咨询信

高考英语全国卷中咨询信写作导练•一、文体概述•咨询信的主要目的是寻求所需的信息或帮助。信件主要分为三部分：•（1）自我介绍(根据实际情况决定)、说明写信意图/目的；•（2）具体询问事宜；•（3）表示感谢、期盼回复。(注意事项：写这类书信时应注意礼节，切不可使用带有生硬或命令口吻的词句，也不可把别人给予的回答或帮助视为理所当然。)•二、必备短语•1.comeacross无意中看到/发现•2.beinterestedin…对……感兴趣•3.enquireabout...咨询某事•4.inthehopeof/that希望......•5.providesbwithsth为...提供....••6.inform.sb.ofsth.通知/告知某人某事•7.furtherdetails更多详情•8.forfurtherinformationconcerningsth.为了了解更多与某事相关的信息•9.prompt/immediatereply及时的回复•10.lookforwardtoafavorablereplyatyourearliestconvenience期盼尽早得到满意的答复三、套用句式•1.Ihappenedtocomeacrossyouradvertisementinthenewspaper/onawebpage/onyourwebsite.碰巧我在报纸/网页/您的网页上看到这则广告。•2.Quiteinterestedinthelanguagecourse,Iamwritingtoenquireaboutfurtherdetails.因为对语言课程有兴趣，我写信向您咨询更多的细节。•3.Iwonderwhether/ifitisconvenientforyoutoinformmewhenandwherethecoursewillbegiven.我想知道/您方便的话请告知这项课程举办的时间和地点。•4.Iwouldappreciateitifyoucouldoffermoredetails(that)Ispeciallyneedtopayattentionto.•如您能告知其他如需注意事项/信息，我将不胜感激。•5.Iamlookingforwardtoyourprompt/immediate/earlyreply.•希望尽早得到您的答复。四、语篇模板(改错)•DearSir/Madam,•Ihavereadyouradvertisementinthenewspaper,inthatyouensurethatundertheguidanceofyourfullyqualifiedinstructors,learnerswouldbeabletogetthehangofswimmingafteroneweek'straining.Quiteinteresting,Iamwritingtoyouinthehopethatyoucanprovidemewithfurtherinformations.•Firstofall,wouldyoubekindenoughtoinformmeofwhenandwherethecoursewillbegiven?Beside,howlongwillitlasteachdayandhowmanyshouldIpayforthat?Also,IwouldappreciateifyoucouldoffermoredetailsIspecialneedtopayattentionto.•Lookingforwardtoafavorablereplyatmyearliestconvenience.•Yours,•LiHua五、课堂练习•假设你是李华，你英国朋友Tim邀请你参加他们学校组织的暑假夏令营。你想参加，现在就此事向他咨询该活动的相关事宜。请你根据以下提示给他写一封信。•1.感谢他的邀请；•2.询问夏令营的相关事宜（具体日程安排，需要携带的物品......）；•3.希望尽快得到回信。•注意：•1.词数100左右；•2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；•3.开头已给出。•HiTim,•经典范文•HiTim,•Thankyousomuchforinvitingmetotakepartinthesummercamporganizedbyyourschoolintheapproachingsummerholiday.Quiteinterested,Iamwritingtoenquireaboutfurtherdetails.•Aboveall,Iwonderifitisconvenientforyoutoinformmeofthespecificschedule.Besides,thisbeingmyfirstexperiencetoparticipateinsuchanactivity,wouldyoubekindenoughtoofferanysuggestionsonwhatitemsIspeciallyneedtotakewithme?•Iamreallyexcitedandlookingforwardtoit.Iwouldappreciateitifyoucouldgivemeareplyatyourearliestconvenience.•Yours,•LiHua•本文是李华写信咨询有关游泳课程的细节。•1.that→which。非限制性定语从句，不能用that，which在这里指代前面的advertisement。•2.would→will，“初学者将在一周内学会”使用将来时。•3.interesting→interested，这里修饰的是主句的主语I，所以应该使用interested。•4.informations→information。information“信息”，是不可数名词。•5.me后面的介词of删掉。一些含介词的短语，后面接宾语从句时，省略介词。如：agreethat.../sbbegladthat.../sbbesurethat.../warmsbthat...等等之类。•6.Beside→Besides,beside是介词“在…旁边”，而此处是表示“此外,而且”，应使用副词besides。•7.many→much询问支付多少钱，应该为howmuch。•8.appreciate后加it，固定句型sbwouldappreciateitif...如果......，某人将不胜感激。•9.special→specially,此处做状语，使用副词。“如果你能提供更多我应特别注意的详情，我将不胜感激。”•10.my→your。是“在您方便时及时给我回信”。