2016年高考英语复习课件：书面表达

Practice:Whichisbetter?1．第一first→2．第二second→3．第三third→4．但是but→5.机会chance→tobegin/startwithinaddition/what'smorelastbutnotleasthoweveropportunity词汇美、妙语多，阅卷老师心愉悦——多给分第二讲一份高考作文在阅卷时往往在3-4分钟内就被判定为生死，大众化的词汇、平庸的表达已使长时间工作的阅卷老师产生了视觉疲劳。如果一篇作文中突然出现几个与众不同、让人眼前一亮的词汇，老师的给分也绝不会吝啬！一、使用高级词汇的4大原则1．多实少虚原则写文章不要空话连篇，要多写一些实际的东西，这就要求写作时多用实词，少用虚词。虚词是指那些大而没有实际意义的词，多用蕴涵感情色彩的词语。如good指人时可用以下形容词替换：kind,honest,generous,selfless,brave,warm­hearted,honorable,humorous,smart等；good指事物或事情时可用以下形容词替换：fantastic,splendid,marvelous,excellent,wonderful,meaningful,enjoyable等。因此，以下句子中的形容词虽然都可以用good代替，但远不如原句出彩。①Ihopeeveryonecanhaveawonderfultime.②Heisawarm­heartedteacher.③ThisisreallyaniceideatogoclimbingMountHuathisweekend.2．短语优先原则多使用词组、习语来代替一些单词，以增加文采。例如：①Also,I'dlikeyoutome.(2013·新课标全国卷Ⅰ)→Also,I'dlikeyouto.②I'veaskedhimtobringyoutheChinesepaintingyou.(2013·新课标全国卷Ⅰ)→I'veaskedhimtobringyoutheChinesepaintingyou.这样单词数明显增加，句子更生动，表达也更准确。helpdomeafavourwanthavebeenlookingforwardto3．弃旧取新原则写作中要恰当得体地使用高中学过的、较长的词汇。如可以用eventually代替finally，用challenging代替hard，用attachimportanceto代替payattentionto，用delighted代替happy，用immediate代替quick，用beoccupiedwith代替bebusywith等。例如：①Iwilltrafficrulesalltheway.(2013·安徽高考)→Iwilltrafficrulesalltheway.②Makingfulluseoftimeisagoodhabit,whichonetoplancarefully.(2013·四川高考)→Makingfulluseoftimeisagoodhabit,whichonetoplancarefullyrememberinmindasksrequireskeep4．避免重复原则尽量避免过多地使用某一个单词，必要时选择使用其他恰当的同义词或词组来代替。例如：①Ilikereadingwhilemybrotherlikeswatchingfootballmatches.→Ilikereadingwhilemybrotherenjoyswatchingfootballmatches.②We'vebuiltanewexperimentbuildingbesidetheoldoneandwe'vealsobuiltalibrarywheretheoldplaygroundusedtobe.→We'vebuiltanewexperimentbuildingbesidetheoldoneandwe'vealsosetupalibrarywheretheoldplaygroundusedtobe.(2013·安徽高考)假设你校英语社团举办以“讲求文明，从我做起”为主题的征文活动，请你以“OntheWaytoSchool”为题，写一篇英语短文。内容主要包括：1．遵守交通法规；2．注意举止文明。注意：1．词数120左右；2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；3．短文中不能出现与本人相关的信息；4．短文的题目已为你拟好，不计入总词数。OntheWaytoSchool____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________请使用高级词汇提升下面考生作文[平庸作文]OntheWaytoSchoolThesedays,breakingtrafficrulesandlitteringarenotuncommon,causingseriousharmtolifeandtheenvironment.Changingthissituation①considerableeffortonthepartofeveryone.Asforme,itshouldstartonmywaytoschool.needsIwill②trafficrulesalltheway.IfIrideabike,I'llalwayskeeptotherightandnevercrossaroaduntilthetrafficlightturnsgreen.IfIwalk,I'll③tousethepedestriancrossing.④,_Iwill⑤_____itmydutytohelpkeepourenvironmentcleanandhealthy.IwillkeepfromlitteringandspittinganywhereandIwill⑥helpcleanuptheroadsidelitterwheneverpossible.Ihopemybehaviourwillbe⑦.rememberrememberAtthesametimethinkalsouseful[升格作文]OntheWaytoSchoolThesedays,breakingtrafficrulesandlitteringarenotuncommon,causingseriousharmtolifeandtheenvironment.Changingthissituation①_________considerableeffortonthepartofeveryone.Asforme,itshouldstartonmywaytoschool.Iwill②trafficrulesalltheway.IfIrideabike,I'llalwayskeeptotherightandnevercrossaroaduntilthetrafficlightturnsgreen.IfIwalk,I'll③tousethepedestriancrossing.④,Iwill⑤itmydutytohelpkeepourenvironmentcleanandhealthy.⑥willIkeepfromlitteringandspittinganywhere,Iwillhelpcleanuptheroadsidelitterwheneverpossible.Ihopemybehaviourwill⑦.requireskeepinmindneverforgetMeanwhileregardasNotonlymakeadifferencebutalsoⅠ.请用高级词汇改写下列句子1．Icannolongerthewayhespeakstous.→Icannolongerthewayhespeakstous.2．Hedidn'twhatIsaidintheclass.→HewhatIsaidintheclass.bearputupwithlistentoturnedadeafearto3．MrMaisateacher.→MrMaisateacher.4．Hiswifecamebackhomeaftertheadvancedtrainingclass,feelingvery.→Hiswifecamebackhomeaftertheadvancedtrainingclass,feelingvery.goodtiredexhaustedkind/patient/warm-heartedⅡ.请使用高级词汇提升下面考生作文(2013·山东省高三高考模拟)目前，中学生利用寒暑假打工现象引起了社会广泛关注，赞成和反对的声音此起彼伏。请根据下面的提示，写一篇英语短文。1．简单阐述此种现象；2．你对此种现象的明确态度……(给出充足的理由)3．你认为该如何使用打工赚的钱？①补贴家用？②自己花？……(给出合理的解释)注意：1.词数120～150；2．可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。[平庸作文]Recentlymoreandmoreteenagersdopart­timejobstoearnextramoneyduringthesummerorwintervacation.Opinionsonthis①frompersontoperson.Someare②itwhileothers③.Ithinkitis④forushighschoolstudentstotakepart­timejobsinoursparetime.Itcanearnsomemoney⑤broadenourviewsand⑥_______ourholidaylifebecausewecanlearnwhatwecan'tlearninclasses.What'smore,throughpart­timejobswecangetsomeworkingexperiencewhichwill⑦usforourfuture.Iholdtheviewthatit'sbettertohelppayourfamilylivingexpensesinsteadofkeepingitasourownpocketmoney.Itisagood⑧forustotakeonanimportantresponsibilityforourfamily.aredifferentfordisagreegoodandalsomakerichandcolorfulpreparechance[升格作文]Recentlymoreandmoreteenagersdopart­timejobstoearnextramoneyduringthesummerorwintervacation.Opinionsonthis①frompersontoperson.Someare②itwhileothers③it.Ithinkitis④forushighschoolstudentstotakepart­timejobsinoursparetime.Itcan⑤earnsomemoney,broadenourviewsand⑥ourholidaylifebecausewecanlearnwhatwecan'tlearninclasses.What'smore,throughpart­timejobswecangetsomeworkingexperiencewhichwill⑦usforourfuture.