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决胜高考专案突破名师诊断对点集训能力技巧板块 【诊断平台】(一)名师诊断专案突破对点集训决胜高考(2012·石家庄质检)假定你是李华,你的美国朋友Belinda来信请你在寒假教她学习汉语。请根据以下要点,用英语给她写封回信。时间:每周二下午3:00~5:00地点:李华家书房内容:1.日常会话;3.中国节日。注意:1.词数100左右;2.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;3.开头已写好;不计入总词数。DearBelinda,Gladtohearfromyou.I􀆳dliketotellyouwhatIhaveplannedforyourChinesestudy.2.中文歌曲;名师诊断专案突破对点集训决胜高考Bestwishes.LiHua名师诊断专案突破对点集训决胜高考(二)(2012·武汉调研)请你根据提示并结合生活中的一个事例,就“包容”这一话题,用英语写一篇短文。There􀆳snodenyingthatforgivenessisanoblequality.Withforgive-nesspeoplewillliveinaharmoniousway;withforgiveness,peoplecanovercomeanydifficulty;withforgiveness...注意:1.无须写标题,不得照抄英语提示语;2.除诗歌外,文体不限;3.内容必须结合生活中的一个事例;名师诊断专案突破对点集训决胜高考4.词数120左右。名师诊断专案突破对点集训决胜高考下面是一张新闻照片。请描述照片内容,并谈谈你的看法。注意:1.可参照文章开头所给的提示,作必要的发挥想象;(三)(2012·南京考前模拟)名师诊断专案突破对点集训决胜高考2.词数150左右。开头已写好,不计入总词数。Hereisaphototakeninthestreet.Init,wecanseeanoldmanlyingontheground.Therewereseveralpeoplestandingaroundandlookingathim,butnoneofthemgavehimahand.名师诊断专案突破对点集训决胜高考名师诊断专案突破对点集训决胜高考距离高考的时间不多了,但是很多同学还不知如何处理学习、健身(四)(2012·四川南充模拟)名师诊断专案突破对点集训决胜高考和休息与高考备考之间的关系。请根据图中的内容写一篇英语短文,谈一谈你对这一问题的建议。注意:1.词数100左右;2.题目已为你写好;3.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。HowtoGetPreparedfortheCollegeEntranceExams名师诊断专案突破对点集训决胜高考名师诊断专案突破对点集训决胜高考【误区诊断】1.语篇方面:考生审题不清,要点缺失,次重点遗漏,人称混用,段落层次不清,时态混乱。2.句法方面:主谓不一致,语序错位,语态混淆,句子基本结构错误,汉语式表达,句式单一。3.词法方面:拼写错误,词性功能概念不清,忽略词的感情色彩,词汇搭名师诊断专案突破对点集训决胜高考配错误。4.其他方面:字数不够,书写潦草,大小写不分,标点使用错误,卷面不整洁。【误区警示】易错类型一:汉式英语错误不少考生在英语书面表达时易受汉语习惯影响,所写句子虽然语法正确,却不符合英语表达习惯,造成不少汉式英语病句。要减少汉式病句,考生必须做到:1.养成用英语思维进行写作的习惯,注意中西文化差异所带来的不同表达方式。2.平时多归纳总结,纠正汉式英语。名师诊断专案突破对点集训决胜高考3.多收听对外广播、收看英语节目、广泛阅读英文版书籍、报纸及其他材料。例如:①错误:ThatfactorybrokeoutafirelastSunday.正确:AfirebrokeoutinthatfactorylastSunday.②错误:Thisbuildinglikesaschool.正确:Thisbuildinglookslikeaschool.③错误:HewillabletowritearticlesinEnglishnextyear.正确:HewillbeabletowritearticlesinEnglishnextyear.名师诊断专案突破对点集训决胜高考④错误:Recentlyourvillagehavetakenplacegreatchanges.正确:Recentlygreatchangeshavetakenplaceinourvillage.⑤错误:ProfessorLeecomesfromBeijingUniversitywillgiveusalec-turetomorrow.正确:ProfessorLeefromBeijingUniversitywillgiveusalectureto-morrow.易错类型二:句子结构不完整或结构错误一个句子至少包括主语和谓语两部分(祈使句除外)。如果把句子的某一个部分当成一个句子,就会导致句子不完整。两个各含有主名师诊断专案突破对点集训决胜高考语和谓语的分句不能写在一起,也不能只用逗号隔开。例如:①错误:Chinaisnolongerwhatusedtobe.正确:Chinaisnolongerwhatitusedtobe.②错误:Youpractisemorereading,youwillimproveyourreadingabil-ity.正确:Ifyoupractisemorereading,youwillimproveyourreadingabili-ty.③错误:Theyfinishedthehomework,theywentout.正确:Since/Astheyfinishedthehomework,theywentout.