高三英语作文技巧

高考复习---书面表达评析及指导Ifyouaretheteacher假定你是李华,你的英国朋友Peter来信询问你的英语学习情况并希望你简单介绍自己家乡，请你根据下列要点写回信。要点:1.我学英语已经六年了，在老师和同学们的帮助下取得了一些进步；2.但是总觉得英语难学，尤其是英语中的一些习惯用法；3.今后一定要努力学习这门有用的外语，争取能用流利的英语和你写信；4.我的家乡发生很大的变化，盖起了许多高楼，拓宽了道路，变得越来越漂亮和现代化；5.如果有时间可以到中国来，我会带领你参观我的家乡。注意：1.词数100左右；2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；3.开头语已为你写好。June8,2008DearPeter,I'mverygladtoreceiveyourletter.IwilltellyousomethingaboutmyEnglishstudyandhometown.………….字数不够或未能传达读者任何信息，不得分。samplesofstudentworkBadsample卷面不整洁;涂改较多;语言错误多;层次不清;得11分samplesofstudentworkreadandwritefindithardfluentEnglishtowriteGreatchangesroadshadtakenplaceinmyhometownbuildingswidenedItwillbewonderfulwhenyoucometoChinaifyouarefreeshowyouaroundIwillbegladto语言不地道;中文式思维;语言错误较多，得分13分samplesofstudentworklearnoftheteachersandmyprogressreadandwriteithardtolearnhardwork.writelettersinfluentEnglishfoundhadbecomeWelcometoChinaifyouhavetimeshowyouaround语言素质较好;基本功不差;语句仍有毛病；得15分.samplesofstudentworkprogresswell∧widenedare词汇有错误;卷面有涂改;得19分.samplesofstudentworkroadsMyhometownisbecomingmoreandmore影响书面表达得分的因素：“大错误”包括时态错误、句子结构错误、中式英语等，如：1.Myhometownhadbigchange,buildmanyhouses,……2.Myhometownhasgreatchanges.◆语言表达出现“大错误”及“小错误”→Greatchangeshadtakenplaceinmyhometownthere.Forexample,manynewhouseshadbeenbuiltandroadshadbeenwidened.3.IfyougettoChinathathavetime,mewithyoulookmyhometown.4.Iwillwelcometoyou.◆“小错误”主要是反应在个别单词拼写错误、冠词介词使用不准确等方面,如：Undermyteacherandclassmatesallhelptome,…….→Ihopeyou’llgetachancetocometoChinaandI’llshowyouaroundmyhometownifyouarefree.→WelcometoChina.→Withthehelpofmyteachersandclassmates,……◆没有使用高级词汇和复杂句1.Iwillvisitmyhometownwithyou.2.Ifyouhavetime,Iwilltakeyoutotravelaroundmyhometown.→Iwillshowyouaroundmyhometownifyouarefree.◆书写是否工整清晰也会影响答卷得分。卷面不整洁，涂改多；大小写;标点符号;书写不清，得分会很低！◆审题不认真，要点有所遗漏1.彻底理解题意，看准答题要求（包括字数要求）。2.把内容要点在稿纸上列成提纲。3.连词成句，连句成文。4.成文后认真检查，确信无一遗漏。注意：★完全完成了试题规定的任务，覆盖所有内容要点。★应用了较多的语法结构和词汇。★语法结构和词汇方面有些错误，但为尽力使用较复杂结构或较高级词汇所致；具备较强的语言运用能力。★有效地使用了语句间的连接成分，使全文结构紧凑。书面表达评分最高标准（第五档21---25分）Onepossibleversion:June8,2008DearPeter,I'mverygladtoreceiveyourletter.IwilltellyousomethingaboutmyEnglishstudyandhometown.ItissixyearssinceIbegantolearnEnglish.Withthehelpofmyteachersandclassmates,IhavemadesomeprogressinEnglish.HoweverIstillfindEnglishhardtolearn,suchassomedifficultidiomswhichmademeconfused.Nomatterhowharditis,Ihavemadeupmymindtomasterthisusefullanguagebymyhardwork.NotlongagoIreturnedtomyhometownandfoundgreatchangeshadtakenplacethere.Manynewhouseshadbeenbuiltandroadshadbeenwidened.Myhometownisgettingmodernandmoreandmorebeautiful.IhopeifyouhaveachancetocometoChinaandI’llshowyouaroundmyhometownwhenyouareonleave.Bestwishes,LiHuaMySuggestions:•1.beautifulwordsandexpressions•2.propersentencestructures•3.connectionsbetweensentences•4.propercomplexsentences•5.writingmodelsSixstepsforwriting(写作六步骤）1.Cross-question(审题)※Mainidea※Style※Verbtense※Person2.Seizethemajorpoints/keywords(抓要点)3.Arrangement(布局)！