雅思写作的句型

OH,NO~~WRITING!!!其实吧，可能是因为你还不懂雅思写作RECAP:THEFIRSTLESSON雅思考试作文题型概述议论文(Task1descriptivesummarywriting,Task2argumentativeessay,report)的基本结构雅思考试作文的评分标准(TA,TR;C&C;LR;GRA)雅思写作（学术写作）的基本要求（注意事项）TODAY’SFOCUS:CONSTRUCTINGSENTENCESGoingbacktotheBANDDESCRIPTOR:Band8Awiderangeofstructuresmajorityofsentencesareerror-freeBand7AvarietyofcomplexstructuresFrequenterror-freesentencescanbeseenBand6AmixofsimpleandcomplexsentencesformsMakesomeerrorsbuttheyrarelyreducecommunicationBand5AlimitedrangeofstructuresFrequenterrorscanbeseenandmaycausedifficultiestoreadersIMPLICATIONSFOROURWRITINGRequirementsfor“complexstructures”Errorsareallowed,however,thekeyistoseewhethertheerrorobstructscommunicationornotCOMPLEXSENTENCES≠COMPLEXSTRUCTURESSimplesentences简单句：一个主谓宾（或主谓）。表达信息简单，鲜明明确。Compoundsentences并列句（平行结构）：即“主谓宾”+“主谓宾”，中间用and/or/but连接。Complexsentences复杂句：主句+从句练一练：翻译下列句子并说明他们的句子类型1.那个实验的价值不仅限于科学研究。2.雇员往往可以通过许多不同的途径获得工作的满意度（jobsatisfaction).3.如今，绝大部分的工作都是由人们合作完成的并且这些人具有不同的强项和短处。4.有一些人将幸福与财富和物质成功联系起来，而另外一些人则认为它和情感还有良好的人际关系相关。POSSIBLEANSWERS1.Thevalueofthatexperimentisnotlimitedtoscientificresearch.2.Employeesgetjobsatisfactioninanumberofways.3.Today,mostworkisdonebypeoplecooperatedwitheachotherandallofthemhavedifferentstrengthsandweaknesses.4.whilesomepeoplelinkhappinesstowealthandmaterialsuccess,othersthinkitrelatestoemotionsandlovingpersonalrelationships.COMPLEXSENTENCES≠COMPLEXSTRUCTURES“复句”：不仅…而且…；因为…所以…;虽然…但是…;如果…那么…需要克服的“语言迁徙”现象：我们在英语中最喜欢写的我们以为的“复杂结构”就多是：notonly…butalso,because…so…,although…but…,if…then…这些是复杂句，但是算不上复杂结构LONGSENTENCES≠COMPLEXSTRUCTURESE.g.IfIdomorningexerciseseveryday,Iwillbehealthy.Morningexercisespromotemyhealth.总结：复杂句不一定就是一个复杂的结构，复杂结构也可以是一个简单句。HOWTOMAKEMYOWNCHOICE?1.你的观点要一种grammaticallyerror-free的形式呈现给考官；2.aconcisemannerisexpected:bespecific,tothepoint,nottouseverylongwordingstoexpresswhatyouwanttosay.3.concise=short&specificHOWTOMAKEMYOWNCHOICE?EXAMPLE1.Heavypollutioninmanydevelopingcountrieshasledtothedeteriorationofpeople’shealth.Thesehealthproblems/issueshaveputstrainsonthosecountries’medicalsystem.2.Asaconsequenceofthedeteriorationofpeople’shealthcausedbyheavypollutioninmanydevelopingcountries,strainshavebeenplacedonthesecountries’medicalsystem.3.Heavypollutioninmanydevelopingcountriesdeterioratespeople’shealth,furtherstrainingthehealthcaresystemofthesenations.如何写出COMPLEXSTRUCTURE并保证正确？Tip1：Basicprinciple-永远保证一个句子里有且仅有一个谓语动词。常见错误举例：Therearemanypeoplethinkthathighschoolgraduatesshouldattenduniversitytoreceivehighereducation.练一下：1.