名师诊断专案突破对点集训决胜高考④错误:Chinaisstilladevelopingcountry,mostpeoplecan􀆳taffordacar.正确:Chinaisstilladevelopingcountry,somostpeoplecan􀆳taffordacar.⑤错误:ThewomantalkedtoyoujustnowisourEnglishteacher.正确:ThewomanwhotalkedtoyoujustnowisourEnglishteacher.⑥错误:Ican􀆳timaginewhatlifewouldbelikeifhavenotanyTVsets.正确:Ican􀆳timaginewhatlifewouldbelikeifwehavenotanyTVsets.名师诊断专案突破对点集训决胜高考易错类型三:重复累赘有些英语单词本身自带某种意思,或由于语法规则不能再出现某个单词,而考生基本功不够扎实,常常出现累赘现象。例如:①错误:Theboxistooheavyfortheweakboytocarryit.正确:Theboxistooheavyfortheweakboytocarry.②错误:Wehopetoimproveourworkbetter.正确:Wehopetoimproveourwork.③错误:IseldomgototheShanghaiLibraryduetothereasonitisfarawayfrommyhome.名师诊断专案突破对点集训决胜高考正确:IseldomgototheShanghaiLibrarybecauseitisfarawayfrommyhome.④错误:You􀆳sclasswasinteresting.正确:Yourclasswasinteresting.⑤错误:Ireturnedbackthebooktoyouyesterday.正确:Ireturnedthebooktoyouyesterday.易错类型四:句子缺乏逻辑性或连贯性一个句子必须要表达一个完整的、前后语意一致的意思。如果把不相干的意思放在一个句子里或一个句子表达不完整,就会出现逻名师诊断专案突破对点集训决胜高考辑问题。句子无论长短,在安排上要合乎逻辑,衔接自然,使句内语意关系明确。而考生在习作过程中常出现指代不明、缺少过渡词语、非平行结构或语意不完整的分割句等错误。例如:①错误:Beinganhonestman,Tomworkedveryhard.正确:Beinganhonestman,Tomnevertellsalie.②错误:LiuHuaisakind-heartedgirl.Shewillbesuccessfulinany-thingshetries.正确:Asshehasastrongwillandconfidenceinherself,LiuHuamaybesuccessfulinanythingshetries.名师诊断专案突破对点集训决胜高考③错误:RoseisinlovewithJohn,JohnlikeMary.正确:RoseisinlovewithJohn,butJohnlikesMary.易错类型五:语法、词法错误许多考生写作中易犯主谓不一致、词性混用、选词或搭配不当,时态语态错误、指代不清、语序不当等方面的错误。例如:①错误:Inthebedroomthereareabed,asofa,adeskandachair.正确:Inthebedroomthereisabed,asofa,adeskandachair.②错误:Heclosedthedoorandhurriesawaytoclass.名师诊断专案突破对点集训决胜高考正确:Heclosedthedoorandhurriedawaytoclass.③错误:60%ofthestudentsagainsttheideaofentrancefees.正确:60%ofthestudentsareagainsttheideaofentrancefees.④错误:2dayspastbeforehisletterarrived.正确:2dayspassedbeforehisletterarrived.⑤错误:InordertolearnEnglishwell,Ishouldincrease/raisethemethodofstudy.正确:InordertolearnEnglishwell,Ishouldimprovethemethodofstudy.名师诊断专案突破对点集训决胜高考易错类型六:拼写错误及标点符号误用考生出现单词拼写错误的原因:一是因为发音错误导致拼写错误,如:strick(strict);二是因为不知道动词的不规则变化所导致的,如:teached(taught)等。标点符号是一种变相文字,是书面表达不可缺少的重要手段,很多考生不了解不同标点符号的用途或英汉标点差异,结果出现错误。名师诊断专案突破对点集训决胜高考Gladtohearfromyou.I􀆳dliketotellyouwhatIhaveplannedforyourChinesestudy.WecanbeginourChineseclassinmystudyat3pmeveryTuesdayduringthewinterholiday.Theclasslaststwohoursuntil5o􀆳clock.Intheclass,wewillpracticespokenChinese.Besides,IwillteachyousomebeautifulChinesesongs,includingpopularandfolkones,whichcanhelpyoulearnandrememberChinesewordsmoreeasily.What􀆳smore,I􀆳dliketointroducesomeChinesefestivalstoyou,suchasthe【参考范文】(一)DearBelinda,名师诊断专案突破对点集训决胜高考aboveduringthiswinterholiday.Ibelieveyoucanim