高中英语写作教程-记叙文

教师：梁德义◆Listthepointsofthecomposition◆TranslatethepointsintoEnglish◆OrganisethepointstoanessayThree-stepWritingComposition假设下面六幅图画描述的是你的一段亲身经历。请你根据画面所示内容，用英语写一篇100字左右的日记。(日记的开头已写好)今天下午我去看电影.在路上,我看到一个手提箱从一辆自行车上掉了下来.我捡起箱子,并向骑车人大声喊叫,但他却已经骑远了.于是,我拦了一辆出租车去追赶失主.我终于追上了失主,并把箱子还给他.失主非常的感动,他拿出一些钱来感谢我,但被我拒绝了.我又乘车返回了电影院,司机被我的行动所感动,不收我的车费.今天下午我去看电影.在路上,我看到一个手提箱从一辆自行车上掉了下来.Iwenttothecinemathisafternoon.Iwenttoseeafilmthisafternoon.Ontheway,Ifound/sawacasefalldownfrom/offaman’sbike.我捡起箱子,并向骑车人大声喊叫,但他却已经骑远了.Ipickedupthecaseandshoutedattheman,buthehadalreadyrodeaway.于是,我拦了一辆出租车去追赶失主.Istoppedataxitocatchupwiththeman.我终于追上了失主,并把箱子还给他.Icaughtupwithhimatlastandgavethecasebacktohim.失主非常的感动,他拿出一些钱来感谢我,但被我拒绝了.Themanwasverygratefulandtookoutsomemoneytothankme,butIrefused.我又乘车返回了电影院,司机被我的行动所感动,不收我的车费.Iwentbacktothecinemabytaxi.Thedriverwasverymovedanddidn’tacceptmymoney.1.举例、举例forexample、suchas、namely、first、second…、finally2.总结归纳、发表意见inaword、inshort、inone’sopinion、personally、toone’ssurprise3.句与句之间的连贯what’smore、besides、and、then、so----that4.转折however、while、onthecontrary5.因果therefore、thus、asaresult、soMay3rd,FridayFineOneafternoon,Iwenttoseeafilm.Ontheway,Isawacasefalloffaman'sbike.Ipickedupthecaseandshoutedattheman.Buthedidn'thearmeandrodeaway.WhatshouldIdo?ThenIhadanidea.Istoppedataxiandgotintoitwiththecase.Andwecaughtupwiththeman.Igavethecasebacktohim.Themanthankedmeverymuchandwantedtogivemesomemoney.ButIrefused.Thenthedrivertookmetothecinema.WhenIpaidhim,thedriverwouldn’tacceptthemoney.HesaidhewasverymovedatwhatIdid.一.合并为简单句把其中一句改为分词短语把其中一句改为介词短语二.合并为复合句三.把复合句改为简单句把从句改为分词短语把从句改为介词短语四.避免只使用一两个句式，要灵活运用诸如倒装句、强调句、主从复合句、分词状语等.五.注意使用词组、习语来代替一些单词，以增加文采。六.适当的联想与发挥。Iwenttothecinemaoneafternoon.Ontheway,Ifound/sawacasefalldownfrom/offaman’sbike.Oneafternoon,onmywaytothecinema,Isawacasefalloffaman’sbike.Ipickedupthecaseandshoutedattheman,buthehadalreadyrodeaway.Afterpickingupthecase,Ishoutedatthemanloudly,butherodetoofasttohearme.Themanwasverygratefulandhetookoutsomemoneytothankme,butIrefused.Gettingthecasebackfromme,themanwassogratefultomethatheinsistedonofferingmesomemoneyasareward.ButIrefusedhimpolitely.May3rd,FridayFineOneafternoon,Iwenttoseeafilm.Ontheway,Isawacasefalloffaman'sbike.Ipickedupthecaseandshoutedattheman.Buthedidn'thearmeandrodeaway.WhatshouldIdo?ThenIhadanidea.Istoppedataxiandgotintoitwiththecase.Andwecaughtupwiththeman.Igavethecasebacktohim.Themanthankedmeverymuchandwantedtogivemesomemoney.ButIrefused.Thenthedrivertookmetothecinema.WhenIpaidhim,thedriverwouldn’tacceptthemoney.HesaidhewasverymovedatwhatIdid.May3rd,FridayFineOneafternoon,onmywaytothecinema,Isawacasefalloffaman’sbike.Afterpickingupthecase,Ishoutedatthemanloudly,butherodetoofasttohearme.WhatshouldIdo?ThenIhadanidea.Istoppedataxiandgotintoitwiththecase.Andwecaughtupwiththeman.Gettingthecasebackfromme,themanwassogratefultomethatheinsistedonofferingmesomemoneyasareward.ButIrefusedhimpolitely.Withthehelpofthedriver,Iwentbacktothecinema.Tomysurprise,thedriverdidn’tacceptthemoneybecausehewasverymovedatwhatIdid.HowproudIwas!HomeworkTranslatethepointsthatyouhavelistedontheexercisebooks,thenwriteacompositionaccordingtothepictures.