Unit-5-Music--Writing课件-必修2

Towriteane-mailforhelpWriteanemailtoFreddy.Basedonyourdiscussionabouthowtoformyourownband,tellhimyourideasandaskhimforadviceonhowtomakeyourbandsuccessful.Hereissomehelp.•Inpairs,readthebeginningoftheletterandFreddy’sreply.•Workoutthequestionsthatmaybeasked.Forexample:Isitbesttoplayonekindofmusicordifferentkindstostartwith?•Workoutareasonforeachquestion.•Preparetowritethefirstdraft.Usethequestionsyouhaveworkedout,andthenfinishtheletterpolitelybythankingFreddyforhishelp.•Swapthewritingwithyourpartnerandimproveeachother’swork.•Writetheseconddraft.DearFreddy,MynameisLiHua.I’mbeginningabandwithmyfriends.However,wehaveneverbeeninabandbefore.Couldyoupleasegiveussomeadvice?Iwouldliketoknow...DearLiHua,I’mhonoredthatyouwouldaskmeforadvice.Asyouknow,ourbandwasformedinaveryunusualway.However,wehavelearnedalotaboutbeingabandsincethen.First,youwillneedtoagreeonwhatkindofmusicyouwanttowriteandplay.Freddy’sreplyYouhadbetterplayonekindofmusicifyouwanttobecomefamous.Nextyouwillneedtocomeupwithanameforyourband—somethingthatisdifferent.Then,makeaspecialtimeforpractisingandsticktoit.Youwillalsowanttogiveseveralperformancesforfriendsandfamilytogettheirideasonyourmusicalability.Aboveall,justhavefun!Yourssincerely,Freddy根据讨论的内容和结果给Freddy写一封信，询问如何组建一个成功的乐队。体裁属于实用性写作(practicalwriting)中的征求建议(askingforadvice)信。话题组建乐队与单元话题贴近，有趣味性，可以提供较为真实、具体的语言使用情景。审题要素1.确定文体：注意书信写作的形式特点。2.主体时态：以一般现在时为主。3.主体人称：就自己遇到的问题向对方征求建议，多用第一人称。4.内容要点：说明主旨；提出问题；感谢对方。要求针对组建乐队一事写一封信征求建议，任务明确，需要将咨询内容进一步细化。谋篇布局时应注意：首先，提出具体问题之前应简要说明写信的目的及咨询事宜。其次，有针对性地提出问题，能够获得有效的建议和更好的解决方案。应注意表述清晰，条理分明，重点突出。此外，以咨询为主，写作中应注意疑问的多种表达形式，灵活使用疑问词、情态动词等。恰当使用主从复合句，或以陈述句形式表达疑问，使得篇章语言富于变化，行文自然。Couldyoupleasegiveussomeadvice?Couldyoutellmehowto...?I’mnotsure...Iwouldliketoknow...Iwonder...What’syouropiniononthismatter?Doyouhaveanysuggestionsfordoing...?HowcanIgiveabetterperformance?Whatkindofpreparationcanbemade?Isthereanythingelseweshoulddo?Whatdoyouthinkisthebestwayforus?Doyouthinkit’sagoodideato...?Idon’tknowwhatweshoulddotoachievethisgoal.PleasegivemesomeadviceandIwillappreciateitverymuch.DearFreddy,MynameisLiHua.I’mbeginningabandwithmyfriends.However,wehaveneverbeeninabandbefore.Couldyoupleasegiveussomeadvice?Iwouldliketoknowwhatweshoulddotomakeourbandsuccessful.Thereareseveralbandsinourschool.Howcanwemakeourbandwell-knownquickly?Doyouthinkaspecialnameforthebandwillbehelpful?Besides,I’mnotquitesurewhatwearesupposedtodointhedailypractice.Whichisthebestwaytoimproveourmusicalability?PleasegivemesomeadviceandIwillappreciateitverymuch.I’mlookingforwardtoyourreply.Yourssincerely,LiHuaWritingtask【写作任务】假定你是李华，最近帮朋友将一份中文文件（document）翻译成英文。