高考英语书面表达终极版公开课

增强书面表达效果的技巧全国高考书面表达的评分标准：--覆盖所有主要内容；--应用了较多的语法结构和词汇；--语法结构或词汇方面有些许错误，但为尽力使用较复杂结构或较高级词汇所致；具备较强的语言运用能力。--有效地使用了语句间的连接成分，使全文结构紧凑；完全达到了预期的写作目的。第五档（很好）（21－25分）上海高考写作评分标准：1、本题总分为25分，其中内容10分，语言10分，组织结构5分。2、评分时应注意内容要点、应用词汇和语法结构的数量和准确性以及上下文的连贯性。3、评分时，先根据文章的内容和语言初步确定所属档次，然后对照相应的组织结构档次给予加分。其中，内容和语言两部分相加，得15分或以上者，可考虑加4-5分，15分以下者只能考虑加0-3分。4、词数少于70，总分最多不超过10分。技巧1.使用较高级的词汇3.使用恰当的连接词词汇反映你知识贮存量的多少，也是衡量英语水平的一个重要标志。运用得当的句子结构可以给文章增色不少，从而使整篇文章因此而生辉。使用恰当连接词，对写一篇有“英语味”的文章很重要，能使文章上下衔接自然、紧凑。增强书面表达效果的技巧2.使用较丰富的句式一、使用较高级的词汇1、这件工作挺难的。2、最后他了解到了所有的事情。3、感谢你不辞辛苦地帮助我。Thatisadifficultjob.challenging/demandingHelearnedabouteverythingatlast.eventuallyIshouldthankyoufortakingsomuchtroubletohelpme.Iamawfullygratefultoyoufor…4.几天前，我碰巧遇到了一个老朋友。5.努力使我们的生活变得更好。Wetryourbesttomakeourlifebetter.Severaldaysago,Ihappenedtomeetanoldfriendofmine.Acoupleofdaysago,Icameacross/bumpedinto/stumbledonanoldfriendofmine.//(…,itsohappenedthatIraninto…)makeeveryeffortto…makeunremitting/jointeffortsto…sparenoefforttobetterourlife…像access,available,annoyed,appealing,charming,cute,confused,contact,challenging,considerably,consequently,demanding,essential,exceptional,fascinated,locate,participate,quit,significant,schedule,terrific,等单词，均可视作高级词汇。1.Becausetheweatherwasgood,ourjourneywascomfortable.2.Weallthinkheisagreatman.3.SuddenlyIthoughtoutagoodidea.Thanksto/Owingtothegoodweather,ourjourneywascomfortable.Weallthinkhighlyofhim.Agoodideaoccurredtome.Or:Agoodideasuddenlystruckme.PracticeOr:Ihiton/uponagoodidea.4.ShanghailiesintheeastofChina.5.Asaresult,theplanwasafailure.6.Whensheheardhehaddied,shewentpalewithsorrow.7.Anewrailwayisbeingbuiltinmyhometown.Theplanturnedouttobeafailure.Shanghaiissituated/locatedintheeastofChina.Atthenewsofhisdeath,shewentpalewithsorrow.Anewrailwayisunderconstructioninmyhometown.8.ShewenttoAustriainordertostudymusic.9.Whenhespoke,hefeltmoreandmoreexcited.10.Inourschool,therearetwotenniscourts.11.Youcanfindmyhouseeasily.ShewenttoAustriaforthepurposeofstudyingmusic.Themorehespoke,themoreexcitedhefelt.Wehavetwotenniscourtsavailableinourschool.You’llhavenotrouble(in)findingmyhouse.二、使用较丰富的句式1.Whenhearrives,pleasegivemeane-mail.(使用V-ing形式)2.Tohissurprise,thelittlegirlknowssomanythings.(使用名词性从句)3.Onceitisseen,itcanneverbeforgotten.(用过去分词)Onhisarriving,pleasegivemeane-mail.Whatsurpriseshimisthatthelittlegirlknowssomanythings.Onceseen,itcanneverbeforgotten.4.Hedidnotknowwhathadhappeneduntilhehadreadthenewsinthenewspaper.(使用强调句型)5.Ipassedthephysicsexambecauseofyourhelp.