboomingoftheeconomy,…来自NYTIMES的语料:随着…的进步•Intimesofrapidtechnologicalchange,…•AsChina’seconomyrecovers,…•Withfoodpricesremaininghighindevelopingcountries,…isaheateddebate!hastriggeredaheateddiscussion来自NYTIMES的语料:引起争论•Unemploymentamongcollegegraduatesisahot-buttonissueinChina.•Oneofthemosttalked-abouttelevisionprogramsinChinaatthemomentisasoapoperacalledSnailHouse.•Riseinonlineclassesflares/fuelsdebateaboutquality.•Thelaunchofiphone4Sdrawspraisebutstirssuspicion.•Sth.isadouble-edgedsword双刃剑•来自NYTIMES的语料sth.hastwoedges•Everycoinhastwosides.双面硬币•来自NYTIMES的语料sth.isatwo-sidedcoin•Weoftenfindourselvesinvolvedinarealdilemmathat…进退两难的局面•quandary[ˈkwɔndəri:]令人不知所措的事•来自NYTIMES的语料•Harvardmedicalschoolinethicsquandary•Drugtestingposesquandaryforemployers…isbecomingincreasinglypopular/prevalent来自NYTIMES的语料:…越来越流行•…hasgainedsuchapopularity/isontherise•SinceitsfirstappearanceinJanuaryonaChinesewebpage,the“grass-mudhorse”hasbecomenothinglessthanaphenomenon.Peopleareattachingmuchimportanceto……hasbeenagrowingconcern来自NYTIMES的语料:人们越来越关注…•JapaneseCity’sCryResonatesAroundtheWorld---XXXresonateswithpeopleinthegeneralpublic:某事引起人们的共鸣•AnAttackShedsLightonInternetSecurityHoles---XXXshedlightonYYY:XXX使人们关注YYY•ATantalizingGlimpseHasPhysicistsHoldingTheirBreaths---XXXhaspeopleholdingtheirbreaths:某事使人们屏住呼吸…hasdrawnseverecriticism来自NYTIMES的语料:…招致批评•CrisisSaddlesVillageWithUnwantedNotoriety---XXXsaddlessb/sthwithaproblem:XXX使人们背负/面临一个问题•RadiationErrorsErodeConfidenceinPowerCompany---XXXerodesconfidenceinYYY:XXX使人们对YYY失去信心•AFixtureofHollywood’sPastisNowTarnishedbyStrife---XXXistarnishedbyYYY:YYY使XXX失去光泽Introduction---50背景介绍---20题目转述---15：转述双方观点承上启下---15Body1---90Body2---90Body1分论点---15Body2分论点---15Body1分论点展开--20×3Body2分论点展开--20×3Body1分论点总结---15Body2分论点总结---15Conclusion---30承上启下，发表观点---30剑桥真题题目转述练习•Insomecountriesyoungpeopleareencouragedtoworkortravelforayearbetweenfinishinghighschoolandstartinguniversitystudies.Discusstheadvantagesanddisadvantagesforyoungpeoplewhodecidetodothis.Paraphrase转述题目•Insomecountriesyoungpeopleareencouragedtoworkortravelforayearbetweenfinishinghighschoolandstartinguniversitystudies.抄袭•Insomenationsjuvenilestudentsareencouragedtotoilortourforayearbetweengraduatingfromhighschoolandstartingcollegestudies.剽窃•Itisquitecommonthesedaysforyoungpeopleinmanycountriestohaveabreakfromstudyingaftergraduatingfromhighschool.正确的转述转述观点---基本句型•some/many/m