请你给外教Ms.Smith写信，请她帮忙修改译文中的语言错误并给予一些建议。注意：1.词数100左右；2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。__________________________________________________________________________【写作指导】一、审题定调本写作任务要求写一封求助信，属于应用文。求助信是写信人向收信人寻求帮助或建议而写的信件，是日常生活中常见的一种应用文。另外，该求助信的求助对象是自己的外教，故语言应恳切、委婉。求助信的人称以第一人称为主，时态以一般现在时为主。二、谋篇布局该书信的正文是整个写作的重点，可分三部分来写：第一部分：表明写信意图；第二部分：说明困难，提出要求；第三部分：表达感谢，期待回复。三、组织语言1.第一部分：表明写信意图。普通表达高级表达★I’mwritingtoaskfor/seekyourhelp.★I’mwritingalettertoyoutogetsomehelp.★Iamsorrytobotheryou,butIhavetoaskyoufor/todomeafavour.★I’msorrythatIhavetoaskafavourofyou,withthehopethatyouwillbekindenoughtohelpme.2.第二部分：说明自己的困难，委婉提出要求。说明困难普通表达高级表达I’vetranslatedaChinesedocumentintoEnglishformybestfriendrecently.ButbecausethisisthefirsttimethatI’vetranslatedadocument,Ithinktheremustbesomeerrors.I’verecentlyfinishedanEnglishtranslationofaChinesedocumentformybestfriendathisspecialrequest.However,asit’sthefirsttimeformetodotranslationwork,I’mnotsurewhetherthelanguageIusediscorrectornot.提出要求普通表达高级表达★Ihopeyoucanlendmeahandandcorrectanymistakesyoufindinit.★Couldyoupleasegivemesomeadviceonmywork?★Wouldyoupleasecheckmy...andcorrectthemistakesin...?★Ireallywanttogethelpfromyou.★Ihopethatyoucangivemesomehelp.★I’dbeverygratefulifyoucouldsparesometimetogothroughitandmakeanynecessarychangesandoffermesomehelpfulsuggestionsonmytranslationwork.★Wouldyoubesokindastotellmehowtodealwiththeproblem?★Iwonder/amwonderingifyoucouldgivemesomehelpsothat...★Iwouldbeverygratefulifyoucould...3.第三部分：表达感谢，期望得到回复。表达感谢普通表达高级表达★I’dbeverythankful.★Thankyouforyourkindness.★I’dappreciateanyhelp.★Iwouldappreciateitifyoucould...期望回复普通表达高级表达★I’mlookingforwardtoyourreply.★Pleasereplytomeassoonaspossible.★Yourearlyreplywillbehighlyappreciated.★Iawaityourquickreplywithgreatinterest.【范文展示】DearMs.Smith,I’msorrytobotheryou,butIhavetoaskyouforafavour.I’verecentlyfinishedanEnglishtranslationofaChinesedocumentformybestfriendathisspecialrequest.However,asit’sthefirsttimeformetodotranslationwork,I’mnotsurewhetherthelanguageIusediscorrectornot.Iknowyouhaveabusyschedule,butI’dbeverygratefulifyoucouldsparesometimetogothroughitandmakeanynecessarychangesandoffermesomehelpfulsuggestionsonmytranslationwork.I’dappreciateanyhelp.Iawaityourquickreplywithgreatinterest.Yours,LiHua假定你是李华，下周将代表学校去参加市里举办的英语演讲比赛，你有些紧张。请你给教授口语（oralEnglish）的外教Mr.Brown写一封电子邮件，请他就如何备赛提一些建议。注意：1.词数100左右（开头和结尾已给出，但不计入总词数）；2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。DearMr.Brown,________________________________________________________