(用虚拟语气）Itwasnotuntilhehadreadthenewsinthenewspaperthatheknewwhathadhappened.Icouldn’thavepassedthephysicsexambutforyourhelp.6.Shewalkedoutofthelabandmanystudentsfollowedher.(使用过去分词)7.Theysangandlaughedastheywentbacktoschool.(使用V-ing形式)Singingandlaughing,theywentbacktoschool.Followedbymanystudents,shewalkedoutofthelab.8.Iwon’tbelievewhathesays.(使用状语从句)9.Thegirlisspokenhighlyof.Hercompositionwaswellwritten.(用定语从句)10.Itisgreatfuntoclimbthehill.(用感叹句)Nomatterwhathesays,Iwon’tbelieve.Thegirlwhosecompositionwaswellwrittenisspokenhighlyof.Whatgreatfunitistoclimbthehill!11.Ifyoustudyhard,youwillmakerapidprogress.（用并列句）12.HehadnosoonercomebackfromBeijingthanhewassentabroad.(使用倒装句)13.Peoplesuggestthattheconferencebeputoff.(改被动语态)NosoonerhadhecomebackfromBeijingthanhewassentabroad.Studyhard,andyou’llmakerapidprogress.Itissuggestedthattheconferencebeputoff.Supplementary:精选句型1.不用说/不言而喻，…Itgoeswithoutsayingthat…=(Itis)needlesstosay(that)…=Itisobviousthat子句=Obviously,…Itgoeswithoutsayingthatitpaystokeepearlyhours.I.用于文章主题句不用说早睡早起是值得的。2.俗语说得好：…。Wellgoesanoldsaying,…=Asanoldsayinggoes(runs,says),…=Anoldsayinggoeslikethis,…俗话说得好:诚实为上策。Asanoldsayinggoes,Honestyisthebestpolicy.3.我深信…Iamgreatlyconvinced(that)…=Iamgreatlyassured(that)…=Istronglybelievethat…Iamgreatlyconvincedthatpreventionisbetterthancure.我深信预防胜于治疗。4.…是很容易证明的。Itcanbeeasilyprovedthat…Itcanbeeasilyprovedthatnothingismorepreciousthan/issopreciousastime.时间最珍贵是很容易证明的。II.用于文章承转句1.我们有理由相信…Wehavereasonstobelieve(that)…Wehaveeveryreasontobelievethat…Wehavereasonstobelievethatphysicalpunishmentshouldbestrictlyprohibited.我们有理由相信体罚应该严格禁止。2.此外，我们不应忽视…Besides(Inaddition),weshouldnotneglectthat…Inaddition,weshouldnotneglectthateveryonewantsafriendlyandpeacefulsociety.此外，我们不应忽视每个人都想要一个温馨祥和的社会。3.事实上，…Asamatteroffact,…=Infact,…Asamatteroffact,itishealththatcounts/…whatreallycountsishealth.事实上,健康才是最重要。4.相反地;…Onthecontrary,…=Bycontrast,…=Contrastto…,…Onthecontrary,afewstudents,itseems,arestillfoolingaround.相反地,少数学生似乎还在鬼混。III.用于文章结论句1.最后，但并非最不重要，…。Lastbutnotleast,….(该句型用于罗列最后一个观点。)Lastbutnotleast,theshortcomingineducationisthecausecontributingtojuveniledelinquency.最后，但并非最不重要，教育上的缺失是助长青少年犯罪的原因。2.因此,我们能下个结论,那就是…。Wecan,therefore,cometotheconclusion(that)…Wecan,therefore,cometotheconclusionthatnothingissopreciousasfreedomintheworld.因此，我们能下个结论，那就是世上自由最珍贵。3.这证据显示～的重要性再怎么强调都不为过。Thisevidenceshowsthattheimportanceof～cannotbeoveremphasized.Thisevidenceshowsthattheimportanceoftrafficsafetycannotbeoveremphasized.这证据显示交通安全的重要性再怎么强调都不为过。4.总而言之，…。Inconclusion,…=Tosumup,…Inconc