4.Sentencesconnection(连句)Words/phrasesSentences6.Errorcorrecting(查错改错)5.Expressyouropinion(发表观点）Conjunctions/conjunctiveadverbssentencespassageDearSmithLiHuaYours22Iwassopleasedtohearfromyouandamwritingtotellyousomethingaboutmyschool.You’reright.Quiteafewchangeshavetakenplaceinourschool.Ononesideoftheroadisanewteachingbuilding;Ontheotherside,wheretheplaygroundusedtobe,standsanothernewbuilding-ourlibrary.Theplaygroundisnowinfrontoftheschool.Wehavealsoplantedalotoftreesinandroundtheschool.Ihopethatyouwillbeabletoreturnandseethechangesforyourselfsomeday.Bestwishes,技巧1.使用较高级的词汇3.使用恰当的连接词词汇反映你知识贮存量的多少，也是衡量英语水平的一个重要标志。运用得当的句子结构可以给文章增色不少，从而使整篇文章因此而生辉。使用恰当连接词，对写一篇有“英语味”的文章很重要，能使文章上下衔接自然、紧凑。增强书面表达效果的技巧2.使用较丰富的句式1.Becausetheweatherwasgood,ourjourneywascomfortable.(幸亏…)2.Weallthinkheisagreatman.（评价很高）3.SuddenlyIthoughtoutagoodidea.（occur）Thankstothegoodweather,ourjourneywascomfortable.I.怎样使用较高级的词汇Weallthinkhighlyofhim.Agoodideaoccurredtome./Agoodideasuddenlystruckme.4.Thestudentsthereneedn’tpayfortheirbooks.（免费的）5.ShewenttoAustraliainordertostudymusic.（purpose）6.Whenhespoke,hefeltmoreandmoreexcited.（the比较级，the比较级）ShewenttoAustraliaforthepurposeofstudyingmusic.Themorehespoke,themoreexcitedhefelt.Booksarefreeforthestudentsthere.II.丰富的句式：(常用到的句型结构）利用不同的句型来表达同一个意思，能增加文章的文采。HowhappyIwaswhenIreceivedyourletter!Itwasthisyoungboywhohelpedtheoldgranny.Onlyinthiswaycanyousolvethisproblem.Theyreadwhilewalkingorridingonabus.1.感叹句2.强调句3.倒装句4.省略句Isawayoungladywalkingslowlyinthestreetwithahandbaginherhand.Let’scometothemainteachingbuilding,atthebackofwhichstandstheschoollibrary.That’swhatIshoulddo.Timepassedquicklybeforeweknewit.5、with短语6、定语从句7、各种名词性从句8、各种状语从句III.常用的连接词1.表示递进;在同一话题上补充内容另外，还有：2.表示转折关系但是，然而，相反：what’smore;besides;also;moreover;inadditionbut;however;yet;instead;ontheotherhand;onthecontrary.3.表示因果关系因为，因此，所以:4.表示条件关系如果，只要:除非:否则:since;as;because(of);so;thus;therefore;asaresult;if;oncondition(that);aslongasunlessorelse5.表示时间关系当…的时候:when;while在…之后:after在…之前:before直到:until直到…才…:not……until……一…就…:assoonas后来，然后:later;afterwards不久:soon近来:lately;recently自从…:since从那时起:fromthenon6.表示特定的顺序关系首先:firstly最主要的:aboveall其次:secondly然后:then;next最后:finally;int