每一个参加雅思的的人都希望至少考到6分。2.武汉每年参加雅思考试的人数逐年在增加。如何写出COMPLEXSTRUCTURE并保证正确？Tip2:句子的重复信息，用限制性或非限制性定语从句来充当（人who,物which,that)。举例：Highschoolgraduatesaresupposedtoattenduniversitytoreceivetertiaryeducation.Highereducationcanequiptheseyounggenerationswithessentialknowledgeandskillsfortheirfuturecareerdevelopment.练一下：猫杀死了那只老鼠。老鼠吃了麦芽(malt).麦芽放在房子里。房子是Jack盖的。如何写出COMPLEXSTRUCTURE并保证正确？Tip3：如果写了两个句子，如两个简单句，状语从句+主句，定语从句以thatis,whichis,whois等如果两个句子的主语一致，省掉其中一个主语，把动词变成分词；如果两个句子的主语不一致，在从句中加with，然后把动词变v-ing（常用）,v-ed（被动，易错，少用）；如何写出COMPLEXSTRUCTURE并保证正确？举例：1.EnglishisimportantallovertheworldwhichimpelsustostudyEnglishwell.Whichimpelling……2.Englishwhichisusedbypeopleallovertheworldisauniversallanguage.Whichisusedby3.Chineseeconomyisdevelopingfast,therefore,manyChinesegoabroadforfurtherstudy.WiththefastdevelopingChineseeconomy,manyChinesegoabroadforfurtherstudy.如何写出COMPLEXSTRUCTURE并保证正确？Tip3:用it做形式主语，Itisadj./n.forsbtodosth应注意避免形容词的使用错误：下列形容词作表语时不能用人作主语（possible/necessary/convenient/essential):练一下：1.我们有必要学好英语。2.我们是有可能在一个非英语环境中学好英语的。如何写出COMPLEXSTRUCTURE并保证正确？Tip3拓展：基本句型“主谓宾”和“主系表”的替换---Itis+adj./n.(for/of+主语）+to-do或者用Therebe+主语+who/which引导的定语从句e.g.1.Thegovernmentshouldstrive/endeavortoimprovethepublictransportsystem.（Itis…)e.g.2.Manypeoplethinkthatthegovernmentshouldstrive/endeavortoimprovethepublictransportsystem.(Itis…)如何写出COMPLEXSTRUCTURE并保证正确？Tips4：用时间、地点、方式做主语（无灵主语）+hasseen/found/witnessed+that….。（常用的开头写法）举例：随着科学和技术的发展，因特网已经成为了我们日常生活中的一个必不可少的部分。如何写出COMPLEXSTRUCTURE并保证正确？Withthedevelopmentofscienceandtechnology,theInternethasbecomeanessentialpartofourdailylife.ThedevelopmentofscienceandtechnologyhasseenthattheInternethasbecomeanessentialpartofourdailylife.如何写出COMPLEXSTRUCTURE并保证正确？Tip5：名词性的从句（that引导的宾语，表语，主语，同位语）可用固定的用来引出观点性陈述的套句：Itisundeniablethat....Thereisnodoubt/denyingthat...Itisdefinitelytruethat...Ithasbeenwellacknowledgedthat...Wecannotbeblindtothefactthat...Thereisampleevidencethat...Itisnotanoverstatement/exaggerationthat...如何写出COMPLEXSTRUCTURE并保证正确？Tip6：动名词doingsth做主语，注意是单数，动词要用单三形式：练一练：1.学习英语是目前中国很多中学生生活的必不可少的一个部分。2.死记硬背（rote)不是学习英语的一个好办法。如何写出COMPLEXSTRUCTURE并保证正确？Tips7：使用含有状语从句的句型：原因状语从句（对应因果关系）：because/as/since；for（只能放在句尾，跟主句用逗号隔开）owingto（相对安全，积极消极原因均可）/thanksto（积极原因，接消极原因表讽刺意味）thefactthat…Onthegroundsthat/onaccountthat条件状语从句（对应条件关系）：if(basicform)Providing/providedthat…/ontheconditionthat…表目的或结果状语从句：sothat…如何写出COMPLEXSTRUCTURE并保证正确？Tip8：使用含有状语词组的句型：原因：becauseof/dueto/owingto/thanksto/onaccountof/asaconsequenceof否定条件：without/intheabsenceof表示目的：inana